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I'm out of words. This really touch my heart deep inside me. It's plot keeps me focus to turn the next chapter with hope that everything will end up happily ever after. Congrats to the writer for this book. It's truely worth it to read it.
I have never liked the use of sexual assault as an entertainment plot point. this should of have a trigger warning. the use of SA in anything other than retelling of an actual event, by that person to me is disconcerting. I was having a hard time getting into the story, but after the SA I closed the book.
I really love this story but you delay in writing sometimes. Other than that your book is beyond amazing it's literally fantastic and exciting to read. This is one of the best books I have ever read.
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Really good read! Still seeing lots of grammar errors and still kinda hard to read. But I’m loving the story and the characters are well designed as well!
Really enjoying the story! However there is a lot of typos and incorrect word use which makes it alittle hard to read! Other than that great job, great read!
Thanks author nice story thumb up for you and more update from you on this book. Please more chapter because I can't wait to read more of this story.
The beginning of this book was good I was so hurt and saddened but all the things that she had went through. And I was on her side thinking the same thing name of the goddess where are you why did she have to go through all of this. It was crazy all a sudden she had to go through and then the last part I was done with her uncle and that was the most craziest I have no words to say about that. I wanted to rip his face off it was crazy.
This novel has a unique story line. I have read a lot of werewolf books and I enjoy how the characters in this book overcome so much together. The white wolf cleanses the souls of others <3
A very interesting story. Well thought out and arranged. The design of the characters, actions and activities is so good and lovely. The consistency in the chapters interconnecting and relating is great too. Nice one Author
Quite a few grammatical errors, but you get lost in the story and they don't bother you much. Such a spellbinding story that just sucks you deeper into it. Awesomeness ❤️
This book draws you into it . Makes you feel like you are there and you know what it’s like there[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Mistakes in writing added some confusions. Typing needs to be check. Overall a good story.Love the main characters they are wonderful. Waiting on the rest of stroy.
I 💓💓💓loved it...I can't wait untill the next chapter...it left me wanting more...hope it comes out soon...ill be waiting anxiously 😁😁💓💓
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A captivating story that keeps you on your toes. Characters that you will fall in love while watching them grow as situations arise and overcoming obstacles and challenges.
I love the story,every chapter keeps getting interesting, I love this particular wolf story.Carmyn is such a wonderful character in the story
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Great book it really gets you hooked.... But sadly enough the writer is a liar... No more chapters after she posts she isn't done and then went and put it in completion status... The book is literally completely unfinished and left at a horrible place.
Great book I would really love to get the rest of it to read I love this type of book and would love to be able to finish reading it the updates need to come faster
I was really interested in reading this story but there are so many mistakes in the writing itself that I can’t even make it through the first chapter.
In the beginning I wast sure if I was going to keep reading this story. But as I continued on I got lost and wanted to know her outcome. I will say that the story is good. I would work on your grammar and making sure to use correct vocabulary. Other than that. It’s good.
Im giving this book a 5 star for its amazing story....i so hate you author for making me cry all the time reading this (😂😂lol)....this story is so overwhelming that i had to have tissues beside me...i really felt her sadness, the burdens, the torments and was overjoyed for her resurrection...her finding her mate and releasing her powers gives justice for all the brutally she suffered...i am very lucky to have accidentally saw and read this book sypnosis for this is a worthwhile read for me....adding this to my library is never a waste of time....i am hoping for little buns to come...hope it'll be a triplets?!😂..it will be a handful BUT the castle will be lively...hope to read more from the Alpha king and Luna queen...hope to see more of her powers and pls continue updating...be safe author and your family...thank you for this good book😘😘
Was supper cute, felt a little like everything happened supper fast but over all I like it ...............................................thank you ...
In live with this story, so interesting n entertaining hell no I'm not leaving this story behind for anything never pleasee send in more🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Love the story so much, like every ups and downs and learing how to forgive the onw who wronged you. Just hope there will be update or ending chapter? Just a few more i think 😆 🥺🙏🏻
It is absolutely amazing. It is heartfelt and just makes you want to cry. I bawled my eyes out while reading this. I wish that humans had mates like werewolves do. Life would be better if we all find our true loves
It's just not my taste. Too angsty and the phase of the story is so slow, I wish the author did the beginning of the story better, the story has potential but the start of the story ruined it for me, it's disappointing. Well that's just me, don't take it personally.
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Awesome story!! Love it. Sorry the only reason I didn't give everything all 5 stars because there was a lot of misspelling. But other then that this story had me on edge the whole time. Thank you for this wonderful story.
Sobrang ganda nito, kaso kabagal lang mag update ng author pero okay lang.. Willing naman akong maghintay hahahahahahaha..Mahilig talaga.akk sa mga werewolf stories kaya..un lang
I had to go back and re read pages several times because of the fact that it was worded so poorly. There are so many grammatical errors that it's nearly impossible to read unless you're used to reading the writings of a 4 year old....
This was a fantastic story! I really enjoyed the character development and story progression. It was as beautiful as it was brutal. I don't cry to many books, but I definitely cried to this one.
