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This book is good, The story has a sense of mystery from the very beginning which makes me want to read without even taking a break, I absolutely love it. Keep up with your good work, author
5 stars. Excellent writing, pure romance, and its worth the read. From the first chapter the book is captivating and the suspense makes it more unique, wanting to know what's going to happen at the end. The plot is good and the writer is very creative making each episodes full of suspense.. A very promising novel to read.. Thumbs up 😊
My goodness Finally I've waited so long for an update from this book Phoebe you're really doing a great job Keep up the good work The story is incredibly amazing I'll definitely recommend this book to everyone Gogo Phoebe Much love 😘
Yeet!!! Here comes my review!!! The beginning sure is capturing, hahaha. Before I knew It, I already finished the first chapter, nyahahaha. Your narration was very detailed and explained very well!!! Even though It's very detailed, I don't really feel that you're overfeeding the information and I'm sure the guys here didn't felt that too. Anyways, good book you have here, bro. Keep writing
Lovely story, I got hooked at the first chapter and still reading to find out more about Crystal and the Connors, I wish the author can be more descriptive about his characters it would make the story more active and readers can get to pick their favorite character. Rn I'm still holding onto Dylan. R,I,P Dylan Guy.
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I really love this book. It keeps me hooked. And the author really knows how to keep his readers glue to their screen. I love this novel. Please author keep updating more often.
This one got me hooked from the very first chap, the story is very well written binge reading the book so far and the story is so suspenseful which get's the author get hooked, the author did a great job in describing the scenarios! Great work! I hope you continue to update very often because the plot is so addicting!! I am gonna continue reading your work!!!
Dear Author, The storyline of your novel is very good and very captivating. Also the story development is in pace. It keeps one to stay stick to the coming chapters. You are really doing a fantastic job! Keep the hard work going on! Good Luck!
Oo GOD I'm starting to hate Sean now What has come over Crystal I know for a fact that she's going to regret what she's doing sooner or later I don't even know what Sean has install for her I don't want Dylan dead I'm really sad now 😣
I love this book so much I love the way things are going but OMG I don't want my Dylan to die Crystal please don't kill him. He still loves you so much. I however cannot bring myself to hate Sean and I don't don't know why Crystal is so possessed and the way the story is going, I don't even know who should have Crystal Whether prince charming*Sean* or Dylan I can't wait to see much from you Phoebe Much love 😘 You're my superstar Way to go
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This definitely leans more to action than romance. It's quite a good read. Although, there are several grammatical errors, but that is something you can improve right away. I think you could work more on the transitions of your scene? I got confused somewhere because of the lack of transitions. Please elaborate Crystal and Dylan's character background and I want to see their developments! Continue to be a good writer! I'm rooting for you!
You definitely know how to hook a reader. You start off nicely with all the mystery and a bit of a background of Dylan and Crystal. I love it! Plot wise, I have to commend you author. The mystery is just very engaging. Now, on your writing. Personally, I’m not a fan of long paragraph and I think a majority of readers online don’t either. So, if I may suggest, try cutting down your paragraph so that it’ll give an easier view. There are minor errors such as punctuation and typos. The arrangement of your sentence is sometimes off as well. Do re-check it bcos sometimes you just push everything and creates a very long sentence. Lastly, I think you need to pay attention to your diction. In the second chapter when you describe the cabin, you use “beautiful” far too many I think. However, I do love your simple way of describing the environment and the situation. It is very vivid and sharp, not verbose. Keep up the good work author! Your book is very promising and engaging. It just need a little editing. All in all, I applause for your hard work especially in writing a long chapter because I can’t do that 😭 i might hv to learn from you. I’ll be waiting on your review for my book ❤️
Wow! I clearly love the plot. I just hope that everything's gonna be alright with the girl. I would recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a bright and a dark side of a book! Great job, Author! P.S please support me on my novel
Wow! From the very start, you already caught my attention author. I love your characters' energy, the thrill is there. Overall, I love it and I recommend this story to everyone. Good job author! 🙃☺
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Reading just the first chapter stole my attention and hooked me to continue reading the novel. I see so much potential in the story. A few more edits and it will become a great masterpiece. The cliffhanger in each chapter leaves the reader so much puzzle making them to crave reading more to know what happens next. The mystery is killing me! Please write more author and give your reader the satisfaction they needed! Great job.
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Let me start by saying thank you. My friend recommended this book to me and said it would be nice, I doubted him but now I'm shocked. I don't read romance much, I can write it...But it's not my favorite. I like the characters, your style of writing, expressiveness, and detail you have given. I see you like lewis {from the first chapter}. This book was a nice read, I hope it continues.
