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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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It is perfect and hidden piece of gem.... Tho the only caveat is the fact that every person he meets is another genius. Also MC is a bit too forgiving, gets punished for something he did not do but forgives them not to forward his personnel motives but cause of a little girl who could not even speak to defend him..... You can't just be altruistic always, but must give a read to it.
Keep it up bro. I like the way you have developed it.............................................................................................................................
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
It is perfect and hidden piece of gem.... Tho the only caveat is the fact that every person he meets is another genius. Also MC is a bit too forgiving, gets punished for something he did not do but forgives them not to forward his personnel motives but cause of a little girl who could not even speak to defend him..... You can't just be altruistic always, but must give a read to it.
Keep it up bro. I like the way you have developed it.............................................................................................................................
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.