/ Book&Literature / Hadrian Black : The Abandoned Prodigy 你好,我的名字
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Abandoned by his parents in favor of raising Arthur, The Boy Who Lived, Hadrian is taken in by his Grandparents.
Watch his life as it is filled with exploration of the Wizarding World and Magic in its entirety!
This is the story of Lord Hadrian Black, head of house: Potter, Black, Gryffindor, Slytherin, and Peverell.
AU.
That means that this is is going to have quite a lot of differences if you are going by the canon storyline. If you do choose to read this story, please do so with the knowledge that it is a different story with new characters and canon characters with slight personality changes. There will also be bashing in this story.
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Amazing story with a lot of potential. It's one of the best I have ever seen of Harry Potter I hope you keep up with the good work. The writing is amazing and as no errors in it. It has an OP character but who doesn't like to read one sometimes.
Not going to lie...I like it..Stupid OP [has potential to be ] and no one knows.. dope....look so far its made out [somewhat] MC's parents are ****..so keep it that way...separate them,,,, no bonds fixed and at worst bash them...people like neglect fanfics but hate it whenever family relationships are magically build back..dont do this...Make MC hate or just ignore his family forever...also bash if you want..just dont make MC save or care for his family...keep him OP but make him smart and use it wisely,,,make him dark or grey.....bash..add some romance and fluff and if harem...keep it small and build it..and pls no wife stealing or any issei type ****....And just no crossovers...but maybe world travel?...Anyway goodluck and goodshow
Overall I like the story continue with the story and don't drop and waiting for the updates.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
First of all, this is a well written story, not many grammatical or spelling errors, so it is a very comfortable read. Way better than most. But the first few chapters are rushed and cut down to minimal content. The scene where Hadrian gets adopted is majorly important, but so short that you don't get the feeling that it happened at all. It is like a cut down version of the memory of a dream you had a week ago. The motives and relations/backstorys are nebulous, like Lily being a submissive who follows James decision(If you can call that a decision, he didn't even have a single coherent thought in that scene) to give away one of her 4 year old children without even showing her supposed displeasure, or the way Dorea practically jumped at the chance to take Hadrian as her own while removing James as Heir. Maybe they were already mayor disagreements before, but we don't know because there is no backstory. Bdw. Why isn't Sirius Heir Black, the current Lord should still be alive and Dorea was never from the main branch. I could speculate a lot of things and at the moment it feels like Dorea wants a new try at training a Heir because she failed the first time and Lily is more of a housemaid than a wife. The trend sadly continues, because the world building is just as flawed. Examples: Magic elementry school starting at 7 without subjects like English, History, Math etc. I know this isn't covered in the original, but at 11 most children are at least able to write and do basic calculations, even if taught by their parents, but at 7? Dueling at 7? Do wizard children develop differently? Do all Wizards posses genius level intellect? Not unimaginable if explained right. I mean every single one can develop a mind palace approximation , so who knows. In addition the four houses are practically identical with the values they are looking for. Why would Americans copy that flawed system? Hogwarts had 4 founders and people keep at it because it is tradition, but a school founded hundreds of years later making the same decision/mistake? Conclusion: Author can write, but has not thought trough the world and the characters background. Or he just doesn't want to tell us. Tipp: Authors Note to explain basic world building and character profiles. The community can help.
