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The novel is well written and focus mainly on the leads characters while side stories are there for overall view, not too side tracked. This makes reading enjoyable. The conflict is mainly on the emotions of the FL which was beautifully captured. ML is the main antagonist in the beginning- trouble seeing the bigger picture due to male ego. Admire the perseverance of FL despite a young age and salute her decision concerning her life thereafter. Author may face numerous writer's block while writing this heart reaching story. All the best author. I created my own ending to provide the closure[img=recommend]
The writing is good bit I am disspointed that the writer disgrace woman's dignity with the word of love. It is sad that the writer made the FL permissive towards cheating. Love shouldn't be out aside your self pride. He is a jerk so I really hope that the FL end with other man. Now I am afraid to read this authir other books who seems to exalt abusive brhavoour towards woman.
The plot was good at the beginning now the author is lagging the story. Seriously I lost interest in this novel. The updates are like once in a blue moon. Who's waiting for that long the author can't even update on regular time
Author, Please do read my comment and if time permits, I would expect you to reply. Hello Author 😺 I've actually read all your books and I'm completely in love with the way you write 😍 I need to let you know that, I'm a huge fan of your book. I actually mean huge..cuz I weigh 65 kg😂😂 Author, I've been wanting to step out of Webnovel and take some rest by not reading anything, but this book, keeps me hooked. Honestly, every two days, I open and check for your updates😁😝 I'm going to become a doctor. I wanna start college with a peaceful mind and better will power, but honestly waiting for your updates, opening the app every now and then, makes me realise that I'm distracted 👉👈 I just wanna be sincere and responsible to my future patients as a result to actually take a short break to settle my plans and ambitions. 😇😊 Therefore,I need to know the situations of my favorite books and authors, I know gotta wait for the happy endings, cuz nothing is easy. 🤗🤗 I wanna be light hearted, so that evn if I take a break while your still updating, I would know that one of my treasured book would be completed by the time I come back 🙈🙈 I adore your love and commitment for this book and to all your readers. I really respect you a big time for it 🙆💖 I know your probably taking a break Or maybe just writing the coming chapters for us Or maybe facing a problem. I wanna let you know that all your readers are all ears for it, we would like to know about you too 😇😇 But, I sincerely request you to let all of us know about your plans for this book. It would keep us calm and let us wait patiently for it💖💖 I would like to know about 1. The number of chapters left for this book? 2. How many months would you be taking to complete this book? So that, I can decide whether to take a short break and check later or stay checking the app like now and therefore change my schedule accordingly 🥺🥺 I actually wanna be there till the Ending of this Book, like been there since when it's synopsis was out and Also throughout the journey of Dale and Jacqueline, which I'm expecting would be your New Book 😝😁 Lots and lots of Love from India 🇮🇳 Lots and lots of love for Sam and Luke too 💕💕 I am honestly expecting a reply from you our Dear Author. It was hard stepping out and telling my problem out here, but I still did it. Therefore, I really hope you would give a thought about my request and give me a reply regarding it 👉👈🥺
it's a really nice story with a lot of content in it. The author did a best job on this. I hope that we can get all these stories free somewhere.
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I have to say, the ML is trash. I don't care if he regrets it, in my eyes there is no redemption for him. I'm hoping that they don't end up together.
I love this story can't wait for another please author if you have any place that you have more of your story's please do tell well it was super nice.among all of them I love this one more.it made me so emotional keep it up author you are doing a great job
I really enjoy reading this book , it broke my heart and 😭 so far. great job author And I’m excited to read more .
It's truly heartbreaking. Best romance for pms, kidding, but seriously, it's draw out all my tears. We can feel the pain with no exaggerated scene. It was natural and real as if you can see them happen before you. So, wanna join the journey?
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Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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This story sucks!!! And no, not in a negative way either. I can’t seem to put it down. Sam reminds me of me of getting whatever she wants because she goes after it... she reminds me of when I didnt give up on the person I love no matter how many times it was clear he didnt love me back... so it sucks to be reminded but I am stronger than before and because of my children, I am a better version of myself... Cant wait to finish the story!!! See where Sam’s story leads her to!!!
