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- Développement de l’histoire
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- Contexte du monde
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TIENE POTENCIAL ,TIENE POTENCIAL ........................................................................ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hey, I really liked this story, keep up the good work!
this has potential warn me when you want to write this. after you finish the current titles or just have a rest and forget this.........................