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OK THIS WAS GREAT.DONT DROP IF HE GOT ADOPTED.IT HAS SO MANY HEARTWARMING MOMENTS.COME ON HE IS A GRANDPA.WATCHING OVER CHILD AND SO ON.LOVE IT PLS DONT DROP IT GIVING MY DAILY CRYSTALS TO YOU
Hey I like this book please write again soon and please let us know if you can't so id like to vote more but I can't spend more than 1 a day (I'm poor)
This by far the best dragon MC book I've read so far. I really hope you keep feeling like crafting this story, it's good. It's definitely a change of pace with an old man instead of a young bullied kid. It's very enjoyable and wholesome to read, while still bringing that sense of fear, surprise, and exhilaration.
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I NEED MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR It's an absolutely amazing peace of work. I love the characters, I love the writing, and I love the character design. Trying to remember the map was a tad bit hard. Other than that, the writing is like a gourmet meal for eyes and brain :)[img=recommend]
This is an amazing book, it's characters feel real, and I can read it and see almost no errors in grammar across the entire book. Only problem is that it hasn't updated for a while. Can't wait till the author releases next chapter!
weeeeeell...how should i say this? the novel is good And all but...i don't know when you are reading this but for me I AM waiting for an eternity...im my opinion the only "flaw" this story has is the absurdly time i am waiting at least a month has passed and still nothing. but i seriously recomend It!
Really great stuff. Had me hooked from the first chapter! The characterization, world building, and action are all really good. The only gripe I have (Not really that much a gripe.) is the update frequency. But thats only cause i can't wait for more!
This book is SOOOO awesome! I highly reccomend it. The only thing that I wish would be different is that there are the occasional curse words, I don't like that bit too much.
This novel is satisfying. I don't know why. Just try it guys. An old man Who become a dragon and wanted to live peacefully instead of creating chaos. 😍
Dragon race - alpha predators. Proud independent wise and truly impressive. But! these words are not about the hero of this story!!! If you want to read about the pet dragon this is for you. I really disrespect the author, with his story he dishonors the dragon race.
Please please please more chapters? Your story is super good ! Checking back everyday for more chapters 🙂 My favorite book/story on this site so far.
I love this novel so much.❤ especially some of the side characters and the small "conversations" the author has with the mc. but it takes so long for it to update.
I thought this was a well written and engaging tale of a life an unexpected life after death. The acceptance of the main character of their fate after having lived a full life in the human world seems to fit someone who has securely established their identity over a lifetime. His journey in moving onward from his previous life and saying goodbye to who he was, even as he never truly forgets that life, is a believable affair as it occurs over time. The treasures of the memories of his loved ones that grew to lead lives of their own is a well thought out pattern of development that sees him come to accept his new existence as a 'lizard'. There is one thing that can be disorienting whenever it occurs in your story. For me, the abrupt and randomly placed shifts in vantage point can be a tad confusing. There seems to be no distinction in the narrative or structure of the wording to indicate such an event has occurred, leaving the reader clueless at times when there aren't sufficient contextual clues to know whose view we are experiencing. There also seems to be a number of elements that are common to other dragon related media strewn throughout your story. Whether that is coincidental or intentional is not a question I can answer of course, but I can presume what types of inspirations you may have had for the behaviors of the 'lizard' main character. The real complexity of your story is shown through the drips and drabs of the nature of the wider world in which your tale occurs. You slowly but surely explore the intricacies of that world in a way, that while being conservative in quantity, refrains from seeming needlessly expository. A great story when it's all said and done though. An adventure that I will have no problem in continuing to read more of in the time to come and eagerly await the next addition.
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Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
It's been so long since the last chapter! I super want to know what's going to happen ur torturing us simpletons D: I check back every day for updates, hope u are doing well :D
This story is excellent for the most part. The main issue is the characters. An example would be our protagonist. He will say stuff like ‘Im too old for this’ and ‘Im not suited for this’ but the next moment he will ignore his instincts and charge right into danger because he is curious. I wouldn’t mind it as much if it didn’t happen so frequently or if he just picked a side. There is another character called Bryn who is an idiot that doesnt think anthing through, yet our protagonist keeps helping him even though its putting people, including himself in danger. No one ever seems to tell Bryn no or actually make any effort to stop him. For an grandpa and who reincarnated, he certainly doesnt know how to raise/deal with children. He seems more like a stereotypical overly doting noble grandfather in a typical isekai story who allows his grandchildren to become arrogant cannon fodder destined to be taken down.
Spoiler de révélation Gosh darn it this is so good I check back everyday to see if there's a new chapter, when this is finished you've got to do a GoFundMe or something to get some hardback books made!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
The book would have failed if any lesser writer wrote it, but the writer managed to make you feel for the characters, an show how characters grew, and finally accept what's around them, and live there life. 10/5 stars for the writing style alone
This has caught my attention and never let go. I can not wait for the next chapter! The MC is amazing. The way he's trying to learn just makes the waiting for him to learn something new so much harder.
Writing quality. Not terrible but you can find some mistakes. Unstable updates. The story is the main character's life as pet for humans. He refuses to accept himself as a beast and actively pursues human relations in spite all of the negatives and threats it could entail. He never once pursed friendship with beast even after being proven that they too have thoughts of reason. World backgrouns. Almost none.
