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Nananananana Batman~ Now really, those 1 star review from a LV1 account without stating anything say a lot about them… This is a good fic that don’t follow canon in anyway posible and that what I normally search on a fanfic, if you are here only to look stupid without stating anythin, better go to the original source and suck on canon and Rachel 😂
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The best thing about this piece is that it doesn't have a sequel. I'm sorry to all those who thought for 11 chapters that this was another masterpiece of fanfiction, and then it turned out that MS was trash.
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mc here is a background character that somehow get to comment to reader about what's happening...
good but man you did my boi bam dirty 😭😭😭 you could have made him as mc bestofreind 😭😭😭😭
Stop trying hard to give a review, the author is dead if you read all the author notes of the few lastest chapter you will know why... Dont put or make excuses in ur review about not explaining things like: ¿why a ranker is attacking someone and not being punished by the guardian of the floor? If you read the story slowly and carefully it gets explained in its own, like in the workshop, they can do whatever they want there its out of the guardian floor rules...
Writing Quality: Make no mistake, this is a generic wish-fulfillment fanfic so don't expect anything crazy going in. At the beginning, the grammar is horrible but it does improve later on. Dialogue is ok, doesn't really improve later on but it doesn't need to. Overall writing was okay but after the Lumen's (MC) "death", it started devolving pretty quickly. Lumen (MC): The author establishes the main character as an assassin before he was sent to the world of Tower Of God, probably for him to have a cold demeanor and not be phased by killing others in the Tower which is fine but Lumen, at the start anyway, acted like he was a mix of two characters. One the cold/dark killer MC the author wanted and two a friendly and cocky high schooler. I didn't really mind it, but after his "death" Lumen went full on edgy arrogant chunni mode which made the fanfic turn into a mess really. Story Development: A lot of the shit doesn't make sense. The fanfic is really inconsistent with how the world of Tower of God actually works, mainly the rules of the tower. The floor guardians are the ones who enforce the rules so when one of the rules is "rankers can't directly interfere with regulars in the tower" you can't have the MC just start fighting Rankers left and right. There are some plot holes too, like Lumen telling Yuri he didn't have her contact info when it was said they exchanged contact info, Lumen at the start was very skeptical about Baam's "death" that he theorized Baam being threatened by FUG into working for them but then somehow forgets and says he might kill him even after he talked to Jinsung and should have confirmed his theory, etc. World Background: With the amount of timeskips in ToG and how many floors get glossed over, that leaves fanfic authors with a lot of creative freedom. The highlight of the fanfic is probably how well the author can easily create and bring floors that haven't been explored in the official work to life. Characters: I really liked how most of the characters are portrayed by the author. Even his own original characters like Tiana and Diana are well written, almost every single character are in line with how they are in the manhwa. However, there are some characters that are OOC like Anak, in my opinion I think there's no way in hell Anak would think of Lumen like a brother, she might respect (hell even admire) him but Anak would no way treat someone like that just from being beaten by them and then getting trained by them. Also Urek is so OOC he might as well be an OC because holy **** did the author mess his character up. FUG is fucking joke in this fanfic, they may as well be called Team Rocket. Urek supposedly killed 2 slayers and one elder but since there are 4 vacant seats of the 11 slayers, who did Urek kill? It can't be Karaka or Yama because they get talked about afterwards (Yama) or show up (Karaka). The other 5 are sleeping and/or have unknown whereabouts (according to Baam) even if it was two of the other 5 they are probably either from the 2nd gen demons or are one of the ancient gods meaning Urek can't just "rip them to pieces" especially with an elder being with them. Overall: It's an ok read. I'm dropping it but that doesn't mean that potential readers should, give it a chance maybe you'll like it more than I did. Writing fanfics on series like ToG and One Piece is difficult because how amazing the official work is, I feel like the author has a good idea here but executed it poorly. If the Author decides to rewrite this fanfic, I will definitely give it a read though. Rating: 3-4/10
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It's a shame this fanfic hasn't been updated in 8 months, there are so little fanfics about tower of god so i was hoping this would change that
I hope you update soon.The story was quite interesting :) Writing Quality 4 Stability of Updates 1 Story Development 4 Character Design 4 World Background
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A truly enjoyable read. Character development was amazing, the usage and changes made complemented the world background chosen well. The pacing was nice and smooth while slow enough ti feel that its an actual journey instead of an elevator. I relly look forward to more. Hope the author co.es back soon its already been 2 months.
