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hi po mis hailey 😘 kinikiliiiig tlaga ako sa knila 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Sana dka po mgsasawa sa update lagi kopo inaabangan.. Salamat po sa mgandang create story eto po Ang pinaka no.1 novel for me..😍😍😍😍🙏🙏🙏🙏 ilove you miss hail..😘😘😘
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Kaabang abang Ang story!!! Update po pls.... Kaabang abang kung paano maghihigante si Hannah.??🤔 Mejo may kaunting typo error pero naiintindihan nmn po.
If you're new to Webnovel and this is your first Tagalog novel have read...then your standard will start high...ang galing ng author wlang patapon na chapter. Kaabang abang bawat update
Hi dear thank you sa update kahit medyo kabado ako na baka maagaw na ni hannah si yuan pero thankful pag rin ako dahil magkasama pag rin sila, inaabangan ko ang bawat updates mo, be safe and stay at home God bless to and your family 😍😍😍😍😍
Love you author.....🌹🌹🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍🌷🌷🌷 More update p plz...... I can't wait for the next chapter...😘😘😘🥰🥰🥰🥰. GOD BLESS ....STAY SAFE
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The flow was actually good. Two different characters; Isang matured at isang menor de edad. It can also be happen in real life. Galingan mo lang Dear. Medidate ka lang kapag down ka sa pagsulat 👍 🤗😘
OMG i was hooked by the story. Thanks for your wonderful creation author. I can feel the pain and hardship of Yuan and Aya's whirlwind romance but at the same time I am so "kilig". More more more more more updates author...pleeeaaasse😍😍😍👍👍👍
OMG! I was hooked by your story author...Thumbs up to your great creation. Expecting for a more exciting and sweetness overload upcoming chapters. More more more updates please author...
this is the first story I read in web novel and for the record this is the first story I finished reading in just 1 day... so excited for the updates..
Update po plz author.... Pwede po mas mhaba p .. ganda po flow ng story😍🥰😍🌷🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹(｡◕‿◕｡)➜(｡◕‿◕｡)➜(｡◕‿◕｡)➜(｡◕‿◕｡)➜(｡◕‿◕｡)➜(｡◕‿◕｡)➜😃😃😃😃
Nkkbitin...it hurts sa part nilang dalawa....sna mgkaintindihan at mgka-usap sila ng maayos....hay....nkk-mis yung lambingan nila... update p more po author..ganda n yung flow...🥰🥰🥰🌹🌹🌹🌷🌷🌷
Exciting ang plot, nakakakilig At marami pang nkaka... Maraming magtthrow s utak mo kapag binabasa mo na. Super ganda Super nakakaezcite tlaga
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Lagi aq nagcheck if my updated na npakagandang kwento kc Hindi Ang mga karakter sa kwento..nakakainganyong basahin sa katulad q na ngarap ng magandang ending sa isang relasyon..I hope na Yung bida sa kwento is maging matatag...ahhm author nakakabitin po imbes pa punta na sa pagpakilig biglang ng stop ..kc wla update...but thanks author sa npakagandang kwento na ibinahagi nyo po sa aming mambabasa...
Next chapter po plz.... Ganda ng flow ng story . update p more po author.... nkkkilig Piling teenager din ako sa binabasa ko....hay🥰🥰🥰
maganda ang story..marerealize mo sa kwentong to na kahit bata pa pwede rin magmahal ng wagas..ang kwento ringbito ang magbubukas ng kaisipan na huwagnpuro trabaho o business kundi ibalance ang pamilya at work..maraming bata ang nangangailangan ng pagmamahal hindi ng materyal na bagay
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Nice story po author...maganda po ang flow NG story... gusto ko yong character ni Yuan the way he respect Aya ganon din Kay Aya kahit sa murang isip nya natutuhan nyang magmahal sa taong malaki ang agwat ng edad nila age doesn't matter nga ika nga nila... fighting lng po sa relationship nyong dalawa Sana po author mapasaya mo po kmi sa susunod na chapter....❤️❤️❤️
Ako lang ba na atat lagi sa update? ung totoo nawalan ako ng gana sa ibang novel. Ito na lang inaabangan ko kung nag UD n b...lakas kasi mang bitin at magpakilig
Update please...... 3rd book ko pa Lang to na natatapos dito sa web novel. Madali KC aq mabore sa binabasa q. Kaya natutuwa aq kapag ganitong libro na magiging interesado aq. Kya more update please. It means that I really appreciate your work😊😍
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Ayieeeeee... Mtnda n ako pero kinikilig pdin ako! Bkit nga pla wala ng kasunod? Hayyyy.. Excited akong mlman kung anu kasunod.. May gnun kaya sa totoong buhay?
Pahabain nyo Ang story superrrr gandaaaaa♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️😭♥️😭😭♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Ang ganda nakaka kilig lakas maka young hehehe..sana mg update kapa. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❄❤❤❤
All in all....napakaganda ng kwento aabangan ko Ang susunod na magaganap....🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😂🥰😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🥰🥰🥰
Napakaganda ng plot na ginagawa ng author... A cute story that will hook up the reader.... I am waiting for more...👍👍👍👍Thanks to the author for this wonderful work.
