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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Great!!! I hope you can make another story like this. This is a great story. Though, there are some errors but you can edit it and send to a publication. Thank you and hoping for its success!
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