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its really nice book loved reading it each character was beatifully written and story buildup was also very good
One of the best story ever.i literally cried in the end because of ah hai and shi ai deaths 🥺😭😍
The story is awesome. Love how the characters developed their love to each other. Even the twist and turns of the plot will put one in the edge, The main characters life ends with them still together. The Author should work in the typo’s and spellings and the space key
I put 4 for writing quality because towards the end there were a lot of typos with words not being spaced. Did not affect me much, but I am a native English speaker. Otherwise the author creates great characters and backgrounds. Love this series.
The book was pertecto have enjoyed it immensly wow wow wow 2xthe author did not wanted 2 put the phn down the book had everything fun tears joy sadness and above true love
I do read daily recommendation stories only because I could obtain 200 points. There are some novels that you’ll easily forget and discard after obtaining points. But not this book! You will surely like this story. And you’ll better be ready to spend your coins or FP. Shi Hai childhood crush? But he kept on sticking with the girl! I believe it’s the ML great devotion of taking care of or FL. Love it!❤️❤️❤️❤️💜❤️❤️❤️❤️. Congrats to the author.
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I really liked the story. From the beginning of the novel it got me thrilled. Also the stability of the updates is great not to mention the story development.
This is one of the best book I've read!! Author let me tell you I like your writing skills the best. The storyline is not at all slow nor fast..it's just perfect! Thank you for the books..
I’ m not even half way yet and I cried already. This book is heart wrenching😭😍 I wonder what’s going to happened to Shi Ai in the future. I can’t wait.
a story of a childhood crush that turned into a forever love. had me crying like crazy at the end. I am glad someone found their knight in shining armor.
This is simply one of the best novels I've ever read on this platform .This story touched my heart on so many levels An orphaned little girl meets a grown up cold soldier and falls in love on first sight. They have their ups and downs until love melts the cold heart of Ah Hai and realizes that he is truly in love with the little. His mission in love is to love Shi Ai and keep her safe from all the dangers of this world. They loved each other till the end of their lives. I particularly liked the Cinderella wedding that they had. It shows that love really conquers all. I'm sad because Shia Ai dies at a young age because of her heart condition but she spent a lot of happy years with her beloved husband and had children along the way. I cried when she died but I guess it was not bad cos the husband was there every step of the way till their last breath. You are a talented writer, please keep the good work up. Loved this novel and read it over and over again ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Don’t want to spoil the reading pleasure of other readers ... but I am definitely brokenhearted 😞 the author was able to give justice and so much personality for the main characters but I cannot help but get affected with the bitter sweet ending 😭
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Amazing and fulfilling story. The characters building are awesome and fulfilling. The way you develop the characters building are awesome. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
love this story. i think it should be put into a drama series. the story flows and plots is well arranged that it made me become addicred to know more further to read
i have just read this story, love it that i was so attached to it. reading it chapter by chapter had indeed making my curiousity became deeper to know how it ends
I reLly like this novel I found it late And then for some reason it disappeared from my library I think i deleted by mistake when I was cleaning a little bit, but i highly recommend this novel, its good.
Loved the first book and loved the second. Beautiful story and really want to know more now of the last Long brother, Matt. Please author continue working on it!!!!
I really love this book, thank you for the time that the author expend, I will keep looking for more of your books i know i will enjoy them as well, keep up the good work.
Why they had to die... 😢😢😢 I am soooo heart broken author.... I love this couples form the typoons wife novel.. but they died.. i know they were happy with their lives.. they had each other... So dear author, thank you so much for this wonderful novel.... 🥰🧡💙❣️💕💌💝💘💖🤍🤎♥️😍😍😘😘😘😘
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I have completed the novel typoon's wife and i love it... Currently I am still ready this one.. so far i loved this novel... I wonder why not many people did not discove this gem... 🥰🥰🤍🤍🤎
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WOW😍❤️ I thoroughly enjoyed reading such an awesome piece of work💖❤️ Just like Shi Ai saw only kindness in Long Ah Hai (despite his darkness), I could only see the most lovable and heartfelt romantic love story😘😘😘😘😘 I couldn't control my tears while reading the epilogue!💔😭😭😭😭 I love ur work author!💐❤️👍 Kindly get an editor😉
This novel was so interesting and twisted. I love the male lead and female lead so much. None of the chapters are boring. Every chapter got you wanting to read what’s going to happen next.
its really nice book loved reading it each character was beatifully written and story buildup was also very good
One of the best story ever.i literally cried in the end because of ah hai and shi ai deaths 🥺😭😍
The story is awesome. Love how the characters developed their love to each other. Even the twist and turns of the plot will put one in the edge, The main characters life ends with them still together. The Author should work in the typo’s and spellings and the space key
I put 4 for writing quality because towards the end there were a lot of typos with words not being spaced. Did not affect me much, but I am a native English speaker. Otherwise the author creates great characters and backgrounds. Love this series.
