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The idea seem fine and I hope the story goes well We got the fire elements control in our mc so if he's not smart enough to learn how to freeze water and walk on it then he's plain retarded and you should stop writing then and there btw
The writer hates his mc so much that the first thing the writer does is make the mc permanently handicaped ... then he dumps the mc in east blue where he is basically starving to death ... the handicap makes it so he cant run btw ...
The idea seem fine and I hope the story goes well We got the fire elements control in our mc so if he's not smart enough to learn how to freeze water and walk on it then he's plain retarded and you should stop writing then and there btw
The writer hates his mc so much that the first thing the writer does is make the mc permanently handicaped ... then he dumps the mc in east blue where he is basically starving to death ... the handicap makes it so he cant run btw ...