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this novel is a masterpiece, great story and good start. i need more tho:D im addicted haha but it seems its dropped? f f f f f f f f f f f f
There is not a lot flaws with story that I can point out so I won't do that -- instead I will say what a great story this is. I believe this story to be well written and excellently done the writer, although updates appear to have stagnated... Anyway, in my opinion, I'd recommend reading this story if readers like One Piece fanfiction and OP characters. .
[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Great story I would recommend that u read it. But if u don't like it after u read then read it again and again until u do.
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Paragraphs are wider than Nicki Minaj's arse but not irritating as other stories.
Read this because it had good reviews but now I know that the reviews were wayyyyy wrong lol story is just trash.
Slow plot development. MC without ambition, MC as the baby sitter of the main protagonist aka Luffy. Disappointing to me , buff's main ability but MC prefers devil fruit and has training and a body that is much weaker than the others even though he has a system, yeah like the system is useless
I really enjoy your story and I hope you can one day finish it, I hope you realize that the idiots who comment are only like 2% of the rest of us, but no pressure fam.
No harem? Sweet I thought that was extinct in webnovel already👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😭
Over all this is a good story. Good story and character development. Some spelling and grammar mistakes here and there. Please don't drop this story.
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This is an awesome book. While it is a little slow in the starting but the author uses this chance to really develop the characters especially the relationships between Ace, Luffy, Sabo, and the mc. I would recommend this to anyone who is a fan of One Piece
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Spoiler de révélation this novel is a masterpiece, great story and good start. i need more tho:D im addicted haha but it seems its dropped? f f f f f f f f f f f f
There is not a lot flaws with story that I can point out so I won't do that -- instead I will say what a great story this is. I believe this story to be well written and excellently done the writer, although updates appear to have stagnated... Anyway, in my opinion, I'd recommend reading this story if readers like One Piece fanfiction and OP characters. .
[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Great story I would recommend that u read it. But if u don't like it after u read then read it again and again until u do.
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Paragraphs are wider than Nicki Minaj's arse but not irritating as other stories.
Read this because it had good reviews but now I know that the reviews were wayyyyy wrong lol story is just trash.
Slow plot development. MC without ambition, MC as the baby sitter of the main protagonist aka Luffy. Disappointing to me , buff's main ability but MC prefers devil fruit and has training and a body that is much weaker than the others even though he has a system, yeah like the system is useless
I really enjoy your story and I hope you can one day finish it, I hope you realize that the idiots who comment are only like 2% of the rest of us, but no pressure fam.
No harem? Sweet I thought that was extinct in webnovel already👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😭
Over all this is a good story. Good story and character development. Some spelling and grammar mistakes here and there. Please don't drop this story.
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This is an awesome book. While it is a little slow in the starting but the author uses this chance to really develop the characters especially the relationships between Ace, Luffy, Sabo, and the mc. I would recommend this to anyone who is a fan of One Piece
Big Plot Hole 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
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