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- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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DOPE..OP MC....and world travel...pls dont make MC an idiot that travels worlds to collect women...try make a story....also MC has too much powers...combine them to make one or two godlike OP powers..easier than remembering hundreds of powers....world travel but a few years before cannon..ie: One piece but travels much earlier than luffy....add some romance and fluff but do build it...no retarded perverted MC...if harem keep it small....goodluck and goodshow
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This Work is boring without character description. It is very dry and the MC is annoying, he trains decades in different worlds and did not change and we don't know about him much.
DOPE..OP MC....and world travel...pls dont make MC an idiot that travels worlds to collect women...try make a story....also MC has too much powers...combine them to make one or two godlike OP powers..easier than remembering hundreds of powers....world travel but a few years before cannon..ie: One piece but travels much earlier than luffy....add some romance and fluff but do build it...no retarded perverted MC...if harem keep it small....goodluck and goodshow
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This Work is boring without character description. It is very dry and the MC is annoying, he trains decades in different worlds and did not change and we don't know about him much.