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- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I don't like mind control, but if it's not too extreme, I'll keep reading for a while, i love sekirei, it's a good story whether anime or manga, author for your novel to be good didn't need netori or mind control. 😑😑😑😆😆😆... Good Luck.
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Well i don't know to say dude the background is good but are u sure u want NTR Miya sekirei no.1 ? Well i HOPE so since i see her kinda a widow so keep it up man see whether the story can be develop and good hehehe evil MC....Request : MIYA for sure, matsu, karasuba, tsukiumi, UZUME must, KAZEHANA also must and akitsu that's all hope can be grant hahahaha caio
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I don't like mind control, but if it's not too extreme, I'll keep reading for a while, i love sekirei, it's a good story whether anime or manga, author for your novel to be good didn't need netori or mind control. 😑😑😑😆😆😆... Good Luck.
change the genre "NTR" By Netori. ............................................................................ .............................................
Well i don't know to say dude the background is good but are u sure u want NTR Miya sekirei no.1 ? Well i HOPE so since i see her kinda a widow so keep it up man see whether the story can be develop and good hehehe evil MC....Request : MIYA for sure, matsu, karasuba, tsukiumi, UZUME must, KAZEHANA also must and akitsu that's all hope can be grant hahahaha caio
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