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Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Polinema Polinema Polinema Polinema Polinema Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo
This novel based on Toriko gourmet journey. I recommend this book to read to everyone 💯. Already reread this book for more than 2 times already.
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The idea was great, but the execution is a bit lacking. It feels like the Mc is just skipping around The world without any real interaction or fun for him. The world of toriko is one of food, but the Mc is only getting stronger without much focus on the world. I would have loved to see an OP Mc, that travels the world in search for food, but I just don't get the feeling that the Mc realy like food that much, he just uses it to get stronger, which is kind of sad. All in all a nice story but it just does not gripp me.
4/5 writing easy to read and understand for people with english as 2nd language 3/5 its still early and Good read never release's enough chapters 4/5 not much story to go on at the moment we at CH57. 3/5 Not many Characters seen in story Main Character has his flaws but is no Idiot. 5/5 World since its pre existing. + Big toriko fan here ! > Manga not anime that was so bad and abrubtly ended with no Dignity. Keep up the Good work author dont let youre story Be crafted by comments and all the HAREM screaming pervs..
Really like how the story is going. Very enjoyable and entertaining. One of the only Toriko fanfics put there. Overall very good job. Will be waiting for more chapters.
Welp tried to read as far as I can. Most the chapters is only 1/2 written and the other 1/2 is status that is sometime just copy paste with a few addition. Sometime the status not even updated and copy and pasted and forgot to edit.
NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
First time I see a Toriko fanfic, MC got reincarnate to Toriko hundred years before the main plot so I doubt he'll meet up with the main cast anytime soon or even meet them at all. Regardless, I like it quite a bit, it's quite interesting, just curious how will he get sufficient food after going to other world outside of Toriko, cause of gourmet cell and all that.
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The idea of the story is decent plus its a little different, the grammars bad, but the main problem is he's 8, and the things he has done just dont make sense. Making a house, fighting giant beast, being alone for 2 yrs. He doesn't get the life experiences the characters from the system had he just gets the skills and the knowledge of how to train them. He should at least have a different personality at the end of the 2 yrs. But he's the same.
keep up the good work.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Polinema Polinema Polinema Polinema Polinema Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo
This novel based on Toriko gourmet journey. I recommend this book to read to everyone 💯. Already reread this book for more than 2 times already.
**** sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssssshit sssssssssssssss
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The idea was great, but the execution is a bit lacking. It feels like the Mc is just skipping around The world without any real interaction or fun for him. The world of toriko is one of food, but the Mc is only getting stronger without much focus on the world. I would have loved to see an OP Mc, that travels the world in search for food, but I just don't get the feeling that the Mc realy like food that much, he just uses it to get stronger, which is kind of sad. All in all a nice story but it just does not gripp me.
4/5 writing easy to read and understand for people with english as 2nd language 3/5 its still early and Good read never release's enough chapters 4/5 not much story to go on at the moment we at CH57. 3/5 Not many Characters seen in story Main Character has his flaws but is no Idiot. 5/5 World since its pre existing. + Big toriko fan here ! > Manga not anime that was so bad and abrubtly ended with no Dignity. Keep up the Good work author dont let youre story Be crafted by comments and all the HAREM screaming pervs..
Really like how the story is going. Very enjoyable and entertaining. One of the only Toriko fanfics put there. Overall very good job. Will be waiting for more chapters.
Welp tried to read as far as I can. Most the chapters is only 1/2 written and the other 1/2 is status that is sometime just copy paste with a few addition. Sometime the status not even updated and copy and pasted and forgot to edit.
NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
First time I see a Toriko fanfic, MC got reincarnate to Toriko hundred years before the main plot so I doubt he'll meet up with the main cast anytime soon or even meet them at all. Regardless, I like it quite a bit, it's quite interesting, just curious how will he get sufficient food after going to other world outside of Toriko, cause of gourmet cell and all that.
Spoiler de révélation Pqiquwtqrewqlkkjhhgfdsazxcvbbnmmbvxzasddfghhjklllppooiuytreewqqasdfghjklmnbbvvcxzzassddffghjjkklpoooiiuuyyytttreewwqqasssdfghhjkklmnbbvvcxzaasssfghhjkl
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳FINALLY SOMEONE IS DOING A FANFIC ON TORIKO WORLD🥳🥳🥳🤩🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
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The idea of the story is decent plus its a little different, the grammars bad, but the main problem is he's 8, and the things he has done just dont make sense. Making a house, fighting giant beast, being alone for 2 yrs. He doesn't get the life experiences the characters from the system had he just gets the skills and the knowledge of how to train them. He should at least have a different personality at the end of the 2 yrs. But he's the same.
keep up the good work.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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