Spoiler de révélationAn interesting take on the “Wrong boy who lived” genre. Writing quality is great as well as the stability of updates. Hardly any repeated content from the original works and brings forth the full magical world by exploring different aspects. A very interesting read. The beginning did confused me though, the MC appeared to have an elevated level of consciousness and thinking from a young age and somehow knew of the dark lord. This implied, to me, that the MC was somehow familiar with the original works before being born. However, that aspect was never fully explained. Aside from the above mentioned point, his development thereforth becomes consistent with him being unfamiliar with the world and just someone who works extremely hard. Hope his increased level of maturity is explored later as to why he developed so quickly as a child and the reason for his “genuis” self. Definitely recommended
Definitely one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have read recently Hope he sticks with Daphne being the main love interest And please for the love of God don't force that stupid arranged marriage thing people like to do with Daphne
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It’s a great book hope it continues probably my favorite book/fan fiction on this app I really recommend this book. Very thing is perfect with this book
Realized I didn’t even review yet. Story is very good and readable as well. This isn’t your normal cringe worthy WBWL Betrayed by family fanfiction. What’s best about this is the MCs development with his magic. ALSO, he goes to OTHER MAGIC SCHOOLS. Something other Harry Potter fanfictions simply do not do which is very annoying. Pairing with Daphne too. (I do find this so overused , but author makes it work)
Spoiler de révélationOoh whoa, ooh whoa, ooh whoa You know you love me, I know you care Just shout whenever and I'll be there You are my love, you are my heart And we will never, ever, ever be apart Are we an item? Girl quit playin' We're just friends, what are you sayin' Said there's another, look right in my eyes My first love, broke my heart for the first time And I was like baby, baby, baby oh Like baby, baby, baby no Like baby, baby, baby oh I thought you'd always be mine, mine Baby, baby, baby oh Like baby, baby, baby no Like baby, baby, baby ooh I thought you'd always be mine, mine Oh for you, I would have done whatever And I just can't believe we ain't together And I wanna play it cool But I'm losin' you I'll buy you anything I'll buy you any ring And I'm in pieces, baby fix me And just shake me, 'til you wake me from this bad dream I'm goin' down, down, down, down And I can't just believe my first love won't be around And I'm like baby, baby, baby oh Like baby, baby, baby no Like baby, baby, baby oh I thought you'd always be mine, mine Baby, baby, baby oh Like baby, baby, baby no Like baby, baby, baby ooh I thought you'd always be mine, mine Luda, when I was thirteen, I had my first love There was nobody that compared to my baby And nobody came between us nor could ever come above She had me goin' crazy Oh, I was starstruck She woke me up daily Don't need no Starbucks (woo) She made my heart pound And skip a beat when I see her in the street and At school on the playground But I really wanna see her on the weekend She know she got me dazin' 'Cause she was so amazin' And now my heart is breakin' But I just keep on sayin' Baby, baby, baby oh Like baby, baby, baby no Like baby, baby, baby oh I thought you'd always be mine, mine Baby, baby, baby oh Like baby, baby, baby no Like baby, baby, baby ooh I thought you'd always be mine, mine I'm gone Yeah, yeah, yeah Yeah, yeah, yeah (now I'm all gone) Yeah, yeah, yeah Yeah, yeah, yeah (now I'm all gone) Yeah, yeah, yeah Yeah, yeah, yeah (now I'm all gone) Gone, gone, gone, I'm gone
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It's good but... do you really have to put the relationship in there at the agehe is? Like maybe when he is around 16 or 17 and higher, that would be better bc then we would get to see more of Hadrian grow up and his character. And the heroin can be the childhood best friend and grow to become a lover something like that. *sigh* Oh well 🤷♀️🤷♀️ if the story is set then that that's, but either way it's a pretty good story other than the romance that's going on/starting. Thanks for reading this far!!! ^_^
It’s a exiting fun and unique story. Not only do we have the lovely and expertly crafted groundwork and world created by J.K Rowling but the author has to my delight and surprise expanded berry skillfully on the world of Harry Potter. This in turn making his story feel fresh and new with everything that happens. You get the feeling the author really puts in allot of work and it’s very easy to tell that not only does he or she care about their work but they are also very talented. Naturally the world of fan fictions has both good and bad and some truly abominable but this work is by far one of the best.
I loved this harry potter fanfic it is totally different from others I loved the main character he is awesome I also love that he is raised by his grandparents instead of suffering with his aunt and uncle
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Don't mind me, just shamelessly giving myself 5 stars ;-; Thank you for reading this lowly author's work , I bow down to you. My benefactors, thank you :)