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an amazing story with an interesting premise. I'm kinda sad the author hasn't updated it in over a year, but hopefully they'll come back and give us even more lol
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Was this book dropped or will it begin releasing chapters again soon? jdjdjdjrjrjrjhehhej
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Was a good manga on the original site. He even goes back and fights against the doctor who turned his arm into a slime eventually. Don't think original was in English though.
Fantastic, this is actually written incredibly well, no Grammer errors and the author has a bigger vocabulary than me. I haven't laughed so hard reading a book in a long while, the author's humor is fantastic and I can't wait for more. But looks like there hasn't been an upload in 3months.
One of the better stories. Sad that they only have a small part of the whole thing here. Fighting the evil guild, warding off elves due to misunderstandings, dealing with the undead, creating enlightened slimes and slime people (girl), and more. There was a full-color version at one point, either a manga or webtoon. The title ISN'T the one listed on this version of the book however..
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Its lit my dude, definitely worth the read and it's literally the best book I've ever read! I love all the bs and effort that goes into the book. It's like a love child between eastern novels, western dark humor, and my favorite low level mob all neatly blended together into an addiction I should probs get checked out. #Halfi4DaWin #RekSh1t ❤❤❤❤ 4 u my dude
Love this story,well done. Nice grammar and character building. It is rare to that on webnovel. I hope you it doesn't become a harem. Anyway I hope to see new chapters soon.
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Interesting story. Takes a trust of reborn as monster/ transmigration to another world to a new level and makes it unique. Looking forward to this stories future. So far so good.
Good story. Look forward to more keep at it Need more characters to post this comment so random random random etc ummm blaaah blaaah blaah stuff
It makes me sad there are "not enough ratings" if its a fucking 5.0 rating. So pls let it showcase how good it is....................................
i like harems!, too many haters of harems Even so I like novels without harem, I like novels in general if you take the plot well (not that kind of plot that you are thinking XD) Anyway author writes what you like and I WILL ENJOY IT IF I LIKE THANKS!........
The world is a mix of cultivation and fantasy elements. System and cultivation, who doesn't like them, the author has used the System as a good input in the cultivation system. In this world the mc is not the only one with the system, the system does not make anyone op, it just makes all standard. The MC is only a human who took advantage of the early bonuses, becoming a bit stronger than all others. He constantly works hard to become stronger and is not exactly a weak-a*s, as he uses his wits to survive more, different from many MC that rely on Luck and power eruptions to survive, this one at least tries. And the part about the half-slime half-man status of his, it is shown that some de merits have been applied to him instead of just merits.
Shameless 5 star from the author here. I hope you all enjoy! Shameless 5 star from the author here. I hope you all enjoy! Shameless 5 star from the author here. I hope you all enjoy! Shameless 5 star from the author here. I hope you all enjoy!
This book it’s pretty good I like the cultivation and how the mc is part beast which makes it even more ineteresting I have been looking for novels with systems and fantasy worlds like this
I really love this book, when I first saw it I thought it was book written by some famous author but it was actually you 😂 anyway don't stop this work it will be really fantastic story 👌👌
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
an amazing story with an interesting premise. I'm kinda sad the author hasn't updated it in over a year, but hopefully they'll come back and give us even more lol
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Was this book dropped or will it begin releasing chapters again soon? jdjdjdjrjrjrjhehhej
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
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Was a good manga on the original site. He even goes back and fights against the doctor who turned his arm into a slime eventually. Don't think original was in English though.
Fantastic, this is actually written incredibly well, no Grammer errors and the author has a bigger vocabulary than me. I haven't laughed so hard reading a book in a long while, the author's humor is fantastic and I can't wait for more. But looks like there hasn't been an upload in 3months.
One of the better stories. Sad that they only have a small part of the whole thing here. Fighting the evil guild, warding off elves due to misunderstandings, dealing with the undead, creating enlightened slimes and slime people (girl), and more. There was a full-color version at one point, either a manga or webtoon. The title ISN'T the one listed on this version of the book however..
Spoiler de révélation Its lit my dude, definitely worth the read and it's literally the best book I've ever read! I love all the bs and effort that goes into the book. It's like a love child between eastern novels, western dark humor, and my favorite low level mob all neatly blended together into an addiction I should probs get checked out. #Halfi4DaWin #RekSh1t ❤❤❤❤ 4 u my dude
Love this story,well done. Nice grammar and character building. It is rare to that on webnovel. I hope you it doesn't become a harem. Anyway I hope to see new chapters soon.
👍 Great story aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Interesting story. Takes a trust of reborn as monster/ transmigration to another world to a new level and makes it unique. Looking forward to this stories future. So far so good.
Good story. Look forward to more keep at it Need more characters to post this comment so random random random etc ummm blaaah blaaah blaah stuff
It makes me sad there are "not enough ratings" if its a fucking 5.0 rating. So pls let it showcase how good it is....................................
i like harems!, too many haters of harems Even so I like novels without harem, I like novels in general if you take the plot well (not that kind of plot that you are thinking XD) Anyway author writes what you like and I WILL ENJOY IT IF I LIKE THANKS!........
The world is a mix of cultivation and fantasy elements. System and cultivation, who doesn't like them, the author has used the System as a good input in the cultivation system. In this world the mc is not the only one with the system, the system does not make anyone op, it just makes all standard. The MC is only a human who took advantage of the early bonuses, becoming a bit stronger than all others. He constantly works hard to become stronger and is not exactly a weak-a*s, as he uses his wits to survive more, different from many MC that rely on Luck and power eruptions to survive, this one at least tries. And the part about the half-slime half-man status of his, it is shown that some de merits have been applied to him instead of just merits.
Shameless 5 star from the author here. I hope you all enjoy! Shameless 5 star from the author here. I hope you all enjoy! Shameless 5 star from the author here. I hope you all enjoy! Shameless 5 star from the author here. I hope you all enjoy!
This book it’s pretty good I like the cultivation and how the mc is part beast which makes it even more ineteresting I have been looking for novels with systems and fantasy worlds like this
I really love this book, when I first saw it I thought it was book written by some famous author but it was actually you 😂 anyway don't stop this work it will be really fantastic story 👌👌
Good 👍 great👍 amazing👍 incredible 👍 Good 👍 great👍 amazing👍 incredible 👍 Good 👍 great👍 amazing👍 incredible 👍 Good 👍 great👍 amazing👍 incredible 👍
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?