Hidden Gem ❤️❤️❤️ magaling writing skills mo.. Bagal lang update ☹️☹️ Napaniwala mo ako na gwapo si Yuan and nakkainlove 😍😍😍 Pati na rin kung gaano ka lovable si Aya 😍😍
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hi po mis hailey 😘 kinikiliiiig tlaga ako sa knila 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Sana dka po mgsasawa sa update lagi kopo inaabangan.. Salamat po sa mgandang create story eto po Ang pinaka no.1 novel for me..😍😍😍😍🙏🙏🙏🙏 ilove you miss hail..😘😘😘
Spoiler de révélation Kaabang abang Ang story!!! Update po pls.... Kaabang abang kung paano maghihigante si Hannah.??🤔 Mejo may kaunting typo error pero naiintindihan nmn po.
If you're new to Webnovel and this is your first Tagalog novel have read...then your standard will start high...ang galing ng author wlang patapon na chapter. Kaabang abang bawat update
Hi dear thank you sa update kahit medyo kabado ako na baka maagaw na ni hannah si yuan pero thankful pag rin ako dahil magkasama pag rin sila, inaabangan ko ang bawat updates mo, be safe and stay at home God bless to and your family 😍😍😍😍😍
Love you author.....🌹🌹🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍🌷🌷🌷 More update p plz...... I can't wait for the next chapter...😘😘😘🥰🥰🥰🥰. GOD BLESS ....STAY SAFE
Spoiler de révélation The flow was actually good. Two different characters; Isang matured at isang menor de edad. It can also be happen in real life. Galingan mo lang Dear. Medidate ka lang kapag down ka sa pagsulat 👍 🤗😘
OMG i was hooked by the story. Thanks for your wonderful creation author. I can feel the pain and hardship of Yuan and Aya's whirlwind romance but at the same time I am so "kilig". More more more more more updates author...pleeeaaasse😍😍😍👍👍👍
OMG! I was hooked by your story author...Thumbs up to your great creation. Expecting for a more exciting and sweetness overload upcoming chapters. More more more updates please author...
this is the first story I read in web novel and for the record this is the first story I finished reading in just 1 day... so excited for the updates..
Update po plz author.... Pwede po mas mhaba p .. ganda po flow ng story😍🥰😍🌷🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹(｡◕‿◕｡)➜(｡◕‿◕｡)➜(｡◕‿◕｡)➜(｡◕‿◕｡)➜(｡◕‿◕｡)➜(｡◕‿◕｡)➜😃😃😃😃
Nkkbitin...it hurts sa part nilang dalawa....sna mgkaintindihan at mgka-usap sila ng maayos....hay....nkk-mis yung lambingan nila... update p more po author..ganda n yung flow...🥰🥰🥰🌹🌹🌹🌷🌷🌷
Exciting ang plot, nakakakilig At marami pang nkaka... Maraming magtthrow s utak mo kapag binabasa mo na. Super ganda Super nakakaezcite tlaga
Spoiler de révélation Lagi aq nagcheck if my updated na npakagandang kwento kc Hindi Ang mga karakter sa kwento..nakakainganyong basahin sa katulad q na ngarap ng magandang ending sa isang relasyon..I hope na Yung bida sa kwento is maging matatag...ahhm author nakakabitin po imbes pa punta na sa pagpakilig biglang ng stop ..kc wla update...but thanks author sa npakagandang kwento na ibinahagi nyo po sa aming mambabasa...
Next chapter po plz.... Ganda ng flow ng story . update p more po author.... nkkkilig Piling teenager din ako sa binabasa ko....hay🥰🥰🥰
maganda ang story..marerealize mo sa kwentong to na kahit bata pa pwede rin magmahal ng wagas..ang kwento ringbito ang magbubukas ng kaisipan na huwagnpuro trabaho o business kundi ibalance ang pamilya at work..maraming bata ang nangangailangan ng pagmamahal hindi ng materyal na bagay
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Nice story po author...maganda po ang flow NG story... gusto ko yong character ni Yuan the way he respect Aya ganon din Kay Aya kahit sa murang isip nya natutuhan nyang magmahal sa taong malaki ang agwat ng edad nila age doesn't matter nga ika nga nila... fighting lng po sa relationship nyong dalawa Sana po author mapasaya mo po kmi sa susunod na chapter....❤️❤️❤️
Ako lang ba na atat lagi sa update? ung totoo nawalan ako ng gana sa ibang novel. Ito na lang inaabangan ko kung nag UD n b...lakas kasi mang bitin at magpakilig
Update please...... 3rd book ko pa Lang to na natatapos dito sa web novel. Madali KC aq mabore sa binabasa q. Kaya natutuwa aq kapag ganitong libro na magiging interesado aq. Kya more update please. It means that I really appreciate your work😊😍
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Ayieeeeee... Mtnda n ako pero kinikilig pdin ako! Bkit nga pla wala ng kasunod? Hayyyy.. Excited akong mlman kung anu kasunod.. May gnun kaya sa totoong buhay?
Pahabain nyo Ang story superrrr gandaaaaa♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️😭♥️😭😭♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Ang ganda nakaka kilig lakas maka young hehehe..sana mg update kapa. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❄❤❤❤
All in all....napakaganda ng kwento aabangan ko Ang susunod na magaganap....🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😂🥰😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🥰🥰🥰
Napakaganda ng plot na ginagawa ng author... A cute story that will hook up the reader.... I am waiting for more...👍👍👍👍Thanks to the author for this wonderful work.
Hidden Gem ❤️❤️❤️ magaling writing skills mo.. Bagal lang update ☹️☹️ Napaniwala mo ako na gwapo si Yuan and nakkainlove 😍😍😍 Pati na rin kung gaano ka lovable si Aya 😍😍
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