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it was amazing... writing a short story is not easy. one have to think what to write and what to leave .. which character is important... and, on top of that, one might feel there was lot to write but didn't get to do so. it was beautifully written.
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Okay I rarely have a Novel with a 5 star🌟 rating lol. Just because of the stability most times. And if I love what I read I always leave a review to inspire someone to give it a shot. However it didn’t feel right to not give this anthology the best rating as it’s so worth it. I’m late to the game as this short story book has been around for some time and I by chance got to read it today. And am I glad to come across this gem of a novel. It’s perfect to read in 1 sitting. And the angst is real. I felt all the happiness and shared the grief too. Do give this book a shot. I have all the other books of this author’s in my library already and will start with “The Cursed Prince”. I wish you immense success dear Author 🙏 like J. K. Rowling’s or even of Ludwina’s 😝 💕🥰
I love all your novels I'd give you ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Because somehow you always make it worth the wait As for this one this is a real good teaser ♥️♥️💯
I really loved these stories. .. first and second stories were awesome. .. .. pls do write more stories like this. .. .i feel like after ages I have read something, which touched my heart. .. .pls do write more short sensitive stories like that. .. love your work. .. .God bless you
This story was really sad and it was really sweet and it reminded me of the movie Seven Pounds. It was an amazing read even though it was really short.
Good work. well done. The story really reads well and in spite of the fact that it is short, one can really feel all the emotions and feelings that the characters have. Well done ...
Short, sweet, and a tearjerker would love to see a longer version as well where you could feel the characters and the intensity of their emotions...
THANK YOU for reading this very short story. I wanted to make it into a novel but unfortunately, I don't have the time, so I decided to turn it into a one-shot. I hope you will give it a read. It's only two chapters, but you will feel like you read a whole book.
Although the story only has 2 chapter, It form an entire story in my head as the author relay it well. It was well summarize. It consists of romance and forlorn. It was sad, yet sweet and reasonable. The feeling I got from reading the 2 chap caught me unaware, cuz I never expected much from it at first. You should check it out. This is what I believe to be short and crispy ✌
Wow, the stories flashed by so fast yet illicited such deep emotions. I was so impressed with how our dear writer weaved the worlds in such a short time and was able to tell such powerful stories of love, life and death. Worth the read!
it was amazing... writing a short story is not easy. one have to think what to write and what to leave .. which character is important... and, on top of that, one might feel there was lot to write but didn't get to do so. it was beautifully written.
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Okay I rarely have a Novel with a 5 star🌟 rating lol. Just because of the stability most times. And if I love what I read I always leave a review to inspire someone to give it a shot. However it didn’t feel right to not give this anthology the best rating as it’s so worth it. I’m late to the game as this short story book has been around for some time and I by chance got to read it today. And am I glad to come across this gem of a novel. It’s perfect to read in 1 sitting. And the angst is real. I felt all the happiness and shared the grief too. Do give this book a shot. I have all the other books of this author’s in my library already and will start with “The Cursed Prince”. I wish you immense success dear Author 🙏 like J. K. Rowling’s or even of Ludwina’s 😝 💕🥰
I love all your novels I'd give you ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Because somehow you always make it worth the wait As for this one this is a real good teaser ♥️♥️💯
I really loved these stories. .. first and second stories were awesome. .. .. pls do write more stories like this. .. .i feel like after ages I have read something, which touched my heart. .. .pls do write more short sensitive stories like that. .. love your work. .. .God bless you
This story was really sad and it was really sweet and it reminded me of the movie Seven Pounds. It was an amazing read even though it was really short.
Good work. well done. The story really reads well and in spite of the fact that it is short, one can really feel all the emotions and feelings that the characters have. Well done ...
Short, sweet, and a tearjerker would love to see a longer version as well where you could feel the characters and the intensity of their emotions...
THANK YOU for reading this very short story. I wanted to make it into a novel but unfortunately, I don't have the time, so I decided to turn it into a one-shot. I hope you will give it a read. It's only two chapters, but you will feel like you read a whole book.
Although the story only has 2 chapter, It form an entire story in my head as the author relay it well. It was well summarize. It consists of romance and forlorn. It was sad, yet sweet and reasonable. The feeling I got from reading the 2 chap caught me unaware, cuz I never expected much from it at first. You should check it out. This is what I believe to be short and crispy ✌
Wow, the stories flashed by so fast yet illicited such deep emotions. I was so impressed with how our dear writer weaved the worlds in such a short time and was able to tell such powerful stories of love, life and death. Worth the read!