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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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The story is going nice with the right amount of OPness. The story in itself hold huge potential. Please keep a regular release rate and please don't let this be a Yuri fanfic
Ths story is progressing in a stable condition, not too fast neither too slow unlike other fanfics who literally focus too much on relationship to the point that they just make anyone a harem member(not that I'm complaining) this story did well on the characters development and backstory and not like some author that did "hey let's make this guy OP" then just make him the strongest in the world within a few months seriously though do the beings there even train or something?!. Anyway It's a good choice to read and the update is also fine(although there is still the cliffhanger jutsu😏). I hope for the author to keep up the good work!!
the romance will be yuri? ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... ......... . . . . . .l. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. .. .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . .. . . . l. . . . .l . l l.l.l. l .l .l . l. l
Good story with a lot of cliff and a funny author XD .................. ........................ ................... ........................ .............................. ....................
The story is going nice with the right amount of OPness. The story in itself hold huge potential. Please keep a regular release rate and please don't let this be a Yuri fanfic
Ths story is progressing in a stable condition, not too fast neither too slow unlike other fanfics who literally focus too much on relationship to the point that they just make anyone a harem member(not that I'm complaining) this story did well on the characters development and backstory and not like some author that did "hey let's make this guy OP" then just make him the strongest in the world within a few months seriously though do the beings there even train or something?!. Anyway It's a good choice to read and the update is also fine(although there is still the cliffhanger jutsu😏). I hope for the author to keep up the good work!!
the romance will be yuri? ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... ......... . . . . . .l. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. .. .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . .. . . . l. . . . .l . l l.l.l. l .l .l . l. l
Good story with a lot of cliff and a funny author XD .................. ........................ ................... ........................ .............................. ....................