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there is not any update and I really lost interest.even forget abt content i requested to the author pls upload the next chapter u r really killing us with this u even lost some reader 😭💔
I love it. I just began to read but it pulls me in so quickly. 😭🎀Maybe it is a classic example of romance but worth to read. 😍 🙏🏻✨❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️
it is the best book i have ever read. So beautiful story with different concept. Avery portrait so beautifully and lovingly. And Alex loves her so much......
Have to say this.....Never ever judge a book by reading only few chapters....this is the best... OMG...the way you wrote this book is awesome author...I really really really loved this....wow 😍😍❤️..This is a must read story and you will definitely fall in love with this and that is soo soo soo true.....❤️
at first i like the content but there is so many character and other love stories in this novel. i see the imagination of the writer but im not that interested in the other character except the boss and his wife. i like the 1st chapter where there is a love triangle. but the story seems to ramble. sorry but i love your imagination hope u end it well[img=update]
really good storyline with a roller coaster of emotions, many readers did complain that the fl is weak but you know that made the story more interesting to me. I would love if the author elaborates more on the smut scenes though! cuz this book deserves more steamy smut scenes!!!!
This novel very very mysterious , no one that what happened next in this story ... sometimes I m also afraid what happens next 🤪..but I love the every character of this novel author is ... awasome ..👏👏👏👏👏
I love every character on this novel , most of Alex ...the way he love evary n protect her I felt there ....n lill..lime also very cute character ..n Alex family are really awesome ..the way of care for there doughter in law really appreciable ...❤️❤️❤️❤️..
Oh my God its a beautiful love story and even the title tells you how noce the book is. Oh i should continue with iy upto its last page to see hpw it will end. Thanks webnovel and thanks to author
love this story full of suspence , romance, and many more thing 🥰🥰🥰🥰💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖🌸🌸🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺💐💐💐💐💐💐🍁🍁🌺🌺🌺🌺you will not regret reading this story but you need patience with this story hope you enjoy this like me😍😍
I like it.. Nice story... Try to read this guys. 👍👍👍💏 i feel the love . Really good author 👍👍. Really!! Excellent , good job.. You have great future.. All the best 👍👍 all characters are good,
i don't know why the hell ML had anger issues n why when he is already married but still has girlfriend n you didn't put FL in any high position this story makes me never wanna read...i mean atleast show some change in FL
Is nice and different .Hope to add more chapters as soon as possible, I want to know the end. 🙂[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
my review of this is it has a great story line and great characters this story makes me want to read more each day i can't get enough of this comic
my review of this is it has a great story line and great characters this story makes me want to read more each day i can't get enough of this comic
my review of this is it has a great story line and great characters this story makes me want to read more each day i can't get enough of this comic
my review of this is it has a great story line and great characters this story makes me want to read more each day i can't get enough of this comic
my review of this is it has a great story line and great characters this story makes me want to read more each day i can't get enough of this comic
i love the story line i follow the writer and read all of his story's i think this is my favorite story on this site. i defiantly recommend
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This story is interesting, and really awesome but update are completely irregular. Please author update it regularly. 😇 such an interesting book but we can't read because of lack of updates
La historia esta guay pero los personajes se parecen demasiado y las historias dentro de la historia son un poco parecidas. Despues, hay que decir que avery a pesar de llorar mucho demasiado ha sido fuerte. Pero hay una cosa que me desconcierta, alex la ha dejado embarazada mientras que elle estaba inconsciente, eso no se hace y no entiendo como avery no se ha enfadado ni nada.
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lately I got the chance to read this story . story too amazing and full of suspense.characters and plot are great.reading with high curiosity.
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One of the nicest book. Suspence is awesome. Loving reading this book. Story is superb. All characters are so beautifully portrayed. Nice content
Dear Author I love your book and I'm eagerly waiting for your updates, pls update as soon as possible I really want to continue and can't wait any longer.
it's my first day reading this book and I hope it would be a great day reading this book. ......from the title of the book i guess it would be a good story🤞
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l love this novel. it's my most favorite novel I have read so far.l Recommend this novel to everyone, thank you author 😍😊
there is not any update and I really lost interest.even forget abt content i requested to the author pls upload the next chapter u r really killing us with this u even lost some reader 😭💔
I love it. I just began to read but it pulls me in so quickly. 😭🎀Maybe it is a classic example of romance but worth to read. 😍 🙏🏻✨❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️
it is the best book i have ever read. So beautiful story with different concept. Avery portrait so beautifully and lovingly. And Alex loves her so much......
