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Any hope of continuing this soon? (hopefully soon) ………………………………………………………….:::………………..……………………….;;,..,.:,::.:..;,.;,.…. Thanks ……………. ……………………
Bro, I hope things go well for you and soon you can upload chapters of your novels again, since they really are very good. ………………………………………………………………:..
anyone can recommend book that has the same plot like this? .....................................................................
The story has an amazing overall quality, while some words, phrases, and spelling may be off it is overwritten by the realism of the MC towards the girls of the story.
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The character and plot development is on point. You get a 18r novel which fulfills both the rated part and the story part.. the novel doesn't get any boring chapters and every chapter doesn't get predictable so it keeps you interested and ready, willing to read for more
Autor-san, extraño tu novela... por que no has publicado ;-;. Aunque si esta buena y me gusta muchisimo, la personalidad del mc, lo inteligente y manipulador que puede ser. Es excelente
Autor-san, quiero mas capitulos, ando esperando desde hace 4 meses por mas capitulos. Por fsvor autor-san no seas tan cruel, publica mas de este hermoso libro 🤩
easily one of my favorite guilty pleasure reads, I really love the characters and the concept. definitely not for everyone but it's definitely something I enjoy alot. hope the chapters start coming out again.
it's been 3 months since last update, story izzz gooood but the stability of updates thoooo, i want more chapters pls 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Me encanta esta historia, tiene un desarrollo muy fluido y los personajes no son muy vacíos, tienen un contexto y se adaptan bien a la historia.
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Ella x Carl ..................................................................................................................................
Mans started uploading again holy guacomole thats hawt thier goes my weekend!!!😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🙇🏽seriously good book though has an actual reason why The mc is the way he is and why hes doing suck a thing
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the story is honestly good, well developped. the characters are pretty realistic. it's really ia a very good story. i really like it. fell on it a year ago, read everything the same night and now i'm praying everynight for the author so he/she can finish it. had me hooked
Any hope of continuing this soon? (hopefully soon) ………………………………………………………….:::………………..……………………….;;,..,.:,::.:..;,.;,.…. Thanks ……………. ……………………
Bro, I hope things go well for you and soon you can upload chapters of your novels again, since they really are very good. ………………………………………………………………:..
anyone can recommend book that has the same plot like this? .....................................................................
The story has an amazing overall quality, while some words, phrases, and spelling may be off it is overwritten by the realism of the MC towards the girls of the story.
good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
The character and plot development is on point. You get a 18r novel which fulfills both the rated part and the story part.. the novel doesn't get any boring chapters and every chapter doesn't get predictable so it keeps you interested and ready, willing to read for more
Autor-san, extraño tu novela... por que no has publicado ;-;. Aunque si esta buena y me gusta muchisimo, la personalidad del mc, lo inteligente y manipulador que puede ser. Es excelente
Autor-san, quiero mas capitulos, ando esperando desde hace 4 meses por mas capitulos. Por fsvor autor-san no seas tan cruel, publica mas de este hermoso libro 🤩
easily one of my favorite guilty pleasure reads, I really love the characters and the concept. definitely not for everyone but it's definitely something I enjoy alot. hope the chapters start coming out again.
it's been 3 months since last update, story izzz gooood but the stability of updates thoooo, i want more chapters pls 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Me encanta esta historia, tiene un desarrollo muy fluido y los personajes no son muy vacíos, tienen un contexto y se adaptan bien a la historia.
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Spoiler de révélation Ella x Carl ..................................................................................................................................
Mans started uploading again holy guacomole thats hawt thier goes my weekend!!!😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🙇🏽seriously good book though has an actual reason why The mc is the way he is and why hes doing suck a thing
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the story is honestly good, well developped. the characters are pretty realistic. it's really ia a very good story. i really like it. fell on it a year ago, read everything the same night and now i'm praying everynight for the author so he/she can finish it. had me hooked