Synopsis
One Night With Mr. Gorgeous
"I'm not going to marry you, Theo."
"And do you think I want to? Wala akong choice. Nanay ka ng anak ko."
Natameme si Arielle.
"Hindi ko hinihingi sa 'yo na maging asawa ka sa akin oras na makasal tayo, Arielle. If you're worried about making love to me, huwag kang mag-alala, hindi kita oobligahin. Hindi ko rin naman matandaan na ipinilit ko ang bagay na 'yan sa isang babae. I can always find myself a woman to take your place anyway."
Nag-init ang mukha ni Arielle sa inis. At sa ibang babae pala planong sumiping ng walanghiya at hindi sa kanya!
'Eh, kaninong kasalanan? 'Di ba ikaw naman 'tong nag-iinarte? 'Tapos, kapag naghanap siya ng ibang babaeng ikakama, maiinis ka.'
Ipinilig niya ang ulo. Ano ba ang nangyayari sa kanya? Bakit naman siya maiinis kung sakaling gawin nga ni Theo ang sinabi? Nagseselos ba siya? Pumapayag na ba siyang maging Mrs. Theo De Marco?
Of course not!
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Hi congratulations. I love the story of Theo and Arielle, though i've seen this scenario already in movies and other readings, still the story gives this kilig vibes to the readers. I suggest that try to be more creative in developing the story, use some imagery but not too much it might bore the readers, add some twist to make it longer because it was too short for a novel. Since you are writing it in tagalog and english, I think, no need for deep tagalog words, there are instances that I have to repeat the sentence thrice because I didnt get the meaning of what you are trying to say. I've seen potential on this story because you were able deliver the emotion of two lead character at the end. Sorry I'm not an expert, I just love reading. I hope you wont take this negatively. More power, looking forward for your upcoming works. Thank you 👍
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Volume 1
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- 2 Chapter Two 5 years ago
- 3 Chapter Three 5 years ago
- 4 Chapter Four 5 years ago
- 5 Chapter Five 5 years ago
- 6 Chapter Six 5 years ago
- 7 Chapter Seven 5 years ago
- 8 Chapter Eight 5 years ago
- 9 Chapter Nine 5 years ago
- 10 Chapter Ten 5 years ago
- 11 Chapter Eleven 5 years ago
- 12 Chapter Twelve 5 years ago
- 13 Chapter Thirteen 5 years ago
- 14 Chapter Fourteen 5 years ago
- 15 Chapter Fifteen 5 years ago
- 16 Chapter Sixteen 5 years ago
- 17 Author's Message 5 years ago
Ang ganda nang story nya I love it,,nakaka balik sa teenager,sobrang nagustuhan q to Sana ganito din mga stories dito bitin kc pag may stone pa,Sana watching ads nlng para success Ang magbabasa
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