Now, the book was good the first chapter gave a comforting yet suspenseful feel which continued into the next chapter. The chapters were long detailed and clearly well thought out, I'm glad we were able to get an good understanding of their marriage. The only problem I have with it is that Dylan seems to have mood swings. That apart it's a great book which I'd recommend. Nice work author.
So far I love the story line and the turn of event. This story is promising. It keeps me glueto my phone screen. Please try and update often. 👍👍
Wowww. This book should become a series...it keeps me on the edge of my seat every time... The unexpected twists, coupled with the beautiful storyline has got me completely immersed😍 Can't believe Dylan killed crystal😪 But I'm very eager to find out what next. Great job, Phoebe👍
I can visualize every single detail as if I'm living through it,you can actually feel the wave of emotions crashing over you. I love this book so much because of the suspense and twists at every turn, no words can describe how amazing this book is, I can't stop reading Crystal is my favorite character Totally in love with this book!!!
While I think the storyline is nice and I love the drama, there are some missing and wrong placements of punctuation marks here and there, but thats manageable.
This is a swap review. The story is spring is unusual. Actions are developing dynamically, at the very beginning there is a certain mystery. Romance. The author managed to convey the atmosphere of the couple. This is not my genre, but the text block is written smoothly.
I made the decision to edit my review. The novel seems to improve every chapter. The author updates frequently, so the readers won't be left behind. I have deleted my old review for I have seen an impressive improvement. I am a silent reader so I'm not fond of commenting per chapters. I like the plot, it became interesting since my last review. Well, since I ran out of power stones, I will have to donate tomorrow instead. As for the story development, it has a perfect pace. I have observed in the comments section that the author is willing to change the mistakes that his other readers have found. From a 3.8 rating, I will rate this up to 5.0 continue the hard work!!!
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The first chapter really captured me and what made me want to carry on reading. This is a very promising original novel. The plot is good and makes me look forward to what will happen next. Cheers, author! Keep up the good work!
Hi everyone, I'm the author of Hidden Edges. I'm currently working on producing more chapters every two days and hope to hear from you guys and ladies. If you have any comments or suggestions, please leave them here. I basically check this everyday. Thanks for all the encouragement It's sugar! ;). Much love for y'all.
Originally I was asked by the author to review swap, I usually don't do review swaps because I don't want to influence the integrity of the review. I decided to give this a read anyway and wow I'm glad I did. I'm super hooked on the story now. The mystery is really gripping and some of the scenes the author has painted are palpable. I'm very into the dark/horror romance and I'm super excited to see what happens! (Please give me more chapters. I'm dying for them!) The writing is descriptive, has some awkward/incorrect sentence structure and grammar occasionally but the author has the right idea. They know how to effectively paint a scene. The plot snowballs into exciting territory but I don't really feel like I really "know" the characters yet. Perhaps we'll discover more about them as the mystery unfolds. Overall... I love it!! Keep it coming, you just gained a new reader!
The first chapter was petty normal it started off as a wife doubting his husband. Thinking he cuckold her But it also immerse a person into it. He want to know what really happened! Than it suddenly changed to action. On the second chapter it changed to horror causing goosebumps to rise. Who is she talking to her husband or a spirit with malicious intent? And so the third chapter begins...tick....tock....tick...tock! Read for yourself xd.
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Going from 0 to 100 really quick!! 100? No, even beyond that!! On the first look at this novel, I figured it might be some everyday drama between a loving married couple, but fortunately, it is much greater than that. All the mysteries that raised within the first chapters had me really hooked that I'd keep reading until I figure out what is actually going on. The writing is of unmatched quality! You can say it delivers the scene to your mind in 4K!! The author really put a lot of effort in it and I suggest that anyone reading this review would go take a look at it! And, maybe even leave a review to encourage the author even more!!
Hey I'm Anointing The story line is amazing I'll give it a hundred ratings if I could. I can't wait for the author to release another shot I just hope the wonderful couple will be okay I love you Dylan and Crystal!
Quite the good novel. I love novels that have casual dialogue which make them so much more realistic. I find it hard to come across novels that have good pacing because a couple of them skip quite a lot of information and others go on and on about the smallest details yet this is just right. I wish all novels could pace the story in such a way. Only negative I would say is the upload schedule because most of the chapter were uploaded a year ago however it seems the updates have started once again so I will choose to believe in the author! If you're a new reader, there's no better time to start this novel than now. Good luck Author!
