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Naruto: One Eye Tenseigan
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Alternate Title: Naruto: One Eye to See
Another Reincarnation Naruto Story. (Slow Pace)
Spoiler: Tomaru’s presence brings a butterfly effect; Naruto does not learn Kage Bunshin, which causes him to lose his right hand when Team 7 first encounters Zabuza.
As a novice writer, I do not have sufficient experience in writing, and often I feel confused about how to construct sentences or develop ideas effectively. When I write, I tend to just pour out what is on my mind without considering the proper structure or grammar.
If you can look past these errors and recognize that every writer has an initial stage they must go through, perhaps you will find some value in the stories I present.
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Volume 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1
- 1 Chapter 1: A New Beginning 4 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2: Fragments of a Forgotten Life 1 months ago
- 3 Chapter 3: Tomaru Minakura 1 months ago
- 4 Chapter 4: Academy 1 months ago
- 5 Chapter 5: The Path of Improvement 1 months ago
- 6 Chapter 6: Understated Precision 1 months ago
- 7 Chapter 7: New Routine I 1 months ago
- 8 Chapter 8: New Routine II 1 months ago
- 9 Chapter 9: Beneath the Surface 1 months ago
- 10 Chapter 10: Echoes of the Past 1 months ago
- 11 Chapter 11: Sacred Chips and Teamwork 1 months ago
- 12 Chapter 12: Crawling Under the Skin 1 months ago
- 13 Chapter 13: Shadows in the Forest 1 months ago
- 14 Chapter 14: Shikamaru Was One of My Favorite Characters 1 months ago
- 15 Chapter 15: Into the Forest 1 months ago
- 16 Chapter 16: Harmonic Resonance 1 months ago
- 17 Chapter 17: The Calm Within 1 months ago
- 18 Chapter 18: The Unfinished Flame 1 months ago
- 19 Chapter 19: A Quiet Transformation 1 months ago
- 20 Chapter 20: Masters in Motion 1 months ago
- 21 Chapter 21: A Silent Influence 1 months ago
- 22 Chapter 22: Echoes of Harmony 1 months ago
- 23 Chapter 23: Fading Threads, Lasting Ties 1 months ago
- 24 Chapter 24: Graduation Day 1 months ago
- 25 Chapter 25: Team 2 1 months ago
- 26 Chapter 26: The First Test 1 months ago
- 27 Chapter 27: The Unstoppable Flow 1 months ago
- 28 Chapter 28: Teamwork 1 months ago
- 29 Chapter 29: Aftermath 1 months ago
- 30 Chapter 30: The Morning After 1 months ago
- 31 Chapter 31: Smoke and Strategy 1 months ago
- 32 Chapter 32: The First Official Mission 1 months ago
- 33 Chapter 33: A Masked Vision 1 months ago
- 34 Chapter 34: Konoha's Detection Barrier 1 months ago
- 35 Chapter 35: First Hunt 1 months ago
- 36 Chapter 36: Lessons in the Sunlight 1 months ago
- 37 Chapter 37: Warm-up Routine 1 months ago
- 38 Chapter 38: The Aftermath 1 months ago
- 39 Chapter 39: The Limit of Shadows 1 months ago
- 40 Chapter 40: Clash of Shadows 1 months ago
- 41 Chapter 41: The Hunt 1 months ago
- 42 Chapter 42: The Predator’s Test 1 months ago
- 43 Chapter 43: Bonds Forged in Battle 1 months ago
- 44 Chapter 44: Unspoken Dynamics 1 months ago
- 45 Chapter 45: Backup to Team 7 1 months ago
- 46 Chapter 46: Deflection and Retreat 29 days ago
- 47 Chapter 47: Shinobi’s Price 29 days ago
- 48 Chapter 48: Naruto 28 days ago
- 49 Chapter 49: Shifting Tides 27 days ago
- 50 Chapter 50: The Path of Control 27 days ago
- 51 Chapter 51: Struggling with Balance 26 days ago
- 52 Chapter 52: Zetsu 25 days ago
- 53 Chapter 53: A Silent Conqueror 24 days ago
- 54 Chapter 54: Silent Pursuit 23 days ago
- 55 Chapter 55: Ice and Steel 22 days ago
- 56 Chapter 56: The Quiet Challenge 20 days ago
- 57 Chapter 57: The Measure of Strength 20 days ago
- 58 Chapter 58: The Demon of the Hidden Mist 19 days ago
- 59 Chapter 59: Shadow and Light 18 days ago
- 60 Chapter 60: Lessons in Balance 17 days ago
- 61 Chapter 61: Rising Tides 16 days ago
- 62 Chapter 62: Water's Wrath, Lightning's Strike 15 days ago
- 63 Chapter 63: Tactics and Tenacity 15 days ago
- 64 Chapter 64: The Uninvited Visitor 14 days ago
- 65 Chapter 65: Gift of the Hermit Group Chakra 13 days ago
- 66 Chapter 66: The Burden of Immense Power 12 days ago
- 67 Chapter 67: Tsuna 11 days ago
- 68 Chapter 68: Watari Ninja 10 days ago
- 69 Chapter 69: Karin 9 days ago
- 70 Chapter 70: The New Face of Karin 8 days ago
- 71 Chapter 71: Iwa 5 days ago
- 72 Chapter 72: Takumi Village 5 days ago
- 73 Chapter 73: The Frozen Reward 4 days ago
- 74 Chapter 74: Bridge to Freedom 3 days ago
- 75 Chapter 75: Shadows of the Akatsuki 2 days ago
- 76 Chapter 76: The Will to Rise 1 days ago
Only 11 chapters so far and it’s been good and shows potential! Keep up the good work!