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Man hella good no not just good but awsome fanfic and man is it a new story concept with yamcha being the story mc and not any reincarnated or transmigrated in his body but the original one and with a source to get his powers and man is it very good i highly recommend this one.......
A great Yamcha story that actually starts way better then the rest I read so far. The grammar is great, the writing style is interesting an in generell it's very pleasant to read. Definitely recommend this :3 (I pray it won't be dropped :/)
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This story is a copy/paste. The original is on fanfiction.net. Search The Wolf Gets New Fangs by chachingmel123. This story is a copy/paste. The original is on fanfiction.net. Search The Wolf Gets New Fangs by chachingmel123. This story is a copy/paste. The original is on fanfiction.net. Search The Wolf Gets New Fangs by chachingmel123.
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Man hella good no not just good but awsome fanfic and man is it a new story concept with yamcha being the story mc and not any reincarnated or transmigrated in his body but the original one and with a source to get his powers and man is it very good i highly recommend this one.......
A great Yamcha story that actually starts way better then the rest I read so far. The grammar is great, the writing style is interesting an in generell it's very pleasant to read. Definitely recommend this :3 (I pray it won't be dropped :/)
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