This novel is awesome,it's heartbreaking and it's freaking me out wht happen next,,👍for the author.i cmt wait to know wht the heading of this novel
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Enjoy reading this book I wish had update sooner but I understand if the author is busy- looking forward to the next release keep up the good work
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So glad you got to write more chapters -really enjoying this book - hope everything is well with you - continue to bring us more chapters - looking forward to next release
Please continue this book. Even it made so emotional while reading but I loved this book. I really really do love this book. I want to read until the end of the journey of this couple. I hope the hurtful past it made them matured enough and better person in the future. I know is not easy to forgive and forget.but to forgive and to let go is one way to make yourself free from all the heartaches. I hope don't leave us hanging author, please continue what you have started. 👍
Please author continue to update this story. I really love it even it made me cry a lot. My mother scolded me for emptying the tissue box always😢. But anyway author you did the great job. I have a mixed emotion reading your novel
I don't know what to say about the ML ...He isn't a responsible person and at the same time a jerk for what he did the FL even she was wrong at first but he shouldn't have delt with her like that especially when she was pregnant and now what he wants to get her back 😅😅 I really don't want that to happen maybe she could have forgiven him when he did that to her when she was pregnant but after that he gave her hope then crushed her heart all over again....Can't wait for more
i like the story. i hoping that samantha will have its revengebtowards luke by means of giving him a full jealousy with her new boyfriend.
this is a very exiciting story of Sam and Luke..it seems like a real life love and hate story. Once you start to read it you will not stop to move to the next chapters. im so in love with it..🥰
This book is amazing.. .. .. .. .... .but, uploading of chapter takes a lot time.... . But Iove ❤😘 This book very much.. ..you're amazing author, but plzzz update
I am enjoying this book and can’t wait for the next chapters - it’s really getting interesting- I really feel her sadness, loneliness and disappointment
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Actually we always have a different point of view from the same situation. We will curse what Samanta did as a b*tchy one... But in this novel, I feel so sorry for her. She made a huge mistake by being impulsive. I really want to know her future with Jack. What a good novel. Thanks, Author. Please keep writing and stay healthy....
I hope updates will come soon. i cannot wait for additional chapter to come. ... sam is soooo forgiving marters, loving but somehow stupid too.
dear author,,I really love this novel,please it's been 3months were waiting for the update,,dnt let us wait any longer 😁..to all new on this apps.. please try to read all of this beloved author,,all of her works is beautiful,,I'm hoping to read more books from u..lots of love 😘😘😘
The novel is well written and focus mainly on the leads characters while side stories are there for overall view, not too side tracked. This makes reading enjoyable. The conflict is mainly on the emotions of the FL which was beautifully captured. ML is the main antagonist in the beginning- trouble seeing the bigger picture due to male ego. Admire the perseverance of FL despite a young age and salute her decision concerning her life thereafter. Author may face numerous writer's block while writing this heart reaching story. All the best author. I created my own ending to provide the closure[img=recommend]
The writing is good bit I am disspointed that the writer disgrace woman's dignity with the word of love. It is sad that the writer made the FL permissive towards cheating. Love shouldn't be out aside your self pride. He is a jerk so I really hope that the FL end with other man. Now I am afraid to read this authir other books who seems to exalt abusive brhavoour towards woman.
The plot was good at the beginning now the author is lagging the story. Seriously I lost interest in this novel. The updates are like once in a blue moon. Who's waiting for that long the author can't even update on regular time
Author, Please do read my comment and if time permits, I would expect you to reply. Hello Author 😺 I've actually read all your books and I'm completely in love with the way you write 😍 I need to let you know that, I'm a huge fan of your book. I actually mean huge..cuz I weigh 65 kg😂😂 Author, I've been wanting to step out of Webnovel and take some rest by not reading anything, but this book, keeps me hooked. Honestly, every two days, I open and check for your updates😁😝 I'm going to become a doctor. I wanna start college with a peaceful mind and better will power, but honestly waiting for your updates, opening the app every now and then, makes me realise that I'm distracted 👉👈 I just wanna be sincere and responsible to my future patients as a result to actually take a short break to settle my plans and ambitions. 😇😊 Therefore,I need to know the situations of my favorite books and authors, I know gotta wait for the happy endings, cuz nothing is easy. 🤗🤗 I wanna be light hearted, so that evn if I take a break while your still updating, I would know that one of my treasured book would be completed by the time I come back 🙈🙈 I adore your love and commitment for this book and to all your readers. I really respect you a big time for it 🙆💖 I know your probably taking a break Or maybe just writing the coming chapters for us Or maybe facing a problem. I wanna let you know that all your readers are all ears for it, we would like to know about you too 😇😇 But, I sincerely request you to let all of us know about your plans for this book. It would keep us calm and let us wait patiently for it💖💖 I would like to know about 1. The number of chapters left for this book? 2. How many months would you be taking to complete this book? So that, I can decide whether to take a short break and check later or stay checking the app like now and therefore change my schedule accordingly 🥺🥺 I actually wanna be there till the Ending of this Book, like been there since when it's synopsis was out and Also throughout the journey of Dale and Jacqueline, which I'm expecting would be your New Book 😝😁 Lots and lots of Love from India 🇮🇳 Lots and lots of love for Sam and Luke too 💕💕 I am honestly expecting a reply from you our Dear Author. It was hard stepping out and telling my problem out here, but I still did it. Therefore, I really hope you would give a thought about my request and give me a reply regarding it 👉👈🥺
it's a really nice story with a lot of content in it. The author did a best job on this. I hope that we can get all these stories free somewhere.
