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Devil's Luck[Arc 5: Worlds Apart]

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Auteur: FroztDouluo

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Synopsis

Zenkichi Hitoyoshi is a young man, destined to be chained by fate in the early story of canon. He was a man without ambition, drive, will and talent to become something great. Well, that'll soon change. For better, or for worse.

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AN: Alright, let's do this one last time, probably. Here's another Medaka Box fanfic that I hope it'll get to a hundred chapters before I drop it, or not? It depends on life really.

And positive comments and reviews, I don't really care much of power stones(tho, that doesn't mean you can't...) but positive feedback on my work really inspires me more to write.

Want to check out my pa-treon and be ahead of your fellow WN kin? Well here's the link: pa–treon.com/FroztDouluo

*Just get rid of the dash.

Edit: I just changed it to Gilgamesh because... Zenkichi basically almost resembles him at this point(I didn't planned for this happen)

Schedule and the amount of chapters I'd be popping out? Tuesday and Thursday(UTC +8), 2–3 chapters a week(it's usually just 2 chapters because I'm slow at making anime related stories).

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CartoonSensei

Zenkichi Hitoyoshi x naze youka || Zenkichi Hitoyoshi x naze youka || Zenkichi Hitoyoshi x naze youka || Zenkichi Hitoyoshi x naze youka...

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1yr
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Gishi_4187

okay well, it was great until the merger of another anime world that destroyed the flow of the story, and from there onwards, the story and plot went downhill. Anyway, I'm most likely gonna drop this fic from my library because I can't see this fic getting better.

1yr
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Matheus_Pascheto

it started great but after the chapters 15 the story only went down Hill , i read only till chapters 63 and couldnt continue.inglish is not my primary leanguage.

11mth
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LeafPanda

This story isn't that interesting, especially when the characters aren't really acting as they should be. But I guess people have different interest

7mth
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Phaze_MorningStar2

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1yr
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spectra_phantom

Why did the first medaka box fanfic fall, it was going really well, both the episode length was good and the comments were good, I fully trust you. medaka <3

1yr
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LunaKindred

MC is a doll, that's all. You read jjk? You know itadori yuji? Yes, this MC's fics is like him, protagonist but feels like npc. Don't waste your time to read this... Trust me, even the tier 3 harem fics will have a better story plot

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5mth
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FroztDouluo

Nothing to see here, just an author shamelessly submitting a five star review of his own work because he felt like it😗

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1yr
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MonkeReviewer

End of the first volume: Everything was going great untill the addition of other systems and anime, manhwas, etc.. Pro: 1. Writing is clear and understandable 2. System mechanics are very logicical and I can understand your thoughts behind it 3. Very interesting first chapter with a great hook Cons: 1. Spreads it self too far Explanation; it was going really well until you decided to add more animes/manhwas because you just kept adding them too fast and didn’t give us enough time for us to take in or enjoy them especially when you decided to randomly put in dangaropa into the picture after we’ve just see you include in record of ragnarok, iruma-kun, lookism, etc.. but, not only that you then decided to put the mc through a percarious event without any build up which again is going really fast and felt forced to me. 2. The system has too many mechanics Explanation; again like the last con your spreading yourself too much and just adding more work for yourself with the Chat system. And, I can try to guess and say that you did it so you can have more adventures for the mc but you already have soo much to work on so it feels very rushed. 3. The story feels rushed Explanation: you were doing pretty good for the first few chapters but it felt very rushed after you decided to add other animes. And, it seems like you were just adding things to make the story interesting but it just comes out as very rushed. Conclusion: Solid intro and story but please try not to spread yourself thin and rush yourself because you have potential and I don’t want to see you get burnt out on writing. Also, maybe take more time when thinking about your story and try not to worry too much about updates. Overall, I give this a 3.9/5

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Phaze_MorningStar2

I liked it at first but it got more and more unbearable The mc feels more like a side characterAnd the world background feels a bit rushed

5mth
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RandomFateFan

First of all,It's a good fic, while it does have it's ups and down(looking at you arc 2), it is overall pretty good. Arc 5 is really good for now(atlest the second part of it), anyway i like the Mc and the characthers they are really fun. Not much more to say, i am not the best with reviews.

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dankoku

realized I never reviewed this, anyway, really good fanfic, characters are well done, MC is pretty decently OP, nothing to complain about.

11mth
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Khons
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I tried to bear with the story but couldn’t so I dropped it. It became to clique and unreadable. This is sad because no one writes about Medaka Box.

5mth
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Outer_God_Azathoth

ONE OF MY FAVORITE FANFIC!!

