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Γcrire un avisLayla rulesπ I as a girl feel extra love towards novels with female leads. So I'm doing what I can to support those. For me reading this kind of like a message saying you can do it too, you can be successful too, you can be cool too. You can be everything you wnt as long as you try. I hope this novel became famous.....
First of all I love this novel.So let's get to the review. Writing Quality:βοΈI gave it four stars its nice and easy Story Development:βοΈAt first I thought it will be like any other novel out there but the development prove me wrong Character Design:βοΈI'd say not that advance but it has its own charm Updating Stability:βοΈ World Background:βοΈ anyone can see the world background no explanation needed.
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I super love this.And I'm sad that Layla died bit I guess she will come back or not? I wish she would come back to life. Rheminice please give Layla back to Drihn.
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Hi everyone author here, Do you want a cool female lead? An mc who has beauty and brains and special abilities. A powerful loyal husband And lastly two cute baobei's that will make you fall for their cuteness. If so come and read this!
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I don't have much to say and it can't be considered that much as a review but please proofread before you publish the chapters. It can give the readers a better reading experience
So I read someone's comment and I remember that I haven't posted a review on this novel yetπ. I don't have much to say and it can't be considered much as review but I have a suggestion to the author please proofread your novel it will be more amazing.
Hi author so I just wanted to say that I love your story and I'm waiting everyday for the update. I only gave 3 stars to updating stability because it's the major flaw of these novel. And I read the other reviews were all pretty much complaining about the updating time.
It's pretty fun to read the mc is nice and kind of cool. And that jealous man is so cute. I wish I had that kind of husband too. And if the update is more frequent I think it will be more popular.
This story is pretty nice and easy to understand.But there are some parts that I hate. I know that no story is perfect, no story can please all it's readers. So I'm not going to mention the flaws I found because I want other readers to judge afterall we have different preference for a novel. But what I'm most wishing to change is the update time. Please update more frequently.
Hello author I just want tell you that I really like your story its amazing. Please continue writing his novel and I also wanted to give you some tips to make the novel better firstly I want you to start getting your novel proof read cause your novel without any punctuations affect the reading experience of the readers and want you to add a picture to the novel Thank you :)
The first chapter hooks you in and the female lead is not like any other female leads out there.Just her outlook in life is unique. I love thisπ
Layla rulesπ I as a girl feel extra love towards novels with female leads. So I'm doing what I can to support those. For me reading this kind of like a message saying you can do it too, you can be successful too, you can be cool too. You can be everything you wnt as long as you try. I hope this novel became famous.....
First of all I love this novel.So let's get to the review. Writing Quality:βοΈI gave it four stars its nice and easy Story Development:βοΈAt first I thought it will be like any other novel out there but the development prove me wrong Character Design:βοΈI'd say not that advance but it has its own charm Updating Stability:βοΈ World Background:βοΈ anyone can see the world background no explanation needed.
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I super love this.And I'm sad that Layla died bit I guess she will come back or not? I wish she would come back to life. Rheminice please give Layla back to Drihn.
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Hi everyone author here, Do you want a cool female lead? An mc who has beauty and brains and special abilities. A powerful loyal husband And lastly two cute baobei's that will make you fall for their cuteness. If so come and read this!
I love it!β€πππππβ€πππππβ€πππππβ€πππππβ€πππππβ€πππππβ€πππππβ€πππππβ€πππππβ€πππππβ€πππππβ€πππππ
I don't have much to say and it can't be considered that much as a review but please proofread before you publish the chapters. It can give the readers a better reading experience
So I read someone's comment and I remember that I haven't posted a review on this novel yetπ. I don't have much to say and it can't be considered much as review but I have a suggestion to the author please proofread your novel it will be more amazing.
Hi author so I just wanted to say that I love your story and I'm waiting everyday for the update. I only gave 3 stars to updating stability because it's the major flaw of these novel. And I read the other reviews were all pretty much complaining about the updating time.
It's pretty fun to read the mc is nice and kind of cool. And that jealous man is so cute. I wish I had that kind of husband too. And if the update is more frequent I think it will be more popular.
This story is pretty nice and easy to understand.But there are some parts that I hate. I know that no story is perfect, no story can please all it's readers. So I'm not going to mention the flaws I found because I want other readers to judge afterall we have different preference for a novel. But what I'm most wishing to change is the update time. Please update more frequently.
Hello author I just want tell you that I really like your story its amazing. Please continue writing his novel and I also wanted to give you some tips to make the novel better firstly I want you to start getting your novel proof read cause your novel without any punctuations affect the reading experience of the readers and want you to add a picture to the novel Thank you :)
The first chapter hooks you in and the female lead is not like any other female leads out there.Just her outlook in life is unique. I love thisπ