Outsider Chronicles- Multiversal Jump.

LV 4

amaturewriter

this is ****...chps are really short..MC is an idiot..dude just flat out shows everyone his talent..no subtly,,,but fine...then MC gets attacked by anko...my ass she dosnt recognize a genius uchiha heir, she wont flat out attack the kid, plus why would MC train her, pretty stupid, he is a kid, he has no gold finger and he has never killed, whatever he has to offer is useless to a trained assassin that has been through war...****ty writing...also so far MC's wife seems pretty ****ty. chick just abandoned MC and now MC does the cliche **** similar to chinese novels by chasing her...its a dope idea but executed pretty badly...so yah..personally this is garbage, I'd suggest a rewrite cause its actually pretty interesting idea

LV 3

Imabethatguy12345

This story is very interesting, and it had an interesting take in the Naruto universe as the mc is reincarnated as Sasuke and Focuses on gaining power to get to his. Wife who had reincarnated before him in another fictional world. The Mc can be very maudin in situations like when his parents had died. The feeling the author. Described in the end was very real. All in all I love this book although the chapters could improve drastically, he stared the reason and I wholeheartedly agree typo is a *****. Thanks for the story man.

LV 5

zoink

its good... but if the chapters whas a little longer it would be better i think :)...................................................-...............................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

Grimsoul_Lord

Although the chapters are short, the story is good and interesting.. and its good that he is reborn as sasuke because many other novels have naruto or his brother or itachi as their main character.. 🤔🤔 the story is overall good 😍👍❤👌soo, just try to write a bit longer chapter and keep up the good work in writing this novel..🌟🌟🌟🌟