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Story of Themba in his journey through the cruel world of gods, forgotten times of man's development and the modern age of heroes.
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Écrire un avisDude your story is awesome please update its a good start and feels like can have a long interactive storyline...................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ____-_--------1------------------------------1---2...................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ____-_--------1------------------------------1---2...................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ____-_--------1------------------------------1---2...................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ____-_--------1------------------------------1---2...................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ____-_--------1------------------------------1---2...................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ____-_--------1------------------------------1---2...................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ____-_--------1------------------------------1---2...................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ____-_--------1------------------------------1---2...................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ____-_--------1------------------------------1---2
Love Your Story. Looking Forward to where it's Going. Since They're way Early in the Timeline, will they stay in Seclusion for a few Centuries till they're as powerful as Zeus or Stronger ? Will Apollo usurp the Throne of Olympus ? Will Nina Achieve Godhood ? With all the Training Knowledge they have access to and their Knowledge of Mythology and the Future, They can practically Do Be and Have Anything.
Вроде бы всё неплохо, за исключением слишком больших возможностей для гг, не хватает более качественного перевода. А так- спасибо за работу и ждём продолжения.
this basically a good story/novel i hope that apollo will only love his wife nina only. so please don't dropped this great story of yours and continue to update this story or novel
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Very underrated, I an extremely dissapointed that you have not updated in quite the while, this story has so far been no harem, the only thing I advise you to work on is the interactions, as they could be a little plain.
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Sup guys I'm gonna be be shameless and promote my own story. 😝 I hope you give the fanfiction a chance. I tried to make it interesting and hope to get some constructive feedback. Give comments if you have any interesting ideas you r willing to share or something you felt could be changed. Give me a fair rating, as thing is my first try at writing, I'm willing to listen to your suggestions on how I can improve.