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I have to say, the ML is trash. I don't care if he regrets it, in my eyes there is no redemption for him. I'm hoping that they don't end up together.
I love this story can't wait for another please author if you have any place that you have more of your story's please do tell well it was super nice.among all of them I love this one more.it made me so emotional keep it up author you are doing a great job
I really enjoy reading this book , it broke my heart and 😭 so far. great job author And I’m excited to read more .
It's truly heartbreaking. Best romance for pms, kidding, but seriously, it's draw out all my tears. We can feel the pain with no exaggerated scene. It was natural and real as if you can see them happen before you. So, wanna join the journey?
👨👩👦👨👩👦👨👩👦💖💖💖👨👩👦👨👩👦👨👩👦 💝💝💝👩❤️👩👩❤️👩👩❤️👩💝💝💝 👨❤️👨👨❤️👨👨❤️👨💝💝💝👨❤️👨👨❤️👨👨❤️👨
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Spoiler de révélation This story sucks!!! And no, not in a negative way either. I can’t seem to put it down. Sam reminds me of me of getting whatever she wants because she goes after it... she reminds me of when I didnt give up on the person I love no matter how many times it was clear he didnt love me back... so it sucks to be reminded but I am stronger than before and because of my children, I am a better version of myself... Cant wait to finish the story!!! See where Sam’s story leads her to!!!
This novel is awesome,it's heartbreaking and it's freaking me out wht happen next,,👍for the author.i cmt wait to know wht the heading of this novel
😳😍🌹👍😭😭🤣🤣❤️❤️😆😆😆😘😘😆❤️🤣🤣🤣😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭👍👍🌹🌹😍😳😳😳😳😍🌹🌹🌹👍👍👍😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😭😭👍🌹🌹
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Enjoy reading this book I wish had update sooner but I understand if the author is busy- looking forward to the next release keep up the good work
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So glad you got to write more chapters -really enjoying this book - hope everything is well with you - continue to bring us more chapters - looking forward to next release
Please continue this book. Even it made so emotional while reading but I loved this book. I really really do love this book. I want to read until the end of the journey of this couple. I hope the hurtful past it made them matured enough and better person in the future. I know is not easy to forgive and forget.but to forgive and to let go is one way to make yourself free from all the heartaches. I hope don't leave us hanging author, please continue what you have started. 👍
Please author continue to update this story. I really love it even it made me cry a lot. My mother scolded me for emptying the tissue box always😢. But anyway author you did the great job. I have a mixed emotion reading your novel
I don't know what to say about the ML ...He isn't a responsible person and at the same time a jerk for what he did the FL even she was wrong at first but he shouldn't have delt with her like that especially when she was pregnant and now what he wants to get her back 😅😅 I really don't want that to happen maybe she could have forgiven him when he did that to her when she was pregnant but after that he gave her hope then crushed her heart all over again....Can't wait for more
i like the story. i hoping that samantha will have its revengebtowards luke by means of giving him a full jealousy with her new boyfriend.
this is a very exiciting story of Sam and Luke..it seems like a real life love and hate story. Once you start to read it you will not stop to move to the next chapters. im so in love with it..🥰
This book is amazing.. .. .. .. .... .but, uploading of chapter takes a lot time.... . But Iove ❤😘 This book very much.. ..you're amazing author, but plzzz update
I am enjoying this book and can’t wait for the next chapters - it’s really getting interesting- I really feel her sadness, loneliness and disappointment
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Spoiler de révélation Actually we always have a different point of view from the same situation. We will curse what Samanta did as a b*tchy one... But in this novel, I feel so sorry for her. She made a huge mistake by being impulsive. I really want to know her future with Jack. What a good novel. Thanks, Author. Please keep writing and stay healthy....
I hope updates will come soon. i cannot wait for additional chapter to come. ... sam is soooo forgiving marters, loving but somehow stupid too.
dear author,,I really love this novel,please it's been 3months were waiting for the update,,dnt let us wait any longer 😁..to all new on this apps.. please try to read all of this beloved author,,all of her works is beautiful,,I'm hoping to read more books from u..lots of love 😘😘😘