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When I first started reading this, I got hooked straight away, but now that I'm at chapter ten. I'm starting to realise some things. Some things in this are extremely unrealistic, to the point where it seems they were added in for the hell of it. I also find myself getting confused frequently. I have to re-read a lot of the chapters because I feel like I've missed something, or I'm not sure as to what's going on. The characters confuse me as well, because I read the first couple of chapters not really understanding who was who. But that might just be me. The writing is good, but there is definitely room for improvement.. The story is very very slow paced, and I haven't even seen the main character yet. That's fine, but it's difficult to keep hooked as I read more.
😆🌺😆🌺😆😆😻😻😻🌺😆🌺😻😆😆😆🌺😆😆👰🏾😆😻😆🌺😆🌺😆👰🏾😆😻 I love this book😃😃😆😍😃😍😍😆😍😆😃🌹🥰🌹🥰🌹😄🌹🌹😄🥰🌹😄😍😆😍😆😃😍😆😃😍
The characters are interesting, especially the background story of ‘x’. Can’t wait to read how everything unfolds. Thanks author! You did an awesome job pacing the story!
Storyline amazing! Author explains important facts in beginning of novel for readers to better understand the roles of each characters and their traits which was great! Characters growth and development is very well thought thru. Can't wait for next chapters as characters finally meet friend and true for!😀
So far so good........................................a little confusing but still good....................................going to read the full story tho
I absolutely love this story the characters are great though I am torn about how the relationship is between the alpha mom and their adopted son. I look forward to reading more and hopefully the relationship between them gets better.
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Alex ISI’s ISI’s di Izzy it di US it dry u say he do try it di it di it’s di it di US di it shh hush he so use idk use us di he sh it say ugh he say ur sh F sh
Hmm, thus far, I've only seen what would be found in description for the Omegaverse. I'll be pleased when the story with the characters show up. I also know that I'm willing to wait since most authors actually have lives elsewhere than here. :)
When I first started reading this, I got hooked straight away, but now that I'm at chapter ten. I'm starting to realise some things. Some things in this are extremely unrealistic, to the point where it seems they were added in for the hell of it. I also find myself getting confused frequently. I have to re-read a lot of the chapters because I feel like I've missed something, or I'm not sure as to what's going on. The characters confuse me as well, because I read the first couple of chapters not really understanding who was who. But that might just be me. The writing is good, but there is definitely room for improvement.. The story is very very slow paced, and I haven't even seen the main character yet. That's fine, but it's difficult to keep hooked as I read more.
😆🌺😆🌺😆😆😻😻😻🌺😆🌺😻😆😆😆🌺😆😆👰🏾😆😻😆🌺😆🌺😆👰🏾😆😻 I love this book😃😃😆😍😃😍😍😆😍😆😃🌹🥰🌹🥰🌹😄🌹🌹😄🥰🌹😄😍😆😍😆😃😍😆😃😍
The characters are interesting, especially the background story of ‘x’. Can’t wait to read how everything unfolds. Thanks author! You did an awesome job pacing the story!
Storyline amazing! Author explains important facts in beginning of novel for readers to better understand the roles of each characters and their traits which was great! Characters growth and development is very well thought thru. Can't wait for next chapters as characters finally meet friend and true for!😀
So far so good........................................a little confusing but still good....................................going to read the full story tho
I absolutely love this story the characters are great though I am torn about how the relationship is between the alpha mom and their adopted son. I look forward to reading more and hopefully the relationship between them gets better.
Spoiler de révélation Alex ISI’s ISI’s di Izzy it di US it dry u say he do try it di it di it’s di it di US di it shh hush he so use idk use us di he sh it say ugh he say ur sh F sh
Hmm, thus far, I've only seen what would be found in description for the Omegaverse. I'll be pleased when the story with the characters show up. I also know that I'm willing to wait since most authors actually have lives elsewhere than here. :)
is it dropped story???there are way too many unfinished books on this platform😢🥺😩