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A fantastic novel with a good story, excellent plot progression but sadly it seems there are no more updates, it only ever the good novels that get dropped on webnovel.
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I love this novel just wondering if the authors ok and all its been a while and the last time the post was about being sick Soo just hope you can just update to let us know if you're ok
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Very good, except the author fell ill and stopped updating, hope you are okay mate, hope you don't live in China either. See you soon?
Great story with lots of diversity. Poor Grammer has you re-read many parts. Still I recommend this story to anyone and hope for more releases soon.
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Good book with multiple things taken from other book which look good and interesting simple and clean story I would like if author keep writing this book.
Great novel -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
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When do you plan to update Mr.Author? It's been a week already. Did you catch NCOV?!! .😱😱 ...this 145 character sh*t ! What kind of rule is this? .... .... Shdeoiqbdbdueiejqbhsifkebwifhbrueiwnfbfvkrlqoqiwhrbrnflfo fifhenid djd durbis die gd dis sus dhdignr wiwkd durvru. Rudidvdv dudbruejwnooaoghwoehrtonrbbrieconsistingd dhd wlwbfvruskwnvdd.
I absolutely love this story it takes popular themes from a few different genres and creates something eye catching and unique the story has gotten hot very quickly and I understand the author is sick but I'm worried that the longer they go without updates most people will loose interest in the book and when then author will be left without any readers but I hope he comes back soon this book is just too good to let go
Where is logic behind? First: mc who was transported to other world with no reason, family that thought that they give him happy life knowing nothing and best friend turning into a psychopath. Wtf... I read only to 9th chapter, but as I see there's no sense in this novel. I can understand that some can like this but I suspected more from that score.
I like the story, and i hope he will get his revenge on his family for stealing his card ^#&#&#&&#&#&#&&#&#&$&#&#&&#&$&$&$&&$hxhdjjsjsjdjjdjjdhdjdjdjrjjdj
Nice novel and hope you get better soon. Just started reading this novel and decided to rate it 5 stars for pure greatness. ####################################
The story has a lot of tropes found in Chinese stories, cultivation, transmigration etc. but it's told in a very pleasing way. I don't care much for the characters names - the only one that seems to have any significance is Alex's last name. As the story progresses a lot of strands get dropped and left out but there's a lot of interesting original material introduced. I can tell Megalomaniac has a vast world within this story and it's exciting and makes me want to hear more. I actually really like the somewhat sparse style of writing, you get the main points down and the story can move along quickly. I absolutely couldn't put the story down and finished it all in one chunk, which is definitely a testament to Megalomaniac's writing!
Really like the story and world every character is instesting. And the main character is likeble i would definetly reccomend this story . Feedback: There is only one thing is dislike about the story progression this might be solved at a later point in the story It is that sometimes awesome possibiletys in the world are teased and than later in the story it turns out the main character cant make use of this for balancing reasons The biggest example would be a teacher showing a cool card(magic abiletie) he obtained in a alternate world . And later we are told that the mc does not have the abilety to obtain cards this way. Which is dissipointing I also feel like balacing is taken to far mc had to work incredebly hard for his adventage however the adventage turns out to be just as big of a disadventige in some regards
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This is a good story. I think the author take some idea from super gene. Overall the story is interesting and something new. The mc got character and work hard. Other people also have their own caracter and not behaving like puppet where if 1 is villain all other will also be. There are also minimal grammatical and word error. Even if there is,you still can understand the story. Author also got high update and realease rate. And the story development and world background is also good. In which author always make us wanting for more. Overall the story is awesome. Cant wait for more. Thanks author. Keep up the good work
Maaaaan I wish I had not rea this novel.........because now I have to wait for chapters like everyone else! God this is torturous because this is an awesome novel!
Great read after a long time.❤❤ Great read after a long time.❤❤Great read after a long time.❤❤Great read after a long time.❤❤Great read after a long time.❤❤
It's an okay story, it makes you excited to read more. The world background is quite interesting and there is some mystery around his family and his (ex) best friend. It's just that I don't like the turn it has been given to the harem direction. Please don't make this an harem, author.
Amazing, I love how you took the best parts of different famous novels and fused them together to create this beautifull piece of art. I can't wait for more
Nice book . It is like moving into a different world . Everything is told in a way that it feels is really happening . It takes into parallel world which belong to cards as compared to technology.
The start is illogical, parents are ‘mysterious’ idiots who thought not training their child even a little would be a happy life and would help the Mc. Probably a happy childhood, but later on He would be honestly bitter that they hadn’t taught him earlier, I mean I would be(especially if I got plot armor). honestly think the author would be a terrible perent if he was in that kind of setting, making his child not be able to defend itself until it starts doing the training when everyone else starts. I mean if the so called parents are mysterious and powerful as you set them up to be, you should probably still teach the child how to do the basics. I mean I would teach my child to defend himself, instead of teaching them later and hope that they just ‘maybe’ will magically have plot armor. This novel had better potential if the foundation of the plot was better, some logical reason to why he wasn’t able to train in the basics would be nice as well.
Love the story so far but I kind of feel like the main character took the world and plotting all that from another novel but I'm having trouble remembering at the moment for some reason but changed a few things about it since I'm not that far into it but so far it looks like an amazing novel
Although the story is very good.the idea of story is basically stolen from SUPER GENE.. maybe the background story is different the story ideas about the shelters and new world are same.
Atlast got some good novel to pass time. The updates are very good compare to some big novel. Reader's should definitely try this once and give the story a chance that it deserves, it is definitely worth giving time to. Keep up the good work🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘
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A fantastic novel with a good story, excellent plot progression but sadly it seems there are no more updates, it only ever the good novels that get dropped on webnovel.