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Amazing. All caught up! Take care author-san! Good story telling. I like the different take on the characters. I wish there are more chapters! I cannot wait for more.
This was good until his devil fruit become useless in 15 chapter... In 15 chapter mc needs to learn the power use in the tower to be strong, so I am wondering why is the point of the devil fruit anyway.. could have just made an story about a normal assassin getting into the tower learn power use in tower and be strong.. wasting the devil fruit full potential in some bs too make mc look weak for him to learn move use in the tower...
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I've been in love with the world of Tower of God ever since I started reading it a few years ago. And while my enthusiasm for the original series has dwindled, due to the direction SIU started taking the series after the first timeskip, the world of the Tower of God series is still one of my favorite ones. So I am really glad I found this well written, surprisingly fun fanfiction set on that world. And the occasional lemons don't hurt either. :)
GunnerRunner can u tell me his personality like is he a pussy someone who is a psycho who just kill for fun and no reason with restraint or just like lookin a pretty girls ass and be like your my harem now or stupid and can’t do **** right
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Love the story, he knows when he is out matches so he won’t try anything crazy. Once he is strong enough he’ll take Loki down in the future, no worries. He does have the god (author) of this world watching his back so he can surmount anyone in due time. Nice work and don’t drop it!!!
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update more of its chapter its been so long at least reach till 150 or 200 chapters
Nananananana Batman~ Now really, those 1 star review from a LV1 account without stating anything say a lot about them… This is a good fic that don’t follow canon in anyway posible and that what I normally search on a fanfic, if you are here only to look stupid without stating anythin, better go to the original source and suck on canon and Rachel 😂
Spoiler de révélation The best thing about this piece is that it doesn't have a sequel. I'm sorry to all those who thought for 11 chapters that this was another masterpiece of fanfiction, and then it turned out that MS was trash.
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mc here is a background character that somehow get to comment to reader about what's happening...
good but man you did my boi bam dirty 😭😭😭 you could have made him as mc bestofreind 😭😭😭😭
Stop trying hard to give a review, the author is dead if you read all the author notes of the few lastest chapter you will know why... Dont put or make excuses in ur review about not explaining things like: ¿why a ranker is attacking someone and not being punished by the guardian of the floor? If you read the story slowly and carefully it gets explained in its own, like in the workshop, they can do whatever they want there its out of the guardian floor rules...
