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12 decent chapters and then story goes downhill fast lol just becomes trash and the MC completely changes… it was a waste of time reading +20 chapters with the way the story went
ending was so satisfying i just can't explain . only this did the justice to Itachi . and now he is the hokage. novel has good comedy that keeps me continue . i mean if someone is reincarnated in Naruto then there should have some real fun in it. first few chapters are serious enough . ( i didn't pay much attention to first few chapters , but i think they are not good enough) . there are good character designs at least MC has plan for futures. mc is twins of sasuke. i hope now itachi is healthy hokage ( with sympathy and awe of public ) , he will become more powerful . also one star for Update stability ( you dropped it)
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Gosto dessas fanfics que tem o protagonista malandro, muito melhor do que as fanfics com MC emo ou que pensa com o pau, recomendo que leiam liam
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Wonderful novel! A fresh take on the naruto fanfic path, he is reborn as sasuke’s twin and becomes OP through semi logical means and achieves kage level quite easily But even then, it is very interesting as this AU has some new ideas like an evil Hiruzen! This seems like a harem which makes sense given what the MC’s situation is (reviving dead clan)
Boy oh boy your fan fic is one of the best and this fan fic although mc is op like quite op af but the storyline and plot is very good it’s like comedy but with a serious thought for the story. Anyone should read thisbif you like fan fic, the mizuki one is also great as the first fan fic i ever read that explain talk nonjutsu as ninshu ahhahaha 🤣 Author you did a fantastic job, believe me just don’t rush the storyline because yknow your fan fic is the best!!
This is one of the best Naruto fanfiction I have read . keep the good work [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
writing - readable 5 ⭐ story - idk what to write here but i like this fanfic so 5 ⭐ character - best Mc Smart+Manipulate sometimes updating - i wanna give this 4 due to only 50 chap but i like this 5 ⭐ world - idk what to write here but 5 ⭐ thank for this fanfic author 🗿
Very nice........................................,:,:*:?:?:*:*:*:*:*:*"*:* k m j n j k j m m n ncn ,:,:,:,:*:*:*:*:*:&:&:&:*:&:*:*:*:*:*:,:&"&"&"&:&"&"&"&"&"<"&"&"&";";";";",:,";",";",";";";";";";";";",",";"&"^";"^"^"<"&"&"&"<"&"&$&"&"&"&"&"&"&:&:&"&"&"&"&:&:&:&"&
Hi author, you have an amazing novel please keep writing and we'd support you until the end.................................................
A fanfic where the protagonist plans to be more than just a pawn. It's interesting to see Hiruzen as a villain and not a kind old man; also the construction of the other characters is very nice to read. If there is something negative, it is that the author writes 3 fanfic at the same time. I would suggest that a single fanfic be your priority to upload the chapters, the remaining 2 fanfics continue to accumulate chapters and then publish them.
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Don't waste time reading reviews, it's one of the best. There are some minor flaws here and there but it's preety enjoyable at the end of day.
One of the better Naruto fanfiction's I have read in recent memory, the author is very aware of what is canon to the Universe including some obscure details that other authors either ignore or are unaware about. The quality of the writting is very good when compared to other stories, very few mistakes or errors. I just binge read this so concerining update situation I am pretty unaware, the only thing I can go off on is the chapters section and seeing the timing between chapters, which seems to fall between two to four days which is incredibly stable when compared to some other fics. Story Development is smooth, it doesn't feel too fast nor too slow and has a decent balance between personal character scenes and plot/action driven scenes. The characte Design is pretty flushed out, without going into spoilers the MC actually feels like a person instead of some sort of template self insert who rarely makes mistakes, he plans and execute his plans with only minor issues popping up everynow and then but nothing unreasonable. As said at the start the author as a very good understanding of the Naruto world and you can see that in how the story is written.
honestly these is my favorite from all your book's just hope we could get daily uploads but nothing ever goes as planned in these a cursed world but ┐(￣ー￣)┌ whatever still love what you do keep it up 💪
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It's the first time that I gave a story a full 5 stars. I personally love this story and cannot wait to see what happens in the next chapters. It doesn't even bother me that I have no clue who the love interest is, usually it does! You are doing a lovely job, author! :)
not bad, the plot is interesting and comprehensive, not rushed, not slow, my only cons is the use of Genjutsu to become stronger, if it was about physical skills, I could swallow, after all, it would be like shadow boxing, but ninjutsu? na… in the end, it became an AI chip, it just doesn't have the name, it would be much better if you just had him reborn with an AI chip directly, his story wouldn't have such a big hole, but still, you can swallow it .
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I liked how the protagonist is low keyed in becoming a powerful ninja. My first time reading a fanfic using genjutsu for quality and efficient training.👍😊
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A good book with a new showing of how a Uchiha can get stronger while not grafting himself with first hokage cells.
you really had me going there thinking you are going to have the MC kill Sasuke and the evolution path you have is one of the best creative ideas I have seen in a Naruto fanfiction in years.
Spoiler de révélation
Too many gritty realistic fics out there, world needs a moment to breathe. You can turn off your brain and go for this, it certainly has meanings that are hidden behind the lines, but can be ignored anyway if that's not your thing. Everyone wins. Except you Sakura. You lose.