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Spoiler de révélation I love this novel just wondering if the authors ok and all its been a while and the last time the post was about being sick Soo just hope you can just update to let us know if you're ok
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Very good, except the author fell ill and stopped updating, hope you are okay mate, hope you don't live in China either. See you soon?
Great story with lots of diversity. Poor Grammer has you re-read many parts. Still I recommend this story to anyone and hope for more releases soon.
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Good book with multiple things taken from other book which look good and interesting simple and clean story I would like if author keep writing this book.
Great novel -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
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When do you plan to update Mr.Author? It's been a week already. Did you catch NCOV?!! .😱😱 ...this 145 character sh*t ! What kind of rule is this? .... .... Shdeoiqbdbdueiejqbhsifkebwifhbrueiwnfbfvkrlqoqiwhrbrnflfo fifhenid djd durbis die gd dis sus dhdignr wiwkd durvru. Rudidvdv dudbruejwnooaoghwoehrtonrbbrieconsistingd dhd wlwbfvruskwnvdd.
I absolutely love this story it takes popular themes from a few different genres and creates something eye catching and unique the story has gotten hot very quickly and I understand the author is sick but I'm worried that the longer they go without updates most people will loose interest in the book and when then author will be left without any readers but I hope he comes back soon this book is just too good to let go
Where is logic behind? First: mc who was transported to other world with no reason, family that thought that they give him happy life knowing nothing and best friend turning into a psychopath. Wtf... I read only to 9th chapter, but as I see there's no sense in this novel. I can understand that some can like this but I suspected more from that score.
I like the story, and i hope he will get his revenge on his family for stealing his card ^#&#&#&&#&#&#&&#&#&$&#&#&&#&$&$&$&&$hxhdjjsjsjdjjdjjdhdjdjdjrjjdj
Nice novel and hope you get better soon. Just started reading this novel and decided to rate it 5 stars for pure greatness. ####################################
The story has a lot of tropes found in Chinese stories, cultivation, transmigration etc. but it's told in a very pleasing way. I don't care much for the characters names - the only one that seems to have any significance is Alex's last name. As the story progresses a lot of strands get dropped and left out but there's a lot of interesting original material introduced. I can tell Megalomaniac has a vast world within this story and it's exciting and makes me want to hear more. I actually really like the somewhat sparse style of writing, you get the main points down and the story can move along quickly. I absolutely couldn't put the story down and finished it all in one chunk, which is definitely a testament to Megalomaniac's writing!
Really like the story and world every character is instesting. And the main character is likeble i would definetly reccomend this story . Feedback: There is only one thing is dislike about the story progression this might be solved at a later point in the story It is that sometimes awesome possibiletys in the world are teased and than later in the story it turns out the main character cant make use of this for balancing reasons The biggest example would be a teacher showing a cool card(magic abiletie) he obtained in a alternate world . And later we are told that the mc does not have the abilety to obtain cards this way. Which is dissipointing I also feel like balacing is taken to far mc had to work incredebly hard for his adventage however the adventage turns out to be just as big of a disadventige in some regards
Spoiler de révélation This is a good story. I think the author take some idea from super gene. Overall the story is interesting and something new. The mc got character and work hard. Other people also have their own caracter and not behaving like puppet where if 1 is villain all other will also be. There are also minimal grammatical and word error. Even if there is,you still can understand the story. Author also got high update and realease rate. And the story development and world background is also good. In which author always make us wanting for more. Overall the story is awesome. Cant wait for more. Thanks author. Keep up the good work
Maaaaan I wish I had not rea this novel.........because now I have to wait for chapters like everyone else! God this is torturous because this is an awesome novel!
Great read after a long time.❤❤ Great read after a long time.❤❤Great read after a long time.❤❤Great read after a long time.❤❤Great read after a long time.❤❤
It's an okay story, it makes you excited to read more. The world background is quite interesting and there is some mystery around his family and his (ex) best friend. It's just that I don't like the turn it has been given to the harem direction. Please don't make this an harem, author.
Amazing, I love how you took the best parts of different famous novels and fused them together to create this beautifull piece of art. I can't wait for more
Nice book . It is like moving into a different world . Everything is told in a way that it feels is really happening . It takes into parallel world which belong to cards as compared to technology.
The start is illogical, parents are ‘mysterious’ idiots who thought not training their child even a little would be a happy life and would help the Mc. Probably a happy childhood, but later on He would be honestly bitter that they hadn’t taught him earlier, I mean I would be(especially if I got plot armor). honestly think the author would be a terrible perent if he was in that kind of setting, making his child not be able to defend itself until it starts doing the training when everyone else starts. I mean if the so called parents are mysterious and powerful as you set them up to be, you should probably still teach the child how to do the basics. I mean I would teach my child to defend himself, instead of teaching them later and hope that they just ‘maybe’ will magically have plot armor. This novel had better potential if the foundation of the plot was better, some logical reason to why he wasn’t able to train in the basics would be nice as well.
Love the story so far but I kind of feel like the main character took the world and plotting all that from another novel but I'm having trouble remembering at the moment for some reason but changed a few things about it since I'm not that far into it but so far it looks like an amazing novel
Although the story is very good.the idea of story is basically stolen from SUPER GENE.. maybe the background story is different the story ideas about the shelters and new world are same.
Atlast got some good novel to pass time. The updates are very good compare to some big novel. Reader's should definitely try this once and give the story a chance that it deserves, it is definitely worth giving time to. Keep up the good work🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.