Writing Quality: Make no mistake, this is a generic wish-fulfillment fanfic so don't expect anything crazy going in. At the beginning, the grammar is horrible but it does improve later on. Dialogue is ok, doesn't really improve later on but it doesn't need to. Overall writing was okay but after the Lumen's (MC) "death", it started devolving pretty quickly. Lumen (MC): The author establishes the main character as an assassin before he was sent to the world of Tower Of God, probably for him to have a cold demeanor and not be phased by killing others in the Tower which is fine but Lumen, at the start anyway, acted like he was a mix of two characters. One the cold/dark killer MC the author wanted and two a friendly and cocky high schooler. I didn't really mind it, but after his "death" Lumen went full on edgy arrogant chunni mode which made the fanfic turn into a mess really. Story Development: A lot of the shit doesn't make sense. The fanfic is really inconsistent with how the world of Tower of God actually works, mainly the rules of the tower. The floor guardians are the ones who enforce the rules so when one of the rules is "rankers can't directly interfere with regulars in the tower" you can't have the MC just start fighting Rankers left and right. There are some plot holes too, like Lumen telling Yuri he didn't have her contact info when it was said they exchanged contact info, Lumen at the start was very skeptical about Baam's "death" that he theorized Baam being threatened by FUG into working for them but then somehow forgets and says he might kill him even after he talked to Jinsung and should have confirmed his theory, etc. World Background: With the amount of timeskips in ToG and how many floors get glossed over, that leaves fanfic authors with a lot of creative freedom. The highlight of the fanfic is probably how well the author can easily create and bring floors that haven't been explored in the official work to life. Characters: I really liked how most of the characters are portrayed by the author. Even his own original characters like Tiana and Diana are well written, almost every single character are in line with how they are in the manhwa. However, there are some characters that are OOC like Anak, in my opinion I think there's no way in hell Anak would think of Lumen like a brother, she might respect (hell even admire) him but Anak would no way treat someone like that just from being beaten by them and then getting trained by them. Also Urek is so OOC he might as well be an OC because holy **** did the author mess his character up. FUG is fucking joke in this fanfic, they may as well be called Team Rocket. Urek supposedly killed 2 slayers and one elder but since there are 4 vacant seats of the 11 slayers, who did Urek kill? It can't be Karaka or Yama because they get talked about afterwards (Yama) or show up (Karaka). The other 5 are sleeping and/or have unknown whereabouts (according to Baam) even if it was two of the other 5 they are probably either from the 2nd gen demons or are one of the ancient gods meaning Urek can't just "rip them to pieces" especially with an elder being with them. Overall: It's an ok read. I'm dropping it but that doesn't mean that potential readers should, give it a chance maybe you'll like it more than I did. Writing fanfics on series like ToG and One Piece is difficult because how amazing the official work is, I feel like the author has a good idea here but executed it poorly. If the Author decides to rewrite this fanfic, I will definitely give it a read though. Rating: 3-4/10
Spoiler de révélation It's a shame this fanfic hasn't been updated in 8 months, there are so little fanfics about tower of god so i was hoping this would change that
I hope you update soon.The story was quite interesting :) Writing Quality 4 Stability of Updates 1 Story Development 4 Character Design 4 World Background
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Spoiler de révélation A truly enjoyable read. Character development was amazing, the usage and changes made complemented the world background chosen well. The pacing was nice and smooth while slow enough ti feel that its an actual journey instead of an elevator. I relly look forward to more. Hope the author co.es back soon its already been 2 months.
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Amazing. All caught up! Take care author-san! Good story telling. I like the different take on the characters. I wish there are more chapters! I cannot wait for more.
This was good until his devil fruit become useless in 15 chapter... In 15 chapter mc needs to learn the power use in the tower to be strong, so I am wondering why is the point of the devil fruit anyway.. could have just made an story about a normal assassin getting into the tower learn power use in tower and be strong.. wasting the devil fruit full potential in some bs too make mc look weak for him to learn move use in the tower...
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I've been in love with the world of Tower of God ever since I started reading it a few years ago. And while my enthusiasm for the original series has dwindled, due to the direction SIU started taking the series after the first timeskip, the world of the Tower of God series is still one of my favorite ones. So I am really glad I found this well written, surprisingly fun fanfiction set on that world. And the occasional lemons don't hurt either. :)
GunnerRunner can u tell me his personality like is he a pussy someone who is a psycho who just kill for fun and no reason with restraint or just like lookin a pretty girls ass and be like your my harem now or stupid and can’t do **** right
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Love the story, he knows when he is out matches so he won’t try anything crazy. Once he is strong enough he’ll take Loki down in the future, no worries. He does have the god (author) of this world watching his back so he can surmount anyone in due time. Nice work and don’t drop it!!!
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update more of its chapter its been so long at least reach till 150 or 200 chapters