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This is a rather rare treat a hidden gem for sure. This story is definitely worth reading. The characters are a mix from, canon and the new developments from the storyline. I was a bit worried that the story was dropped, but the recent update has rejuvenated my hope for this story. The only problem the story has is how the author glosses over certain important aspects. Nevertheless this is still a very good read.
I really like this, it's a hidden gem under all the trash harem and system novels, it's also a gender bender which puts a unique aspect to it that other fics don't have. I also really like the mc. The only thing holding it back is how often you make a new chapter, but other than that it's really good. Also I really just don't like yuri for some reason, hope that doesn't happen but that's just preference. overall it's really good and I hope there is romance, please. Bye
it was fine in the beginning but when she fights shaw i lost all interest , how are you going to make the main character a COSMIC being then grossly humiliate her just because he has a power surpression? making her go through all that experience to make her so weak like she doesn’t have enhanced strength and fighting style? Author nerfs her every single arc, it’s ridiculous and forced
The biggest issue I have with this story is the way the author tells it. It's written in a passive summary format. (I went here. I did this. I killed this guy. 20 years later. etc.) Interspersed within this summary, is actual story-telling where some character development happens. Mostly, it feels like reading synopses of stories, not the actual story itself. It is a lot of wasted potential. This story could've easily been 8 times as long as it ended up being. The MC being gender-bent is also not relevant. The MC could've just been a man and nothing would've changed. The MC could've just been a woman, to begin with, and nothing would've changed. It feels forced. I wish the author or someone else would someday rewrite this story following the same storyline but instead actualize the summarized events. It has the potential to be a truly great story.
Because of an alleged god who is bored! I'm already bored from such a start! Couldn 't you just overpower without God ? or just with a roulette wheel without making God laugh, God could have fun and watch , but he doesn't need to say it, who wants to discuss and hang?
this could be so much better if the author did not constantly nerf the mc to the of being a newborn baby making the point of her existence irrelevant as she literally can't do anything .
i loved this adventure, it was a lot of fun reading this story and i felt a lot of emotions reading this one of the best fanfictions i have ever read and it was completed, i can't wait for your next story
I really enjoyed the story but the constant appearance of the higher entity that reincarnated her, and the vague foreshadowing it gives just really turns me off the story
The story was well done, I can't wait for a continuation or a new book to come out by the author. The Author knew just how to pull at your heart and keep you engrossed in the story. Thank you Author for this wonderful piece of work.
It was/is very well written though about halfway through the writing quality drops off. Overall very good and would read again.
5 stars all the way you got me crying at the end I can't wait for more of your writing and I'll be waiting for the next adventure anyway here a cat
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Meh, I Don't Understand Gender-Bent Mc's It Is One Thing With The Mc Being A Female Originally And Another A Male Being Turned Into A Female.
I'm giving you this rating for picture I also like the idea of the novel but i won't be reading because I don't like genderbender fanfictions so bye.
this is a really well made fan fic and i recommend everyone to read it. i hope that the authir will continue as it is really entertaining...
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Readers out there criticizing this story without even reading just because its genderbender. Great story although the MC is not that strong it is still ok. Please continue author and don't let those negative comments put you down. Its hard to find FanFics of this quality in this app where even those non-sense FanFics get 5-stars. Please don't drop.
This story is awesome very well written and nice progression of the character............................................... This story is absolutely awesome............................................... I love it...................................................
Honestly it is a beautiful story, only wish we get more of a slice of life and maybe even romance would not mind incest. Truly amazing....... .. . . . ... . . .. . .. . . . . ..
I think that this is a great story. You see comments of people saying they’re dropping it and stuff like the author is an idiot, but I say just let the author write what they want. If you think you can do it better, write a fanfic yourself. Webnovel allows you to. The author does a great job of creating an original character and although the paragraphs could use a bit of spacing, it’s a great fanfic. There are only 15 chapters right now, but I hope more come out in the future!
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This is a well made fanfic! I couldn't help but wanting more. It's quite nice to read a gender bender MC that is actually very likeable. Her attitude and personalities are very refreshing. I recommend giving this fic a try, don't be off put by the gender bender tag. Also she is still interested in girls so this could become a yuri but if she started dating a guy then, even I would be a little bit uncomfortable no matter how good the story is lol. Just my preference but like I've said before in other gender bender stories..........You better make MC lesbian!!!!!!!!..............XD
This is a rather rare treat a hidden gem for sure. This story is definitely worth reading. The characters are a mix from, canon and the new developments from the storyline. I was a bit worried that the story was dropped, but the recent update has rejuvenated my hope for this story. The only problem the story has is how the author glosses over certain important aspects. Nevertheless this is still a very good read.