I'm out of words. This really touch my heart deep inside me. It's plot keeps me focus to turn the next chapter with hope that everything will end up happily ever after. Congrats to the writer for this book. It's truely worth it to read it.
I have never liked the use of sexual assault as an entertainment plot point. this should of have a trigger warning. the use of SA in anything other than retelling of an actual event, by that person to me is disconcerting. I was having a hard time getting into the story, but after the SA I closed the book.
I really love this story but you delay in writing sometimes. Other than that your book is beyond amazing it's literally fantastic and exciting to read. This is one of the best books I have ever read.
Spoiler de révélation Really good read! Still seeing lots of grammar errors and still kinda hard to read. But I’m loving the story and the characters are well designed as well!
Really enjoying the story! However there is a lot of typos and incorrect word use which makes it alittle hard to read! Other than that great job, great read!
Thanks author nice story thumb up for you and more update from you on this book. Please more chapter because I can't wait to read more of this story.
The beginning of this book was good I was so hurt and saddened but all the things that she had went through. And I was on her side thinking the same thing name of the goddess where are you why did she have to go through all of this. It was crazy all a sudden she had to go through and then the last part I was done with her uncle and that was the most craziest I have no words to say about that. I wanted to rip his face off it was crazy.
This novel has a unique story line. I have read a lot of werewolf books and I enjoy how the characters in this book overcome so much together. The white wolf cleanses the souls of others <3
A very interesting story. Well thought out and arranged. The design of the characters, actions and activities is so good and lovely. The consistency in the chapters interconnecting and relating is great too. Nice one Author
Quite a few grammatical errors, but you get lost in the story and they don't bother you much. Such a spellbinding story that just sucks you deeper into it. Awesomeness ❤️
This book draws you into it . Makes you feel like you are there and you know what it’s like there[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Mistakes in writing added some confusions. Typing needs to be check. Overall a good story.Love the main characters they are wonderful. Waiting on the rest of stroy.
I 💓💓💓loved it...I can't wait untill the next chapter...it left me wanting more...hope it comes out soon...ill be waiting anxiously 😁😁💓💓
Spoiler de révélation A captivating story that keeps you on your toes. Characters that you will fall in love while watching them grow as situations arise and overcoming obstacles and challenges.
I love the story,every chapter keeps getting interesting, I love this particular wolf story.Carmyn is such a wonderful character in the story
Spoiler de révélation Great book it really gets you hooked.... But sadly enough the writer is a liar... No more chapters after she posts she isn't done and then went and put it in completion status... The book is literally completely unfinished and left at a horrible place.
Great book I would really love to get the rest of it to read I love this type of book and would love to be able to finish reading it the updates need to come faster
I was really interested in reading this story but there are so many mistakes in the writing itself that I can’t even make it through the first chapter.
In the beginning I wast sure if I was going to keep reading this story. But as I continued on I got lost and wanted to know her outcome. I will say that the story is good. I would work on your grammar and making sure to use correct vocabulary. Other than that. It’s good.
Im giving this book a 5 star for its amazing story....i so hate you author for making me cry all the time reading this (😂😂lol)....this story is so overwhelming that i had to have tissues beside me...i really felt her sadness, the burdens, the torments and was overjoyed for her resurrection...her finding her mate and releasing her powers gives justice for all the brutally she suffered...i am very lucky to have accidentally saw and read this book sypnosis for this is a worthwhile read for me....adding this to my library is never a waste of time....i am hoping for little buns to come...hope it'll be a triplets?!😂..it will be a handful BUT the castle will be lively...hope to read more from the Alpha king and Luna queen...hope to see more of her powers and pls continue updating...be safe author and your family...thank you for this good book😘😘
Was supper cute, felt a little like everything happened supper fast but over all I like it ...............................................thank you ...
In live with this story, so interesting n entertaining hell no I'm not leaving this story behind for anything never pleasee send in more🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Spoiler de révélation Love the story so much, like every ups and downs and learing how to forgive the onw who wronged you. Just hope there will be update or ending chapter? Just a few more i think 😆 🥺🙏🏻
It is absolutely amazing. It is heartfelt and just makes you want to cry. I bawled my eyes out while reading this. I wish that humans had mates like werewolves do. Life would be better if we all find our true loves
It's just not my taste. Too angsty and the phase of the story is so slow, I wish the author did the beginning of the story better, the story has potential but the start of the story ruined it for me, it's disappointing. Well that's just me, don't take it personally.
Spoiler de révélation Awesome story!! Love it. Sorry the only reason I didn't give everything all 5 stars because there was a lot of misspelling. But other then that this story had me on edge the whole time. Thank you for this wonderful story.
Sobrang ganda nito, kaso kabagal lang mag update ng author pero okay lang.. Willing naman akong maghintay hahahahahahaha..Mahilig talaga.akk sa mga werewolf stories kaya..un lang
I had to go back and re read pages several times because of the fact that it was worded so poorly. There are so many grammatical errors that it's nearly impossible to read unless you're used to reading the writings of a 4 year old....
This was a fantastic story! I really enjoyed the character development and story progression. It was as beautiful as it was brutal. I don't cry to many books, but I definitely cried to this one.