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Come on watermelon what’s going on with this book? It says it’s completed, but the story is not finished not at all.
Very good story. The ending was a little disappointing. It feels really incomplete and rushed. The pronoun mistakes were enough to retract from the story line and there were some ideas you introduced and then abandoned like the bronze sword and the alchemy god mountain, but overall a fun story
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bro... the MC is not honest at all. He had Sexual relationship with other girls even though he had a Girlfriend and also lie that he's not in that kind of relationship
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Splendid work. if your looking to past time i recommend this novel. as far as the story line and character development goes i wont say much accept these few word just read it.
Dropped chapter two, it's clichéd and annoying already 1. Not clear if set on earth 2. Using yuan as the currency 3. Seems to be set in modern world but Expect reader to believe that local law enforcement won't be able to find or narrow down the culprits of a crime in a village that has a max of 2000 people 4. Clichéd intro of the family 5. Clichéd intro of the female lead 6. Clichéd intro of mcs personality
A very sassy crown princess indeed! Although mistreated by his family, together with his faithful servant, they outwit whatever challenge comes their way. But I can they handle the prince with a bad temperament? Will the prince see thru Mo Fei facade, and find the treasure there? What an amusing and unusual love story this is turning out to be!
Well.... I can only say this... "IF" you manage to read until passed chapter 300, Congratulations! Then you're gonna find this novel become more interesting. Good luck! ✌😁
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The Developing of the story and the characters are really terrible. A few side characters are more or less OK, but generally speaking are so plain and one dimensional as the MC.
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I like reading this book and I am looking forward to reading more chapters. the reason why I don't read the book often is because you don't update your pages enough, there are some books I'm reading that has over a thousand chapters so because of that I read like three or four hundred chapters a week. With your book, I only read about 10 to 20 chapters a week because it's only 540chapters I'm trying to spread it out being is that it doesn't get updated enough.
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If you are here for face slapping than this novel is for you. It's field with idiotic characters. It's very hard to get into the story but if you want read a story without any seriousness and over the top op character than this is for you,.
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i dont get how this novel get so high ranking. it has only self satisfaction and face smacking in it. nothing else. not a bit of plot. along the 'story' we get to see tropes that are commonly used in every story of this kind. nope out of 5.
Bro this book is kinda okay not really anything bad but nothing really good either. might just be doing this for exp but who knows?
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very nice novel.it's action packed with humor and suspense.the main characters rise to power and riches is amazing.I love this kind of novels thumbs up
I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within. If you don't mind, please read my web novel and don't forget to give a review: - Let Me Choose You - Who Are You - Facing Into The Sky Thanks🤍🤍🤍
The story is great I was able to until three hundred twenty three chapters.Unfortunately the ebook suddenly the downloaded online novel was restarted back to chapter 1.
to read or not to read is a choice of words . the words is the most words to say words. is this legit just got from the bottom line and the other side of app
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It said this book was complete when I started reading, after reading 300 chapters, I decided to jump to last page to see how the ending before spending more coins… I’m glad i jumped to last page to minimize my spend as I don’t see or get the ending… did it end? Or was the books closed/complete due to no more update…
Come on watermelon what’s going on with this book? It says it’s completed, but the story is not finished not at all.
Very good story. The ending was a little disappointing. It feels really incomplete and rushed. The pronoun mistakes were enough to retract from the story line and there were some ideas you introduced and then abandoned like the bronze sword and the alchemy god mountain, but overall a fun story
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bro... the MC is not honest at all. He had Sexual relationship with other girls even though he had a Girlfriend and also lie that he's not in that kind of relationship
Çjdşjdşjdşufşıfiıfiıfğıdşhxşhdşufşudşufğufğufşufşufşjcşjfijcijcijcijcijckivohüıcpuxuğcğufğuxşjcjşcijcjşcjicjşchş, şh, şh, hş, şhcjşcşjcşjcşhcşjcjşcşjcşjcşjchşxphxpyxpyxpuxpuxpuxpyxpyxpucpucpuf
Splendid work. if your looking to past time i recommend this novel. as far as the story line and character development goes i wont say much accept these few word just read it.
Dropped chapter two, it's clichéd and annoying already 1. Not clear if set on earth 2. Using yuan as the currency 3. Seems to be set in modern world but Expect reader to believe that local law enforcement won't be able to find or narrow down the culprits of a crime in a village that has a max of 2000 people 4. Clichéd intro of the family 5. Clichéd intro of the female lead 6. Clichéd intro of mcs personality
A very sassy crown princess indeed! Although mistreated by his family, together with his faithful servant, they outwit whatever challenge comes their way. But I can they handle the prince with a bad temperament? Will the prince see thru Mo Fei facade, and find the treasure there? What an amusing and unusual love story this is turning out to be!
Well.... I can only say this... "IF" you manage to read until passed chapter 300, Congratulations! Then you're gonna find this novel become more interesting. Good luck! ✌😁
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm **************************************** **************************************** ****************************************
Sigh~ °°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°° °°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°° °°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°° Sigh~
Heh, Heh, Heh, Heh, Heh, Heh, Heh, Heh **************************************** **************************************** ****************************************
The Developing of the story and the characters are really terrible. A few side characters are more or less OK, but generally speaking are so plain and one dimensional as the MC.
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I like reading this book and I am looking forward to reading more chapters. the reason why I don't read the book often is because you don't update your pages enough, there are some books I'm reading that has over a thousand chapters so because of that I read like three or four hundred chapters a week. With your book, I only read about 10 to 20 chapters a week because it's only 540chapters I'm trying to spread it out being is that it doesn't get updated enough.
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If you are here for face slapping than this novel is for you. It's field with idiotic characters. It's very hard to get into the story but if you want read a story without any seriousness and over the top op character than this is for you,.
ako ay pogi ako ay pogi ako ay pogi ako ay pogi ako ay pogi ako ay pogi ako ay pogi ako ay pogi ako ay pogi ako ay pogi ako ay pogi ako ay pogi ako ay pogi ako ay pogi ako ay pogi ako ay pogi.
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i dont get how this novel get so high ranking. it has only self satisfaction and face smacking in it. nothing else. not a bit of plot. along the 'story' we get to see tropes that are commonly used in every story of this kind. nope out of 5.
Bro this book is kinda okay not really anything bad but nothing really good either. might just be doing this for exp but who knows?
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very nice novel.it's action packed with humor and suspense.the main characters rise to power and riches is amazing.I love this kind of novels thumbs up
I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within. If you don't mind, please read my web novel and don't forget to give a review: - Let Me Choose You - Who Are You - Facing Into The Sky Thanks🤍🤍🤍
The story is great I was able to until three hundred twenty three chapters.Unfortunately the ebook suddenly the downloaded online novel was restarted back to chapter 1.
to read or not to read is a choice of words . the words is the most words to say words. is this legit just got from the bottom line and the other side of app
Spoiler de révélation Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
It said this book was complete when I started reading, after reading 300 chapters, I decided to jump to last page to see how the ending before spending more coins… I’m glad i jumped to last page to minimize my spend as I don’t see or get the ending… did it end? Or was the books closed/complete due to no more update…