This book is good, The story has a sense of mystery from the very beginning which makes me want to read without even taking a break, I absolutely love it. Keep up with your good work, author
5 stars. Excellent writing, pure romance, and its worth the read. From the first chapter the book is captivating and the suspense makes it more unique, wanting to know what's going to happen at the end. The plot is good and the writer is very creative making each episodes full of suspense.. A very promising novel to read.. Thumbs up 😊
My goodness Finally I've waited so long for an update from this book Phoebe you're really doing a great job Keep up the good work The story is incredibly amazing I'll definitely recommend this book to everyone Gogo Phoebe Much love 😘
Yeet!!! Here comes my review!!! The beginning sure is capturing, hahaha. Before I knew It, I already finished the first chapter, nyahahaha. Your narration was very detailed and explained very well!!! Even though It's very detailed, I don't really feel that you're overfeeding the information and I'm sure the guys here didn't felt that too. Anyways, good book you have here, bro. Keep writing
Lovely story, I got hooked at the first chapter and still reading to find out more about Crystal and the Connors, I wish the author can be more descriptive about his characters it would make the story more active and readers can get to pick their favorite character. Rn I'm still holding onto Dylan. R,I,P Dylan Guy.
Spoiler de révélation I really love this book. It keeps me hooked. And the author really knows how to keep his readers glue to their screen. I love this novel. Please author keep updating more often.
This one got me hooked from the very first chap, the story is very well written binge reading the book so far and the story is so suspenseful which get's the author get hooked, the author did a great job in describing the scenarios! Great work! I hope you continue to update very often because the plot is so addicting!! I am gonna continue reading your work!!!
Dear Author, The storyline of your novel is very good and very captivating. Also the story development is in pace. It keeps one to stay stick to the coming chapters. You are really doing a fantastic job! Keep the hard work going on! Good Luck!
Oo GOD I'm starting to hate Sean now What has come over Crystal I know for a fact that she's going to regret what she's doing sooner or later I don't even know what Sean has install for her I don't want Dylan dead I'm really sad now 😣
I love this book so much I love the way things are going but OMG I don't want my Dylan to die Crystal please don't kill him. He still loves you so much. I however cannot bring myself to hate Sean and I don't don't know why Crystal is so possessed and the way the story is going, I don't even know who should have Crystal Whether prince charming*Sean* or Dylan I can't wait to see much from you Phoebe Much love 😘 You're my superstar Way to go
Spoiler de révélation This definitely leans more to action than romance. It's quite a good read. Although, there are several grammatical errors, but that is something you can improve right away. I think you could work more on the transitions of your scene? I got confused somewhere because of the lack of transitions. Please elaborate Crystal and Dylan's character background and I want to see their developments! Continue to be a good writer! I'm rooting for you!
You definitely know how to hook a reader. You start off nicely with all the mystery and a bit of a background of Dylan and Crystal. I love it! Plot wise, I have to commend you author. The mystery is just very engaging. Now, on your writing. Personally, I’m not a fan of long paragraph and I think a majority of readers online don’t either. So, if I may suggest, try cutting down your paragraph so that it’ll give an easier view. There are minor errors such as punctuation and typos. The arrangement of your sentence is sometimes off as well. Do re-check it bcos sometimes you just push everything and creates a very long sentence. Lastly, I think you need to pay attention to your diction. In the second chapter when you describe the cabin, you use “beautiful” far too many I think. However, I do love your simple way of describing the environment and the situation. It is very vivid and sharp, not verbose. Keep up the good work author! Your book is very promising and engaging. It just need a little editing. All in all, I applause for your hard work especially in writing a long chapter because I can’t do that 😭 i might hv to learn from you. I’ll be waiting on your review for my book ❤️
Wow! I clearly love the plot. I just hope that everything's gonna be alright with the girl. I would recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a bright and a dark side of a book! Great job, Author! P.S please support me on my novel
Wow! From the very start, you already caught my attention author. I love your characters' energy, the thrill is there. Overall, I love it and I recommend this story to everyone. Good job author! 🙃☺
Spoiler de révélation Reading just the first chapter stole my attention and hooked me to continue reading the novel. I see so much potential in the story. A few more edits and it will become a great masterpiece. The cliffhanger in each chapter leaves the reader so much puzzle making them to crave reading more to know what happens next. The mystery is killing me! Please write more author and give your reader the satisfaction they needed! Great job.
Spoiler de révélation Let me start by saying thank you. My friend recommended this book to me and said it would be nice, I doubted him but now I'm shocked. I don't read romance much, I can write it...But it's not my favorite. I like the characters, your style of writing, expressiveness, and detail you have given. I see you like lewis {from the first chapter}. This book was a nice read, I hope it continues.
