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I love when they incorporate our common sense into these Chinese stories, too bad it's not finished
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Muito bom, espero que o autor volte a escrever essa fanfic de novo ............................................................. .............................................................
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Thanks to the author for the good experience in reading this fanfic. I hope you find inspiration later to continue, as I see nothing wrong with this story.
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It is a good story that I want to keep reading sadly there is no update till today I don't know if you want to drop it, I can only respect your decision
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I liked it and loved it more, the story is incredible better than the original, the harem is forming very well the interactions between the two girls and the protoganist is incredible, and his personality doesn’t need to change, I highly recommend this novel I loved it so much
This fanfic is gooodd even if you guys havent red the original you would still love this. Honestly, this is much more relaxing than the original since the original was honestly a roller coaster of emotion. There, you would always find yourself stressed like there is always misunderstandings between the couples and the way the mc treat the other girls is bad in a way.
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lo digo por muchos que realmente leyeron la novela , porque debemos estar de acuerdo en que este deberia ser el original comparado con el otro con un mc que deja mal sabor de boca todo preferimos esta historia de como debio ser agradesco al autor por volver y espero que sigas escribiendo esta maravillosa obra de arte y gracias por quitarme el mal sabor de boca que me deja la novela original
The mc is overpowered but is controlled. The development is good and is noce to read. As a whole is a good fanfic just the update is the problem.
Really enjoyable read, good transitions between scenes and chapters, so a binge read of this fic wont be having you go back a few paragraphs or to the previous chapter to reorient yourself into the story. This is a fanfic of an already made story so the world background is an ez 5* but in my opinion, the changes made make the story easily understood for someone who hasn't read the original piece. Well developed interactions between the MC and others, smooth dialogue makes it not a slog to read through and makes them lifelike. overall:4.8 stars due to the slightly jank updates. Keep up the work mr. author, you're doing great.
Way better than the original. MC doesn't care about bs drama and does what should be done. Lin Ruoxi is not annoying but really cute and lovable here. Also mc doesn't go after every girl he sees unlike original Yang Chen. So far his harem contains Situ Rose, Lin Ruoxi and Jane ( should be joining soon ). Jingjing still haven't confessed but she is actively going after him. Overall great writing. Hope author San keeps it up and finish the novel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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I love when they incorporate our common sense into these Chinese stories, too bad it's not finished
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Muito bom, espero que o autor volte a escrever essa fanfic de novo ............................................................. .............................................................
Why did you stop writing ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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Thanks to the author for the good experience in reading this fanfic. I hope you find inspiration later to continue, as I see nothing wrong with this story.
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It is a good story that I want to keep reading sadly there is no update till today I don't know if you want to drop it, I can only respect your decision
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I liked it and loved it more, the story is incredible better than the original, the harem is forming very well the interactions between the two girls and the protoganist is incredible, and his personality doesn’t need to change, I highly recommend this novel I loved it so much
This fanfic is gooodd even if you guys havent red the original you would still love this. Honestly, this is much more relaxing than the original since the original was honestly a roller coaster of emotion. There, you would always find yourself stressed like there is always misunderstandings between the couples and the way the mc treat the other girls is bad in a way.
Jsjsjsjs jsjsjsjs mənə demədi ki, gələcəkdə niyə qoyduğunu bilmirəm, səni göndərdiyimi və müəllimdən ona göndərdiyimi unutma, səhər nə biabır oldum
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lo digo por muchos que realmente leyeron la novela , porque debemos estar de acuerdo en que este deberia ser el original comparado con el otro con un mc que deja mal sabor de boca todo preferimos esta historia de como debio ser agradesco al autor por volver y espero que sigas escribiendo esta maravillosa obra de arte y gracias por quitarme el mal sabor de boca que me deja la novela original
The mc is overpowered but is controlled. The development is good and is noce to read. As a whole is a good fanfic just the update is the problem.
Really enjoyable read, good transitions between scenes and chapters, so a binge read of this fic wont be having you go back a few paragraphs or to the previous chapter to reorient yourself into the story. This is a fanfic of an already made story so the world background is an ez 5* but in my opinion, the changes made make the story easily understood for someone who hasn't read the original piece. Well developed interactions between the MC and others, smooth dialogue makes it not a slog to read through and makes them lifelike. overall:4.8 stars due to the slightly jank updates. Keep up the work mr. author, you're doing great.
Way better than the original. MC doesn't care about bs drama and does what should be done. Lin Ruoxi is not annoying but really cute and lovable here. Also mc doesn't go after every girl he sees unlike original Yang Chen. So far his harem contains Situ Rose, Lin Ruoxi and Jane ( should be joining soon ). Jingjing still haven't confessed but she is actively going after him. Overall great writing. Hope author San keeps it up and finish the novel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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