I really like this, it's a hidden gem under all the trash harem and system novels, it's also a gender bender which puts a unique aspect to it that other fics don't have. I also really like the mc. The only thing holding it back is how often you make a new chapter, but other than that it's really good. Also I really just don't like yuri for some reason, hope that doesn't happen but that's just preference. overall it's really good and I hope there is romance, please. Bye
it was fine in the beginning but when she fights shaw i lost all interest , how are you going to make the main character a COSMIC being then grossly humiliate her just because he has a power surpression? making her go through all that experience to make her so weak like she doesn’t have enhanced strength and fighting style? Author nerfs her every single arc, it’s ridiculous and forced
The biggest issue I have with this story is the way the author tells it. It's written in a passive summary format. (I went here. I did this. I killed this guy. 20 years later. etc.) Interspersed within this summary, is actual story-telling where some character development happens. Mostly, it feels like reading synopses of stories, not the actual story itself. It is a lot of wasted potential. This story could've easily been 8 times as long as it ended up being. The MC being gender-bent is also not relevant. The MC could've just been a man and nothing would've changed. The MC could've just been a woman, to begin with, and nothing would've changed. It feels forced. I wish the author or someone else would someday rewrite this story following the same storyline but instead actualize the summarized events. It has the potential to be a truly great story.
Because of an alleged god who is bored! I'm already bored from such a start! Couldn 't you just overpower without God ? or just with a roulette wheel without making God laugh, God could have fun and watch , but he doesn't need to say it, who wants to discuss and hang?
this could be so much better if the author did not constantly nerf the mc to the of being a newborn baby making the point of her existence irrelevant as she literally can't do anything .
i loved this adventure, it was a lot of fun reading this story and i felt a lot of emotions reading this one of the best fanfictions i have ever read and it was completed, i can't wait for your next story
I really enjoyed the story but the constant appearance of the higher entity that reincarnated her, and the vague foreshadowing it gives just really turns me off the story
The story was well done, I can't wait for a continuation or a new book to come out by the author. The Author knew just how to pull at your heart and keep you engrossed in the story. Thank you Author for this wonderful piece of work.
It was/is very well written though about halfway through the writing quality drops off. Overall very good and would read again.
5 stars all the way you got me crying at the end I can't wait for more of your writing and I'll be waiting for the next adventure anyway here a cat
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Meh, I Don't Understand Gender-Bent Mc's It Is One Thing With The Mc Being A Female Originally And Another A Male Being Turned Into A Female.
I'm giving you this rating for picture I also like the idea of the novel but i won't be reading because I don't like genderbender fanfictions so bye.
this is a really well made fan fic and i recommend everyone to read it. i hope that the authir will continue as it is really entertaining...
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Readers out there criticizing this story without even reading just because its genderbender. Great story although the MC is not that strong it is still ok. Please continue author and don't let those negative comments put you down. Its hard to find FanFics of this quality in this app where even those non-sense FanFics get 5-stars. Please don't drop.
This story is awesome very well written and nice progression of the character............................................... This story is absolutely awesome............................................... I love it...................................................
Honestly it is a beautiful story, only wish we get more of a slice of life and maybe even romance would not mind incest. Truly amazing....... .. . . . ... . . .. . .. . . . . ..
I think that this is a great story. You see comments of people saying they’re dropping it and stuff like the author is an idiot, but I say just let the author write what they want. If you think you can do it better, write a fanfic yourself. Webnovel allows you to. The author does a great job of creating an original character and although the paragraphs could use a bit of spacing, it’s a great fanfic. There are only 15 chapters right now, but I hope more come out in the future!
Looks good.Great. Update more please.Looks good.Great. Update more please.Looks good.Great. Update more please.Looks good.Great. Update more please.Looks good.Great. Update more please.Looks good.Great. Update more please.
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This is a well made fanfic! I couldn't help but wanting more. It's quite nice to read a gender bender MC that is actually very likeable. Her attitude and personalities are very refreshing. I recommend giving this fic a try, don't be off put by the gender bender tag. Also she is still interested in girls so this could become a yuri but if she started dating a guy then, even I would be a little bit uncomfortable no matter how good the story is lol. Just my preference but like I've said before in other gender bender stories..........You better make MC lesbian!!!!!!!!..............XD