12 decent chapters and then story goes downhill fast lol just becomes trash and the MC completely changes… it was a waste of time reading +20 chapters with the way the story went
ending was so satisfying i just can't explain . only this did the justice to Itachi . and now he is the hokage. novel has good comedy that keeps me continue . i mean if someone is reincarnated in Naruto then there should have some real fun in it. first few chapters are serious enough . ( i didn't pay much attention to first few chapters , but i think they are not good enough) . there are good character designs at least MC has plan for futures. mc is twins of sasuke. i hope now itachi is healthy hokage ( with sympathy and awe of public ) , he will become more powerful . also one star for Update stability ( you dropped it)
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Gosto dessas fanfics que tem o protagonista malandro, muito melhor do que as fanfics com MC emo ou que pensa com o pau, recomendo que leiam liam
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Wonderful novel! A fresh take on the naruto fanfic path, he is reborn as sasuke’s twin and becomes OP through semi logical means and achieves kage level quite easily But even then, it is very interesting as this AU has some new ideas like an evil Hiruzen! This seems like a harem which makes sense given what the MC’s situation is (reviving dead clan)
Boy oh boy your fan fic is one of the best and this fan fic although mc is op like quite op af but the storyline and plot is very good it’s like comedy but with a serious thought for the story. Anyone should read thisbif you like fan fic, the mizuki one is also great as the first fan fic i ever read that explain talk nonjutsu as ninshu ahhahaha 🤣 Author you did a fantastic job, believe me just don’t rush the storyline because yknow your fan fic is the best!!
This is one of the best Naruto fanfiction I have read . keep the good work [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
writing - readable 5 ⭐ story - idk what to write here but i like this fanfic so 5 ⭐ character - best Mc Smart+Manipulate sometimes updating - i wanna give this 4 due to only 50 chap but i like this 5 ⭐ world - idk what to write here but 5 ⭐ thank for this fanfic author 🗿
Very nice........................................,:,:*:?:?:*:*:*:*:*:*"*:* k m j n j k j m m n ncn ,:,:,:,:*:*:*:*:*:&:&:&:*:&:*:*:*:*:*:,:&"&"&"&:&"&"&"&"&"<"&"&"&";";";";",:,";",";",";";";";";";";";",",";"&"^";"^"^"<"&"&"&"<"&"&$&"&"&"&"&"&"&:&:&"&"&"&"&:&:&:&"&
Hi author, you have an amazing novel please keep writing and we'd support you until the end.................................................
A fanfic where the protagonist plans to be more than just a pawn. It's interesting to see Hiruzen as a villain and not a kind old man; also the construction of the other characters is very nice to read. If there is something negative, it is that the author writes 3 fanfic at the same time. I would suggest that a single fanfic be your priority to upload the chapters, the remaining 2 fanfics continue to accumulate chapters and then publish them.
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Don't waste time reading reviews, it's one of the best. There are some minor flaws here and there but it's preety enjoyable at the end of day.
One of the better Naruto fanfiction's I have read in recent memory, the author is very aware of what is canon to the Universe including some obscure details that other authors either ignore or are unaware about. The quality of the writting is very good when compared to other stories, very few mistakes or errors. I just binge read this so concerining update situation I am pretty unaware, the only thing I can go off on is the chapters section and seeing the timing between chapters, which seems to fall between two to four days which is incredibly stable when compared to some other fics. Story Development is smooth, it doesn't feel too fast nor too slow and has a decent balance between personal character scenes and plot/action driven scenes. The characte Design is pretty flushed out, without going into spoilers the MC actually feels like a person instead of some sort of template self insert who rarely makes mistakes, he plans and execute his plans with only minor issues popping up everynow and then but nothing unreasonable. As said at the start the author as a very good understanding of the Naruto world and you can see that in how the story is written.
honestly these is my favorite from all your book's just hope we could get daily uploads but nothing ever goes as planned in these a cursed world but ┐(￣ー￣)┌ whatever still love what you do keep it up 💪
------------------------------------------------------------------Very nice and fun to read -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It's the first time that I gave a story a full 5 stars. I personally love this story and cannot wait to see what happens in the next chapters. It doesn't even bother me that I have no clue who the love interest is, usually it does! You are doing a lovely job, author! :)
not bad, the plot is interesting and comprehensive, not rushed, not slow, my only cons is the use of Genjutsu to become stronger, if it was about physical skills, I could swallow, after all, it would be like shadow boxing, but ninjutsu? na… in the end, it became an AI chip, it just doesn't have the name, it would be much better if you just had him reborn with an AI chip directly, his story wouldn't have such a big hole, but still, you can swallow it .
Spoiler de révélation ............................................................................................................................................ pretty good.
I liked how the protagonist is low keyed in becoming a powerful ninja. My first time reading a fanfic using genjutsu for quality and efficient training.👍😊
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A good book with a new showing of how a Uchiha can get stronger while not grafting himself with first hokage cells.
you really had me going there thinking you are going to have the MC kill Sasuke and the evolution path you have is one of the best creative ideas I have seen in a Naruto fanfiction in years.
Spoiler de révélation
Too many gritty realistic fics out there, world needs a moment to breathe. You can turn off your brain and go for this, it certainly has meanings that are hidden behind the lines, but can be ignored anyway if that's not your thing. Everyone wins. Except you Sakura. You lose.