Have to say this.....Never ever judge a book by reading only few chapters....this is the best... OMG...the way you wrote this book is awesome author...I really really really loved this....wow 😍😍❤️..This is a must read story and you will definitely fall in love with this and that is soo soo soo true.....❤️
at first i like the content but there is so many character and other love stories in this novel. i see the imagination of the writer but im not that interested in the other character except the boss and his wife. i like the 1st chapter where there is a love triangle. but the story seems to ramble. sorry but i love your imagination hope u end it well[img=update]
really good storyline with a roller coaster of emotions, many readers did complain that the fl is weak but you know that made the story more interesting to me. I would love if the author elaborates more on the smut scenes though! cuz this book deserves more steamy smut scenes!!!!
This novel very very mysterious , no one that what happened next in this story ... sometimes I m also afraid what happens next 🤪..but I love the every character of this novel author is ... awasome ..👏👏👏👏👏
I love every character on this novel , most of Alex ...the way he love evary n protect her I felt there ....n lill..lime also very cute character ..n Alex family are really awesome ..the way of care for there doughter in law really appreciable ...❤️❤️❤️❤️..
Oh my God its a beautiful love story and even the title tells you how noce the book is. Oh i should continue with iy upto its last page to see hpw it will end. Thanks webnovel and thanks to author
love this story full of suspence , romance, and many more thing 🥰🥰🥰🥰💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖🌸🌸🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺💐💐💐💐💐💐🍁🍁🌺🌺🌺🌺you will not regret reading this story but you need patience with this story hope you enjoy this like me😍😍
I like it.. Nice story... Try to read this guys. 👍👍👍💏 i feel the love . Really good author 👍👍. Really!! Excellent , good job.. You have great future.. All the best 👍👍 all characters are good,
i don't know why the hell ML had anger issues n why when he is already married but still has girlfriend n you didn't put FL in any high position this story makes me never wanna read...i mean atleast show some change in FL
Is nice and different .Hope to add more chapters as soon as possible, I want to know the end. 🙂[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
my review of this is it has a great story line and great characters this story makes me want to read more each day i can't get enough of this comic
my review of this is it has a great story line and great characters this story makes me want to read more each day i can't get enough of this comic
my review of this is it has a great story line and great characters this story makes me want to read more each day i can't get enough of this comic
my review of this is it has a great story line and great characters this story makes me want to read more each day i can't get enough of this comic
my review of this is it has a great story line and great characters this story makes me want to read more each day i can't get enough of this comic
i love the story line i follow the writer and read all of his story's i think this is my favorite story on this site. i defiantly recommend
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This story is interesting, and really awesome but update are completely irregular. Please author update it regularly. 😇 such an interesting book but we can't read because of lack of updates
La historia esta guay pero los personajes se parecen demasiado y las historias dentro de la historia son un poco parecidas. Despues, hay que decir que avery a pesar de llorar mucho demasiado ha sido fuerte. Pero hay una cosa que me desconcierta, alex la ha dejado embarazada mientras que elle estaba inconsciente, eso no se hace y no entiendo como avery no se ha enfadado ni nada.
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lately I got the chance to read this story . story too amazing and full of suspense.characters and plot are great.reading with high curiosity.
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One of the nicest book. Suspence is awesome. Loving reading this book. Story is superb. All characters are so beautifully portrayed. Nice content
Dear Author I love your book and I'm eagerly waiting for your updates, pls update as soon as possible I really want to continue and can't wait any longer.
it's my first day reading this book and I hope it would be a great day reading this book. ......from the title of the book i guess it would be a good story🤞
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l love this novel. it's my most favorite novel I have read so far.l Recommend this novel to everyone, thank you author 😍😊