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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Now, now. 10 chapters are out and I'm in. Brutal MC, check Alpha Male MC, check Funny MC, check MC is 5 points for me. No question. World Building, 5 points for me. Not the usual fanfic where MC is self-insert and goes to change the plot. Pokemon, Naruto, and One Piece in one novel...maybe much more later. Hope the update does not decline. Will change my rating as the story develops.
Interesting stories. Good background. Likeable mc. Funny companion pet. Good grammar. Awesome story developmen. The character design are realistic and interesting
Now, now. 10 chapters are out and I'm in. Brutal MC, check Alpha Male MC, check Funny MC, check MC is 5 points for me. No question. World Building, 5 points for me. Not the usual fanfic where MC is self-insert and goes to change the plot. Pokemon, Naruto, and One Piece in one novel...maybe much more later. Hope the update does not decline. Will change my rating as the story develops.
Interesting stories. Good background. Likeable mc. Funny companion pet. Good grammar. Awesome story developmen. The character design are realistic and interesting