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The MC is trying to change the plot too much and the MC has a god and hero complex, it's stupid, I guess that the writer will have a hard time continuing this novel, because of the character making and changes to continue the changes under by MC to the new plot,.......... There are a lot of similarities with fanfic about Kakashi on webnovel, heheh.
CH10 The MC share his technique to konoha 0.o, trying to kill everyone in konoha I guess since ninja = thieves, murdered for hire. I doubt any ninja would give **** if you are innocent or commoner as long as they got pay.
Please any one of a have good plan to develop this chapter please Please please Please please Please please Please please Please please Please please Please please Please please suggest me, and help me in grammar mistakes and if any one of you want to changes in particular chapter please suggest me And last but least don't forget to comment
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The MC is trying to change the plot too much and the MC has a god and hero complex, it's stupid, I guess that the writer will have a hard time continuing this novel, because of the character making and changes to continue the changes under by MC to the new plot,.......... There are a lot of similarities with fanfic about Kakashi on webnovel, heheh.
CH10 The MC share his technique to konoha 0.o, trying to kill everyone in konoha I guess since ninja = thieves, murdered for hire. I doubt any ninja would give **** if you are innocent or commoner as long as they got pay.
Please any one of a have good plan to develop this chapter please Please please Please please Please please Please please Please please Please please Please please Please please suggest me, and help me in grammar mistakes and if any one of you want to changes in particular chapter please suggest me And last but least don't forget to comment
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