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Very interesting concept, but Author-sama...you've made your OC an Eldritch entity aswell as the container of a newborn Great One...I'm curious to see what side effects you give him cause of this. Will he become physically ill? Will he take on abnormal physical traits of the Great One?...Besides the eyes... ... ...Author-sama, you've gotten me waiting for more! Don't drop this story, please.
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Ver uy interesting I like the new dojustu idea 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 hopefully have a steady release rate but make sure to take care of urself
The choice of the setting is very good the idea of cthulu being a jinchuriki is somewhat a unique idea ExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExp
Very interesting concept, but Author-sama...you've made your OC an Eldritch entity aswell as the container of a newborn Great One...I'm curious to see what side effects you give him cause of this. Will he become physically ill? Will he take on abnormal physical traits of the Great One?...Besides the eyes... ... ...Author-sama, you've gotten me waiting for more! Don't drop this story, please.
Spoiler de révélation Ver uy interesting I like the new dojustu idea 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 hopefully have a steady release rate but make sure to take care of urself
The choice of the setting is very good the idea of cthulu being a jinchuriki is somewhat a unique idea ExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExp