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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
hello,dear writer, I am the novel editor of NovelCat, wind. After reading your appealing novel here, I sincerely invite you to join us as an honorary NovelCat author, let's give your book more chances! once your book gets exclusive contracted with our platform, you can get lots of bonuses! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: wind@novel-cat.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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one of the best works of **** i ever read, my dick was hard in all chapters, very good, i think a gangbang was missing, only two people is very little
This was one a the best things i have read really great stuff i jsut wished it updated nowadays it been too long since i have seen a nEw chapter
Great story! Well thought out and even better written! Great grammar, graphic description and plausible storyline! Sadly no new chapter recently..
Hey, i really love this story, the writing quality is amazing, and it has Beautiful character and world development. I hope that you continue the story sometime soon, even if it isnt getting much attention right now, Im sure it will if you start posting regularly again. :)
Really love how the story is progressing, it make me want to keep reading and not stop 🤷♀️I also love how the MC Is written and how his personality develops throughout the chapters.❤️👍
Hola. Alguien me dice si hay alguna novela igual que está ?...............................................................................????????????.?.?.?.?.?.?...?....??...??......?.
Kind of a good example of a novel of such genre. There is a bunch of interesting world mechanics, also a presence of the PLOT is detected, which is rare. Also switching from too muscular men to futanaris as core sexual partners is a definite “plus”. Also I’d like to ask a question: are there some novels about “trap harem” or at least trap novel with general man MC?
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It's a trap. Protest, why do you use cover art for women or for female content? .........Ok i will try to read it..............................
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******* Hiatus ******* kapan ******* selesai ******* nya ****** ? ******* , ******* ******* 😠😠😠 ******* nunggu ****** update *******
Really like how the story goes. Can't wait for the next updates. Poor Blake but I can't wait to see how he/she will escape or be raped by whichever creatures next or be save by Yolanda. It's like all the creatures are smithen with Blake. I am waiting for more gangbang or tentacles action 😉
Hey I understand but I hope you continue at some point and will be waiting to read some more of this great 📖 but please don’t drop it and forget about it
Be warned Even though this book was great to be informed that this book is no longer being updated. I was even part of the Patron 2 weeks after pay my $5 Subscription the Patron page just vanished no updates no reason just gone
If you like full-on, unadulterated smut. Then this is for you! Of course, the MC was a dude in "her" past life, so while her body is still male-presenting, the system starts to mould it towards more feminine characteristics.
Hey if you like traps, then you know where you are going to be. That is here, reading this. Because we both know that you can never have enough traps.
Holy ****, I don't even swing that way but this... this is a masterpiece... The heavens graced us with this question: "Are Traps gay?" And just because of this novel, my answer is "No".
This is a really great book and good story development can’t wait for the next update Would suggest putting more detail and longer chapters I know it will be harder to think of what to write but that would be great if you did it
This is the kind of thing you did not know you want until you read it. Seriously I was originally reading this just to see what this was all about but I started to read and got pulled in fast. I had no idea I wanted this kind of writing till then. The only thing this might make it better (for me?) would be if a goblin or imp took him captive, I don't know how maybe his drug or got stuck in a wall trying to crawl through a hole buy as long as its happen I don't mind much. I kind of have a kink for a bigger and stronger hero to be defeated by a much weaker enemy and get turn into their *****. Watching a max level and famous hero getting defeated by a level 1 mob creature is surprisingly a huge turn on for me.
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Very very interesting I must say, though the story never goes the way you think you can kinda see a line of how things are going to continue
Im dying, this was not what I expected but overall this was better.🐰 Mostly I am dying of blood loss now. 💗🐰💗🐹💗🐰💗🐹💗🐰💗🐹💗🐰💗🐹💗
What happened to the cover? The pictures gone. ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎ฏ๎๎๎
it's a good book for people of culture$w(°ｏ°)ww(°ｏ°)ww(°ｏ°)ww(°ｏ°)ww(°ｏ°)ww(°ｏ°)ww(°ｏ°)ww(°ｏ°)ww(°ｏ°)ww(°ｏ°)ww(°ｏ°)ww(°ｏ°)ww(°ｏ°)ww(°ｏ°)ww(°ｏ°)w
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
hello,dear writer, I am the novel editor of NovelCat, wind. After reading your appealing novel here, I sincerely invite you to join us as an honorary NovelCat author, let's give your book more chances! once your book gets exclusive contracted with our platform, you can get lots of bonuses! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: wind@novel-cat.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Spoiler de révélation one of the best works of **** i ever read, my dick was hard in all chapters, very good, i think a gangbang was missing, only two people is very little
This was one a the best things i have read really great stuff i jsut wished it updated nowadays it been too long since i have seen a nEw chapter
Great story! Well thought out and even better written! Great grammar, graphic description and plausible storyline! Sadly no new chapter recently..
Hey, i really love this story, the writing quality is amazing, and it has Beautiful character and world development. I hope that you continue the story sometime soon, even if it isnt getting much attention right now, Im sure it will if you start posting regularly again. :)
Really love how the story is progressing, it make me want to keep reading and not stop 🤷♀️I also love how the MC Is written and how his personality develops throughout the chapters.❤️👍
Hola. Alguien me dice si hay alguna novela igual que está ?...............................................................................????????????.?.?.?.?.?.?...?....??...??......?.
Kind of a good example of a novel of such genre. There is a bunch of interesting world mechanics, also a presence of the PLOT is detected, which is rare. Also switching from too muscular men to futanaris as core sexual partners is a definite “plus”. Also I’d like to ask a question: are there some novels about “trap harem” or at least trap novel with general man MC?
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It's a trap. Protest, why do you use cover art for women or for female content? .........Ok i will try to read it..............................
Transmigration gone 'RIGHT'👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
******* Hiatus ******* kapan ******* selesai ******* nya ****** ? ******* , ******* ******* 😠😠😠 ******* nunggu ****** update *******
Really like how the story goes. Can't wait for the next updates. Poor Blake but I can't wait to see how he/she will escape or be raped by whichever creatures next or be save by Yolanda. It's like all the creatures are smithen with Blake. I am waiting for more gangbang or tentacles action 😉
Hey I understand but I hope you continue at some point and will be waiting to read some more of this great 📖 but please don’t drop it and forget about it
Be warned Even though this book was great to be informed that this book is no longer being updated. I was even part of the Patron 2 weeks after pay my $5 Subscription the Patron page just vanished no updates no reason just gone
If you like full-on, unadulterated smut. Then this is for you! Of course, the MC was a dude in "her" past life, so while her body is still male-presenting, the system starts to mould it towards more feminine characteristics.
Hey if you like traps, then you know where you are going to be. That is here, reading this. Because we both know that you can never have enough traps.
Holy ****, I don't even swing that way but this... this is a masterpiece... The heavens graced us with this question: "Are Traps gay?" And just because of this novel, my answer is "No".
This is a really great book and good story development can’t wait for the next update Would suggest putting more detail and longer chapters I know it will be harder to think of what to write but that would be great if you did it
This is the kind of thing you did not know you want until you read it. Seriously I was originally reading this just to see what this was all about but I started to read and got pulled in fast. I had no idea I wanted this kind of writing till then. The only thing this might make it better (for me?) would be if a goblin or imp took him captive, I don't know how maybe his drug or got stuck in a wall trying to crawl through a hole buy as long as its happen I don't mind much. I kind of have a kink for a bigger and stronger hero to be defeated by a much weaker enemy and get turn into their *****. Watching a max level and famous hero getting defeated by a level 1 mob creature is surprisingly a huge turn on for me.
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Very very interesting I must say, though the story never goes the way you think you can kinda see a line of how things are going to continue
Im dying, this was not what I expected but overall this was better.🐰 Mostly I am dying of blood loss now. 💗🐰💗🐹💗🐰💗🐹💗🐰💗🐹💗🐰💗🐹💗
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