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its good so far as long as he wont do stupid thing like following the canon to the core, i have read one here who wants to follow the canon to extreme length, the pairing at that fanfic is with mikoto and that author wants mikoto to be the bride of the leader of the uchiha so itachi will be born, and the MC is willing to be NTR'ed just to follow the canon, i know the author change it because he lost a lot of reader at that time and he term it the ntr rebelion pls dont follow his footsteps
2 - 3 war, uh, possibly you go for Tsunade, Mikoto, Kushina, or all, I don't know. it only develops romance well. I'm in. Wise choice with the Mangekyo. It is OP, but it will take effort to get there and increase your farm (Use translator from Latin Spanish to English)
This is a very interesting idea. And I'm thinking that at the moment it is well implemented. I really want the author to continue in the same vein. I really liked his work. P.s. I don’t know English and I write through a translator
its good so far as long as he wont do stupid thing like following the canon to the core, i have read one here who wants to follow the canon to extreme length, the pairing at that fanfic is with mikoto and that author wants mikoto to be the bride of the leader of the uchiha so itachi will be born, and the MC is willing to be NTR'ed just to follow the canon, i know the author change it because he lost a lot of reader at that time and he term it the ntr rebelion pls dont follow his footsteps
2 - 3 war, uh, possibly you go for Tsunade, Mikoto, Kushina, or all, I don't know. it only develops romance well. I'm in. Wise choice with the Mangekyo. It is OP, but it will take effort to get there and increase your farm (Use translator from Latin Spanish to English)
This is a very interesting idea. And I'm thinking that at the moment it is well implemented. I really want the author to continue in the same vein. I really liked his work. P.s. I don’t know English and I write through a translator