Now, the book was good the first chapter gave a comforting yet suspenseful feel which continued into the next chapter. The chapters were long detailed and clearly well thought out, I'm glad we were able to get an good understanding of their marriage. The only problem I have with it is that Dylan seems to have mood swings. That apart it's a great book which I'd recommend. Nice work author.
So far I love the story line and the turn of event. This story is promising. It keeps me glueto my phone screen. Please try and update often. 👍👍
Wowww. This book should become a series...it keeps me on the edge of my seat every time... The unexpected twists, coupled with the beautiful storyline has got me completely immersed😍 Can't believe Dylan killed crystal😪 But I'm very eager to find out what next. Great job, Phoebe👍
I can visualize every single detail as if I'm living through it,you can actually feel the wave of emotions crashing over you. I love this book so much because of the suspense and twists at every turn, no words can describe how amazing this book is, I can't stop reading Crystal is my favorite character Totally in love with this book!!!
While I think the storyline is nice and I love the drama, there are some missing and wrong placements of punctuation marks here and there, but thats manageable.
This is a swap review. The story is spring is unusual. Actions are developing dynamically, at the very beginning there is a certain mystery. Romance. The author managed to convey the atmosphere of the couple. This is not my genre, but the text block is written smoothly.
I made the decision to edit my review. The novel seems to improve every chapter. The author updates frequently, so the readers won't be left behind. I have deleted my old review for I have seen an impressive improvement. I am a silent reader so I'm not fond of commenting per chapters. I like the plot, it became interesting since my last review. Well, since I ran out of power stones, I will have to donate tomorrow instead. As for the story development, it has a perfect pace. I have observed in the comments section that the author is willing to change the mistakes that his other readers have found. From a 3.8 rating, I will rate this up to 5.0 continue the hard work!!!
Spoiler de révélation The first chapter really captured me and what made me want to carry on reading. This is a very promising original novel. The plot is good and makes me look forward to what will happen next. Cheers, author! Keep up the good work!
Hi everyone, I'm the author of Hidden Edges. I'm currently working on producing more chapters every two days and hope to hear from you guys and ladies. If you have any comments or suggestions, please leave them here. I basically check this everyday. Thanks for all the encouragement It's sugar! ;). Much love for y'all.
Originally I was asked by the author to review swap, I usually don't do review swaps because I don't want to influence the integrity of the review. I decided to give this a read anyway and wow I'm glad I did. I'm super hooked on the story now. The mystery is really gripping and some of the scenes the author has painted are palpable. I'm very into the dark/horror romance and I'm super excited to see what happens! (Please give me more chapters. I'm dying for them!) The writing is descriptive, has some awkward/incorrect sentence structure and grammar occasionally but the author has the right idea. They know how to effectively paint a scene. The plot snowballs into exciting territory but I don't really feel like I really "know" the characters yet. Perhaps we'll discover more about them as the mystery unfolds. Overall... I love it!! Keep it coming, you just gained a new reader!
The first chapter was petty normal it started off as a wife doubting his husband. Thinking he cuckold her But it also immerse a person into it. He want to know what really happened! Than it suddenly changed to action. On the second chapter it changed to horror causing goosebumps to rise. Who is she talking to her husband or a spirit with malicious intent? And so the third chapter begins...tick....tock....tick...tock! Read for yourself xd.
Spoiler de révélation Going from 0 to 100 really quick!! 100? No, even beyond that!! On the first look at this novel, I figured it might be some everyday drama between a loving married couple, but fortunately, it is much greater than that. All the mysteries that raised within the first chapters had me really hooked that I'd keep reading until I figure out what is actually going on. The writing is of unmatched quality! You can say it delivers the scene to your mind in 4K!! The author really put a lot of effort in it and I suggest that anyone reading this review would go take a look at it! And, maybe even leave a review to encourage the author even more!!
Hey I'm Anointing The story line is amazing I'll give it a hundred ratings if I could. I can't wait for the author to release another shot I just hope the wonderful couple will be okay I love you Dylan and Crystal!
Quite the good novel. I love novels that have casual dialogue which make them so much more realistic. I find it hard to come across novels that have good pacing because a couple of them skip quite a lot of information and others go on and on about the smallest details yet this is just right. I wish all novels could pace the story in such a way. Only negative I would say is the upload schedule because most of the chapter were uploaded a year ago however it seems the updates have started once again so I will choose to believe in the author! If you're a new reader, there's no better time to start this novel than now. Good luck Author!