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come back don't leave us so don't abandon the novel the story is great you should continue it is one of the best stories i have read Please
Come back author....I am getting addicted to this story. This sadist mc is to my liking..let the hunt continue. pls don't abandon this story.[img=update]
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Noob i miss the book man You doing ke dIrty 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
The author suddenly stopped writing the story. Too bad cause this is a great novel. I'll just wait until the author update this again. Whish that your healthy mr. author
Wonderful story!! Does anyone know any story like this? -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
the best quality of this novel is the relationship between the wifes and mc coupled with mc's unique dynamic dark but passionate personality, second best is the unpredictable plot shrouded in mistery , third best is the unique take on cultivation, fourth is perfectly mixing these having a good proggression pace . also perfect grammar or at least not annoying because everything else is just too good to notice the problems, also author is not coward to write dark stuff
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This was great at the beginning really interesting start to the story(i always love a good death at the first episode)lol so he was intelligent in taking care of that spy bithc blair(yeah I hate her for being twofaced or just not a fan better girls than her are available for smut)but late it just turned into mindless smut like taking care of Dana's sister or bring a mad horny dog everywhere literally drooling I mean I can handle smut but when it comes to everyfucking gril be sees it's kinda too much no complaints otherwise except mc thinking about love a little too much and wasime time sleeping around I mean (I mean every his libido is unmatched like come on at this point he's not even taking in negative emotions anymore but thinking about love and whatnot I'm gonna drop for now but def gonna check later if it changes for the better plus dont include bitches like Blair into lovecircle when sweethearts like Dana who is useful as well as smut material are being abused by mc wtf brushes and better bitches than Blair are available font give me that first love nonsense plz also get mcs priorities straightened of l mad horny dog rowen ...................maybe it's not 100 percent accurate but this is my first thought put review
Really dark not for everyone. Very evil MC. . Great book. I wish it had more updates.
I started reading yesterday, so I’m still in the first 40 chapters, I’ll finish reading and then edit this review, but so far it’s not bad...
tbh ive never seen MC as physco and cold blooded as this guy. pretty ruthless. the author just has mad fetishes no cap and incorporates them into the writing..... which reflects in the work but im not hating..
Came back to see if its actually becomes better but nope...just pure stupid mc and a lot of bs that author is doing...**** this shit im out...
So I haven’t read this yet and I don’t wanna waste my time so can someone tell me smth. So tbh I idc if he kills people but I have issues with when he just kills innocent people of the fun of it so is he that kind of person or is he just I kill you if you get in my way sort of person.
One thing I find refreshing about this story is that, we read or watched a lot of ideas about a world with a demon lord as the 'villain', while the 'heroes' gang up together to defeat this 'evil'. Here, it's like the story of a demon lord's journey to becoming that 'evil' that needs 'vanquishing' by some self-righteous 'heroes'. Well, besides the point that it's an R-18 story, with some Incest. **: 22 chp when i wrote this 'review'.
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Super GOOD SHIT yeah the mc is so EVIL!! He kill, torture and more 😈😈 Goodjob author and Thank you VERY VERY MUCH to make this novel Love you author😘
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It is moving very fast as I say so it is a low demon from another world and also very sadistic can slow down at least a little and there is a *** scene in each episode it would be better to lower them a little bit.
Fix tags please a lot missing. Story is good, Author offers you Evil MC and you get Evil MC. When you read this you should keep morals hidden in high shelf. The story has good MC, story, world and characters. MC is smart, all this time only make 1 mistake, is acceptable. I read dumb MC novels make mistakes every 2 chapters. So no problem. It is a good novel and you should read it but beware R-18, rape alot, not sure about romance or comedy in this novel maybe later? (Chapter 113) He is a vampire but no use vampire powers? why? Anyway evil MC novel. Keep working on novel, it is different and good.
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Nice evil protag so far, keep it up 👍 PXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXOXPXXXXPXPXPXPXPXPXPPXPXPXPXPXXPPXXPXOPXPXXXOXOXOXOXOXOXPXPXOOOXOOXOXOPXPXXOXOXOXOXOXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPPXP
MC is really great at the first chapters and he is really Evil MC and intelligent Later Chapters, Author changed into dumb and each chapters he became dumber and dumber. Sigh. this is really good smut truth be told.
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This ruined me for other books! I have to use all my willpower to force myself to read, for the next few weeks, because nothing can compare to this masterpiece! I've read it twice now, and I intend to read it again and again and AGAIN, even if it's left on hiatus forever! The grammar is mediocre, admittedly, but that doesn't ruin the story in any way. The story develops to a satisfying pace, quite a fast one, I daresay. But that only serves to concentrate the yummy goodness of this book! The MC is like if Konrad(Profane Prince) or Hal(Rise of the Cosmic_emperor) if they were edgelords! And I mean that as a compliment; a most refreshing and visceral kind of evil, that doesn't pander to the average man's taste! As for the other characters, most of them are so interesting I'd love to them in person 😏! And they're wonderful complementary elements to the MC's powerful personality. The world background seems to be the weak point here, as it is not very well fleshed out, but it's very easy to infer how it all works, and you will see! It's not that important to begin with 😏 Overall, this story is incredibly unique through the lengths the author goes with his premise, while at the same time keeping it pleasant and enjoyable! In the end to try to give you a sense of what he's like, I leave you with the wisdom of Samsarawithwords: "He was the type that if you slapped him, he'd turn the other cheek, of your girlfriend to the side as he banged her."