9mth
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lord_of_cinder

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LifelessMan

Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work

1yr
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fakeDarkestknight2

wkwkwkw bruh your cover Made zenkichi look like Riser with milking ai stuff

5mth
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Kinen_Rockmore

don't know what to say so I will just type gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggGGGGGGGGGGGggggggggggggggggggggggg

8mth
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Curios_Theories

Read it, is a good fic ....….................................….................................….................................….............................

8mth
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Mea_Cu1pa

"No hay fuerza en la carne, solo debilidad". "No hay constancia en la carne, solo decadencia". "No hay certeza en la carne sino en la muerte"

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Volume 5 : Arc 5: Worlds Apart

  1. 101
    Chapter 100: Into the Holy Land 8 months ago
  2. 102
    Chapter 101: Lancelot 8 months ago
  3. 103
    Chapter 102: Two Kings 8 months ago
  4. 104
    Chapter 103: Interception 7 months ago
  5. 105
    Chapter 104: Knights of the Roundtable 7 months ago
  6. 106
    Chapter 105: Unexpected Situation 7 months ago
  7. 107
    Chapter 106: Fateful Encounter 7 months ago
  8. 108
    Chapter 107: New Servants 7 months ago
  9. 109
    Chapter 108: Ozymandias 7 months ago
  10. 110
    Chapter 109 7 months ago
  11. 111
    Chapter 110: Unexpected Situation 7 months ago
  12. 112
    Chapter 111: Into Enemy Territory 6 months ago
  13. 113
    Chapter 112: Meeting Last Master 6 months ago
  14. 114
    Chapter 113: Parallel Worlds 6 months ago
  15. 115
    Chapter 114: Holy Selection 6 months ago
  16. 116
    Chapter 115: Battle Against the Lion King 6 months ago
  17. 117
    Chapter 116: Kill Emiya Shirou 6 months ago
  18. 118
    Chapter 117: Unlimited Blade Works 5 months ago
  19. 119
    Chapter 118: A Fate Stay Night 5 months ago
  20. 120
    Chapter 119: Reinforcement 5 months ago
  21. 121
    Chapter 120: Camelot's End 5 months ago
  22. 122
    Chapter 121: Chaldea 5 months ago
  23. 123
    Chapter 122: Chaldea Tour 5 months ago
  24. 124
    Chapter 123: Unexpected Meeting 5 months ago
  25. 125
    Chapter 124: Briefing 5 months ago
  26. 126
    Chapter 125: Crash Landing 5 months ago
  27. 127
    Chapter 126: Mortals, Gods and Monsters(1) 4 months ago
  28. 128
    Chapter 127: Mortals, Gods and Monsters(2) 4 months ago
  29. 129
    Chapter 128: Mortals, Gods and Monsters(3) 4 months ago
  30. 130
    Chapter 129: Mortals, Gods and Monsters(4) 4 months ago
  31. 131
    Chapter 130: Mortals, Gods and Monsters[5] 4 months ago
  32. 132
    Chapter 131: Monster of Gluttony 4 months ago
  33. 133
    Chapter 132: Devil Style, The End Devours 4 months ago
  34. 134
    Chapter 133: Aftermath 4 months ago
  35. 135
    Chapter 134: Confirming the Situation 4 months ago
  36. 136
    Chapter 135: Meeting New Faces 3 months ago
  37. 137
    Chapter 136: Daily Life in Uruk 3 months ago
  38. 138
    Chapter 137: Ghosts 3 months ago
  39. 139
    Chapter 138: Underworld 3 months ago
  40. 140
    Chapter 139: Ereshkigal 3 months ago
  41. 141
    Chapter 140: Surrounded + 6969 3 months ago
  42. 142
    Chapter 141: Burst Out 1 months ago
  43. 143
    Chapter 142: Weird Encounter 1 months ago
  44. 144
    Chapter 143: Strange Skeleton 1 months ago
  45. 145
    Chapter 144: Ur 26 days ago
  46. 146
    Chapter 145: Greed 25 days ago
  47. 147
    Quick Rant 25 days ago
  48. 148
    Chapter 146: Sloth 19 days ago
  49. 149
    Chapter 147: Three Goddess Alliance 18 days ago
  50. 150
    Chapter 148: Quetzalcoatl, Sun God 12 days ago
  51. 151
    Omake[Non-Canon]: Solo Leveling 11 days ago
  52. 152
    Chapter 149: Quetzalcoatl Get! 5 days ago
  53. 153
    Chapter 150: The Lucha Libre Welcoming(18+) 4 days ago

Auteur FroztDouluo