Synopsis
A Dragon ball fan Traveling the multiverse as Jaune arc with a couple of wishes
This is just for shits and giggles it's probably trash.
Harem.
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Am I supposed to do this? I see a lot of people doing this with almost every book I see. Idk but Ima copy them. I am joining the shameless author club, I am very shameless in giving my self five stars, I posted this review at 21 chapters, heh, anyway, I hope you like my book happy belated easter to you.
Keep up and don't drop, good job and thanks for your hard working, hope you write more chapters in future keep up and many thanks, good luck writing new chapters...
Ok story giving 5 stars but it should be 3-3.5 stars I do enjoy this fanfic hoping to increase updates and edit and combine chapters because 1 of your chapters are at most half of other authors! Thanks!👍
Reading this story is like reading a summary of a book. It looks nice having so many chapters but in fact, if you combine 3-4 chapters you will get any other regular author's chapter length. There is potential and I will say the grammar and sentence structure are pretty good but the way it is now it just overall irritates me. Plus there is nothing original in this story, I just finished chapter 21 and the story has not deviated at all. If the mc did not exist nothing would have been different other minor things.