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ceritanya bagus, menarik dan buat penasaran bagaimana kelanjutan ceritanya,. sangat suka dengan interaksi male and female leadnya,. semoga happy ending
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Spoiler de révélation
suka banget dengan jalan ceritanya, meskipun kata2 nya sering ada kesalahan dalam pengetikan so far pembaca masi bisa memahaminya. meskipun belum sampe selesai bacanya, berhara happy ending untuk yohan dan tiara😁😁
Mari mulai membaca lagi...sudah kangen baca dan kita lanjutkan lagi...semangat untuk thor buat updatenya juga ya....supaya sy juga semangat bacanya
Bagusss ,, bikin para pembaca baper, serasa ikut dalam dunianyaa. Lanjutkan author . ........,.................................................
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Spoiler de révélation
ceritanya bagus.. cowok x tegas ndak bertele2. saya suka saya suka semangat terus buat karya2 x. jgn banyak2 key x dong [img=update]
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Spoiler de révélation Semoga saja anak buah yohan bisa menangkap jonathan yang sedang berusaha kabur dari kejaran mereka sehingga jonathan dan tara dapat di hukum dan di buat kapok sama yohan karena telah membuat tiara celaka
ceritanya seru asyik penasaran dengan kelanjutannya karena untuk membuka kunci babnya susah
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Spoiler de révélation ceritanya bagus, menarik dan buat penasaran bagaimana kelanjutan ceritanya,. sangat suka dengan interaksi male and female leadnya,. semoga happy ending
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Spoiler de révélation suka banget dengan jalan ceritanya, meskipun kata2 nya sering ada kesalahan dalam pengetikan so far pembaca masi bisa memahaminya. meskipun belum sampe selesai bacanya, berhara happy ending untuk yohan dan tiara😁😁
Mari mulai membaca lagi...sudah kangen baca dan kita lanjutkan lagi...semangat untuk thor buat updatenya juga ya....supaya sy juga semangat bacanya
Bagusss ,, bikin para pembaca baper, serasa ikut dalam dunianyaa. Lanjutkan author . ........,.................................................
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Spoiler de révélation ceritanya bagus.. cowok x tegas ndak bertele2. saya suka saya suka semangat terus buat karya2 x. jgn banyak2 key x dong [img=update]
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Semoga saja jonthan memberi tahu semua kejahatan tara juga kehamilan tara yang mengandung anak nya agar han rui bisa bebas dari fitnahan tara dan membuat tara membayar semua perbuatan nya yang telah mencelakai tiara dan memfitnah han rui
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Spoiler de révélation Semoga saja anak buah yohan bisa menangkap jonathan yang sedang berusaha kabur dari kejaran mereka sehingga jonathan dan tara dapat di hukum dan di buat kapok sama yohan karena telah membuat tiara celaka
ceritanya seru asyik penasaran dengan kelanjutannya karena untuk membuka kunci babnya susah