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come back don't leave us so don't abandon the novel the story is great you should continue it is one of the best stories i have read Please
Come back author....I am getting addicted to this story. This sadist mc is to my liking..let the hunt continue. pls don't abandon this story.[img=update]
gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Noob i miss the book man You doing ke dIrty 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
The author suddenly stopped writing the story. Too bad cause this is a great novel. I'll just wait until the author update this again. Whish that your healthy mr. author
Wonderful story!! Does anyone know any story like this? -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
the best quality of this novel is the relationship between the wifes and mc coupled with mc's unique dynamic dark but passionate personality, second best is the unpredictable plot shrouded in mistery , third best is the unique take on cultivation, fourth is perfectly mixing these having a good proggression pace . also perfect grammar or at least not annoying because everything else is just too good to notice the problems, also author is not coward to write dark stuff
.......................................................................................................,........cool........................................................................
This was great at the beginning really interesting start to the story(i always love a good death at the first episode)lol so he was intelligent in taking care of that spy bithc blair(yeah I hate her for being twofaced or just not a fan better girls than her are available for smut)but late it just turned into mindless smut like taking care of Dana's sister or bring a mad horny dog everywhere literally drooling I mean I can handle smut but when it comes to everyfucking gril be sees it's kinda too much no complaints otherwise except mc thinking about love a little too much and wasime time sleeping around I mean (I mean every his libido is unmatched like come on at this point he's not even taking in negative emotions anymore but thinking about love and whatnot I'm gonna drop for now but def gonna check later if it changes for the better plus dont include bitches like Blair into lovecircle when sweethearts like Dana who is useful as well as smut material are being abused by mc wtf brushes and better bitches than Blair are available font give me that first love nonsense plz also get mcs priorities straightened of l mad horny dog rowen ...................maybe it's not 100 percent accurate but this is my first thought put review
Really dark not for everyone. Very evil MC. . Great book. I wish it had more updates.
I started reading yesterday, so I’m still in the first 40 chapters, I’ll finish reading and then edit this review, but so far it’s not bad...
tbh ive never seen MC as physco and cold blooded as this guy. pretty ruthless. the author just has mad fetishes no cap and incorporates them into the writing..... which reflects in the work but im not hating..
Came back to see if its actually becomes better but nope...just pure stupid mc and a lot of bs that author is doing...**** this shit im out...
So I haven’t read this yet and I don’t wanna waste my time so can someone tell me smth. So tbh I idc if he kills people but I have issues with when he just kills innocent people of the fun of it so is he that kind of person or is he just I kill you if you get in my way sort of person.
One thing I find refreshing about this story is that, we read or watched a lot of ideas about a world with a demon lord as the 'villain', while the 'heroes' gang up together to defeat this 'evil'. Here, it's like the story of a demon lord's journey to becoming that 'evil' that needs 'vanquishing' by some self-righteous 'heroes'. Well, besides the point that it's an R-18 story, with some Incest. **: 22 chp when i wrote this 'review'.
Spoiler de révélation Super GOOD SHIT yeah the mc is so EVIL!! He kill, torture and more 😈😈 Goodjob author and Thank you VERY VERY MUCH to make this novel Love you author😘
This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...This the Good shit...
smart goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooppppoood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooppppoood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooppppoood
It is moving very fast as I say so it is a low demon from another world and also very sadistic can slow down at least a little and there is a *** scene in each episode it would be better to lower them a little bit.
Fix tags please a lot missing. Story is good, Author offers you Evil MC and you get Evil MC. When you read this you should keep morals hidden in high shelf. The story has good MC, story, world and characters. MC is smart, all this time only make 1 mistake, is acceptable. I read dumb MC novels make mistakes every 2 chapters. So no problem. It is a good novel and you should read it but beware R-18, rape alot, not sure about romance or comedy in this novel maybe later? (Chapter 113) He is a vampire but no use vampire powers? why? Anyway evil MC novel. Keep working on novel, it is different and good.
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooppppoood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Nice evil protag so far, keep it up 👍 PXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXOXPXXXXPXPXPXPXPXPXPPXPXPXPXPXXPPXXPXOPXPXXXOXOXOXOXOXOXPXPXOOOXOOXOXOPXPXXOXOXOXOXOXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPPXP
MC is really great at the first chapters and he is really Evil MC and intelligent Later Chapters, Author changed into dumb and each chapters he became dumber and dumber. Sigh. this is really good smut truth be told.
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This ruined me for other books! I have to use all my willpower to force myself to read, for the next few weeks, because nothing can compare to this masterpiece! I've read it twice now, and I intend to read it again and again and AGAIN, even if it's left on hiatus forever! The grammar is mediocre, admittedly, but that doesn't ruin the story in any way. The story develops to a satisfying pace, quite a fast one, I daresay. But that only serves to concentrate the yummy goodness of this book! The MC is like if Konrad(Profane Prince) or Hal(Rise of the Cosmic_emperor) if they were edgelords! And I mean that as a compliment; a most refreshing and visceral kind of evil, that doesn't pander to the average man's taste! As for the other characters, most of them are so interesting I'd love to them in person 😏! And they're wonderful complementary elements to the MC's powerful personality. The world background seems to be the weak point here, as it is not very well fleshed out, but it's very easy to infer how it all works, and you will see! It's not that important to begin with 😏 Overall, this story is incredibly unique through the lengths the author goes with his premise, while at the same time keeping it pleasant and enjoyable! In the end to try to give you a sense of what he's like, I leave you with the wisdom of Samsarawithwords: "He was the type that if you slapped him, he'd turn the other cheek, of your girlfriend to the side as he banged her."