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Top of the Heap

Realistic 6 Chapitres 88.0K Affichage
Auteur: rionki

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Follow Ethan on his path to success as he receives a second chance at life.

A story about an overweight parttime worker who gets another shot at life and vows to live life to the fullest.

Wealth, Women, Power - He will take it all

No One 17 and Under Admitted

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>15 000 mots\nnécessaires pour le\nclassement.

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rlrl92
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Read the first 3 chapters so far so i cant say too much yet. Theme of course isn't anything new but its pretty interesting so far. Will judge again after more chapters are released.

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kley0020

It is possible that novels of this style have already been seen, but so far the 6 chapters I read really entertained me, I even want more. I hope to see a good character development. And according to the labels that will have + 18, I recommend that the author read the complex of pure insult pure love, one of the novels that I think has the best sex scenes, also that in this novel each character is well written and developed

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Auteur rionki