The book was pertecto have enjoyed it immensly wow wow wow 2xthe author did not wanted 2 put the phn down the book had everything fun tears joy sadness and above true love
I do read daily recommendation stories only because I could obtain 200 points. There are some novels that you’ll easily forget and discard after obtaining points. But not this book! You will surely like this story. And you’ll better be ready to spend your coins or FP. Shi Hai childhood crush? But he kept on sticking with the girl! I believe it’s the ML great devotion of taking care of or FL. Love it!❤️❤️❤️❤️💜❤️❤️❤️❤️. Congrats to the author.
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I really liked the story. From the beginning of the novel it got me thrilled. Also the stability of the updates is great not to mention the story development.
This is one of the best book I've read!! Author let me tell you I like your writing skills the best. The storyline is not at all slow nor fast..it's just perfect! Thank you for the books..
I’ m not even half way yet and I cried already. This book is heart wrenching😭😍 I wonder what’s going to happened to Shi Ai in the future. I can’t wait.
a story of a childhood crush that turned into a forever love. had me crying like crazy at the end. I am glad someone found their knight in shining armor.
This is simply one of the best novels I've ever read on this platform .This story touched my heart on so many levels An orphaned little girl meets a grown up cold soldier and falls in love on first sight. They have their ups and downs until love melts the cold heart of Ah Hai and realizes that he is truly in love with the little. His mission in love is to love Shi Ai and keep her safe from all the dangers of this world. They loved each other till the end of their lives. I particularly liked the Cinderella wedding that they had. It shows that love really conquers all. I'm sad because Shia Ai dies at a young age because of her heart condition but she spent a lot of happy years with her beloved husband and had children along the way. I cried when she died but I guess it was not bad cos the husband was there every step of the way till their last breath. You are a talented writer, please keep the good work up. Loved this novel and read it over and over again ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Don’t want to spoil the reading pleasure of other readers ... but I am definitely brokenhearted 😞 the author was able to give justice and so much personality for the main characters but I cannot help but get affected with the bitter sweet ending 😭
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Amazing and fulfilling story. The characters building are awesome and fulfilling. The way you develop the characters building are awesome. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
love this story. i think it should be put into a drama series. the story flows and plots is well arranged that it made me become addicred to know more further to read
i have just read this story, love it that i was so attached to it. reading it chapter by chapter had indeed making my curiousity became deeper to know how it ends
I reLly like this novel I found it late And then for some reason it disappeared from my library I think i deleted by mistake when I was cleaning a little bit, but i highly recommend this novel, its good.
Loved the first book and loved the second. Beautiful story and really want to know more now of the last Long brother, Matt. Please author continue working on it!!!!
I really love this book, thank you for the time that the author expend, I will keep looking for more of your books i know i will enjoy them as well, keep up the good work.
Why they had to die... 😢😢😢 I am soooo heart broken author.... I love this couples form the typoons wife novel.. but they died.. i know they were happy with their lives.. they had each other... So dear author, thank you so much for this wonderful novel.... 🥰🧡💙❣️💕💌💝💘💖🤍🤎♥️😍😍😘😘😘😘
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I have completed the novel typoon's wife and i love it... Currently I am still ready this one.. so far i loved this novel... I wonder why not many people did not discove this gem... 🥰🥰🤍🤍🤎
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WOW😍❤️ I thoroughly enjoyed reading such an awesome piece of work💖❤️ Just like Shi Ai saw only kindness in Long Ah Hai (despite his darkness), I could only see the most lovable and heartfelt romantic love story😘😘😘😘😘 I couldn't control my tears while reading the epilogue!💔😭😭😭😭 I love ur work author!💐❤️👍 Kindly get an editor😉
This novel was so interesting and twisted. I love the male lead and female lead so much. None of the chapters are boring. Every chapter got you wanting to read what’s going to happen next.