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Absolutely love this story, the interactions Finn has with his family, the characters, everything. I also enjoy how he has to fight with his pride rooted in his instincts to avoid doing something that he as a person would regret. Eagerly awaiting new chapers! 😊
OK THIS WAS GREAT.DONT DROP IF HE GOT ADOPTED.IT HAS SO MANY HEARTWARMING MOMENTS.COME ON HE IS A GRANDPA.WATCHING OVER CHILD AND SO ON.LOVE IT PLS DONT DROP IT GIVING MY DAILY CRYSTALS TO YOU
Hey I like this book please write again soon and please let us know if you can't so id like to vote more but I can't spend more than 1 a day (I'm poor)
This by far the best dragon MC book I've read so far. I really hope you keep feeling like crafting this story, it's good. It's definitely a change of pace with an old man instead of a young bullied kid. It's very enjoyable and wholesome to read, while still bringing that sense of fear, surprise, and exhilaration.
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I NEED MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR It's an absolutely amazing peace of work. I love the characters, I love the writing, and I love the character design. Trying to remember the map was a tad bit hard. Other than that, the writing is like a gourmet meal for eyes and brain :)[img=recommend]
This is an amazing book, it's characters feel real, and I can read it and see almost no errors in grammar across the entire book. Only problem is that it hasn't updated for a while. Can't wait till the author releases next chapter!
weeeeeell...how should i say this? the novel is good And all but...i don't know when you are reading this but for me I AM waiting for an eternity...im my opinion the only "flaw" this story has is the absurdly time i am waiting at least a month has passed and still nothing. but i seriously recomend It!
Really great stuff. Had me hooked from the first chapter! The characterization, world building, and action are all really good. The only gripe I have (Not really that much a gripe.) is the update frequency. But thats only cause i can't wait for more!
This book is SOOOO awesome! I highly reccomend it. The only thing that I wish would be different is that there are the occasional curse words, I don't like that bit too much.
This novel is satisfying. I don't know why. Just try it guys. An old man Who become a dragon and wanted to live peacefully instead of creating chaos. 😍
Dragon race - alpha predators. Proud independent wise and truly impressive. But! these words are not about the hero of this story!!! If you want to read about the pet dragon this is for you. I really disrespect the author, with his story he dishonors the dragon race.
Please please please more chapters? Your story is super good ! Checking back everyday for more chapters 🙂 My favorite book/story on this site so far.
I love this novel so much.❤ especially some of the side characters and the small "conversations" the author has with the mc. but it takes so long for it to update.
I thought this was a well written and engaging tale of a life an unexpected life after death. The acceptance of the main character of their fate after having lived a full life in the human world seems to fit someone who has securely established their identity over a lifetime. His journey in moving onward from his previous life and saying goodbye to who he was, even as he never truly forgets that life, is a believable affair as it occurs over time. The treasures of the memories of his loved ones that grew to lead lives of their own is a well thought out pattern of development that sees him come to accept his new existence as a 'lizard'. There is one thing that can be disorienting whenever it occurs in your story. For me, the abrupt and randomly placed shifts in vantage point can be a tad confusing. There seems to be no distinction in the narrative or structure of the wording to indicate such an event has occurred, leaving the reader clueless at times when there aren't sufficient contextual clues to know whose view we are experiencing. There also seems to be a number of elements that are common to other dragon related media strewn throughout your story. Whether that is coincidental or intentional is not a question I can answer of course, but I can presume what types of inspirations you may have had for the behaviors of the 'lizard' main character. The real complexity of your story is shown through the drips and drabs of the nature of the wider world in which your tale occurs. You slowly but surely explore the intricacies of that world in a way, that while being conservative in quantity, refrains from seeming needlessly expository. A great story when it's all said and done though. An adventure that I will have no problem in continuing to read more of in the time to come and eagerly await the next addition.
GOOD.......................................................GOOD.......................................................GOOD.......................................................
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Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
It's been so long since the last chapter! I super want to know what's going to happen ur torturing us simpletons D: I check back every day for updates, hope u are doing well :D
This story is excellent for the most part. The main issue is the characters. An example would be our protagonist. He will say stuff like ‘Im too old for this’ and ‘Im not suited for this’ but the next moment he will ignore his instincts and charge right into danger because he is curious. I wouldn’t mind it as much if it didn’t happen so frequently or if he just picked a side. There is another character called Bryn who is an idiot that doesnt think anthing through, yet our protagonist keeps helping him even though its putting people, including himself in danger. No one ever seems to tell Bryn no or actually make any effort to stop him. For an grandpa and who reincarnated, he certainly doesnt know how to raise/deal with children. He seems more like a stereotypical overly doting noble grandfather in a typical isekai story who allows his grandchildren to become arrogant cannon fodder destined to be taken down.
Spoiler de révélation Gosh darn it this is so good I check back everyday to see if there's a new chapter, when this is finished you've got to do a GoFundMe or something to get some hardback books made!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
The book would have failed if any lesser writer wrote it, but the writer managed to make you feel for the characters, an show how characters grew, and finally accept what's around them, and live there life. 10/5 stars for the writing style alone
This has caught my attention and never let go. I can not wait for the next chapter! The MC is amazing. The way he's trying to learn just makes the waiting for him to learn something new so much harder.
Writing quality. Not terrible but you can find some mistakes. Unstable updates. The story is the main character's life as pet for humans. He refuses to accept himself as a beast and actively pursues human relations in spite all of the negatives and threats it could entail. He never once pursed friendship with beast even after being proven that they too have thoughts of reason. World backgrouns. Almost none.
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Absolutely love this story, the interactions Finn has with his family, the characters, everything. I also enjoy how he has to fight with his pride rooted in his instincts to avoid doing something that he as a person would regret. Eagerly awaiting new chapers! 😊