A Magical Destination

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Dao_of_Balance

You better keep writing this book or else I’m gonna have to dust off my guns. Then have you and them meet at your door. I’ll be watching you. 👁👁👁👁👁👁 Don’t make me use my extra cash to track you down. (J.K. 👅👅👅👅👅👅 OR AM I *dun**duuuun* duuuuuuuun* 👹👹👹

LV 5

Kyur0

Good story, hope you continue writing it! Nothing else to say........... Damn the 140 characters limit, it's spoiling the review section.

LV 5

TheImmortal

An excellent novel... Just remember that child **** will get the novel deleted so don't go into that area.. 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😅🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏

LV 13

LordSputnik

Honest Review Wow! Talk about finding a hidden gem! The Good: Writing quality is outstanding! Hard to believe this is the author's first novel! The system is easy to understand and giving it hard limits like that adds to the amount of creativity needed to bring out the MCs power. The amount of details added to... everything... really helps keep the story alive, just be careful about going overboard with the descriptions sometimes. The Bad: Really hard to find the bad in this one, maybe just the chapters are a little shorter than expected causing immersion to break. I personally don't like that everything seems to go the MCs way, but I also understand that it was designed that way. The Neutral: Same as before, not a fan of everything going the MCs way, so I am not going to take off for that. Also wish the chapters were a tad longer, I guess I just consider about 1500 words a minimum.

LV 11

Liaxk

How I stumped into this amazing gem is something I’ve been looking for for ages the writing is amazing and I think this book has a lot of potential keep it up👌

LV 14

Superlazysister

Harem ftw👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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WebnovelSL1

Im crying at how good this book is it’s simple exciting amazing and everything in between the book Captivates you to read so much thx don’t drop

LV 5

RandomIsGood

I like everything about this novel except for Laura and the queen. I just don't like how clingy she is and the queen is ok for now but I just don't like Laura she's so annoying. I really REALLY hope that Laura doesn't become tge main female lead

LV 5

NewManagement

Story seems very interesting so far. So far there are quite a few blah blah moments where the author repeatedly beats home the same point making it easy to skip nearly an entire chapter and not miss anything. The interaction between characters seems to be missing a little as the MC is an old wise guy(read past 3chapters). Other than those issues I look forward to seeing what comes next.

LV 3

world0first

this novel is for those high-class readers writed by a godly autor who claime beeing the first work for him LIKE HELL THAT WOLD BE RIGHT you know your skills is good. really good but the only probleme i can find is your over detailed descreption

LV 5

Stronda

Great Story. Keep up with the great work :):):):) ................................................................................... .

LV 15

SLYWIN2

THE TRANSLLATION IS EXCELLENT(WRITING QUALITY GREAT), STORY DEVELOPMENT IS DEEP AND PROFOUND,SAME FOR CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND WORLD BACKGROUND. STABILITY UPDATES ARE A PROBLEM. WILL BE WILLING TO GIFT STORY MORE IF CHAPTER UPDATES ARE INCREASED TO 2 A DAY. HAVE ALREADY GIFTED STORY OVER 300 COINS.

LV 3

ShieldBro99

Awesomely written, steady world introduction, great characters and wonderful plot and development. Keep writing author! Supporting this! Added to library.

LV 3

Chuchububu

I love how this story is written, the details and the way they were implemented were amazing, the plot is great and i really like this story

LV 12

85jack

I was really looking forward to it after the first few chapters had a good thing going but just had to make him op out of no were I get obtaining strength/items or skills I mean that's life its not really a cliché but dang he got the whole pie looks, experience, gifts I bet he's really smart in every subject after chapter 10, Jack of all trades and master of all is just lazy in my opinion but shows to be still enjoyable if you don't expect much of a challenge in any scenario and an opt out of any situation.

LV 6

TianLei

Enjoyable reading but there has not been an update since Dec 2, 2019 so you may not want to pick up this novel. But I will track it for a while to see if more updates come.

LV 15

TidusZastian83

This is an interesting story. The path the MC walks will be filled with danger and adventures that appears not only to effect himself but the entire world he now finds himself in. Butterfly wings.

LV 15

kingdomkings

Hey when are new chapters coming I like the book but it says that the last time you add a new chapter was a month ago I hope there are new chapters thanks and keep up the good work with this