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What an surprising start... Seems she has a stonehearted mother. Did she finally agree to the arranged marriage? What will happen next? Please do update soonest
She said her marriage to me was just a contract, and that she doesn't want anything else. But why did she climb to my bed last night? Yes I remember, I remembered everything... She begged me, and I stupidly obliged. What spell had she cast on me? Because lately I can't seem to refuse her, even though she is my wife's twin sister. I feel like a traitor, and what is a man that can't keep his word?
It Starts out really good. Good chapter, except the writter has not updated in 10 months. I don’t think this story will ever be finished. I didn’t read the comments before reading the first chapter. I really wanted to know how the story would play out.
What an surprising start... Seems she has a stonehearted mother. Did she finally agree to the arranged marriage? What will happen next? Please do update soonest
She said her marriage to me was just a contract, and that she doesn't want anything else. But why did she climb to my bed last night? Yes I remember, I remembered everything... She begged me, and I stupidly obliged. What spell had she cast on me? Because lately I can't seem to refuse her, even though she is my wife's twin sister. I feel like a traitor, and what is a man that can't keep his word?
It Starts out really good. Good chapter, except the writter has not updated in 10 months. I don’t think this story will ever be finished. I didn’t read the comments before reading the first chapter. I really wanted to know how the story would play out.