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Had potential but wow this story went down the drain fast.... MC finds out his “mother” isnt his mother but a friend of his father and she also is the one who killed his mother... then we find out he cant meet his father because he is weak and then almsot immediately after wr find out his childhood friend who is weaker than him is now his fathers disciple.... idk what happened to this story to go this route but it made this story a 2/5
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Gooooooddddd........ Amazing.........💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
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I'm just not a fan of anything this novel brings to the table. Just doesn't catch me in any way.............................................
The idea of this story has a good amount of potential from what I've read so far though its got two chapters so far the amount of info in these chapters makes it worth reading. This is the first story and that I have written a review on in a while hope others give this fanfic a read its seams quite different than regular ones posted about douluo dalu in ages.
It is besides partner then 1 star حهيفراجحلؤهowowjggjwurs0ursrsr70dpurdur0ddd07d70d07rs7rsp7td7rd7td7td0outuxt9u9tx0yixit9xutxutx à est la +=6₩@0₩_!₩€=@₩€=@₩=€@₩€4#₩€/#7/#/€#₩/€#₩/€-0--=-----=€@=€--=7
Had potential but wow this story went down the drain fast.... MC finds out his “mother” isnt his mother but a friend of his father and she also is the one who killed his mother... then we find out he cant meet his father because he is weak and then almsot immediately after wr find out his childhood friend who is weaker than him is now his fathers disciple.... idk what happened to this story to go this route but it made this story a 2/5
Spoiler de révélation Gooooooddddd........ Amazing.........💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
الااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااا
Spoiler de révélation I'm just not a fan of anything this novel brings to the table. Just doesn't catch me in any way.............................................
The idea of this story has a good amount of potential from what I've read so far though its got two chapters so far the amount of info in these chapters makes it worth reading. This is the first story and that I have written a review on in a while hope others give this fanfic a read its seams quite different than regular ones posted about douluo dalu in ages.
It is besides partner then 1 star حهيفراجحلؤهowowjggjwurs0ursrsr70dpurdur0ddd07d70d07rs7rsp7td7rd7td7td0outuxt9u9tx0yixit9xutxutx à est la +=6₩@0₩_!₩€=@₩€=@₩=€@₩€4#₩€/#7/#/€#₩/€#₩/€-0--=-----=€@=€--=7