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The story is absolutely amazing, the writing quality is spectacular and there are no grammar issues that I could see, the character and story developement are also quite amazing and everything seems very natural, the updating sadly Mr.Moist hasn't updated anything for a year now and its truly a shame that he's gone, the world background is good as they explain everything clearly to the readers, the worst part of the story is the Nasuverse Holy Grail War as compared to the rest of the story is kinda weak, the romance with Wonder Woman could have been developed more and I especially like how he dealt with Supergirl ( Rejected her and still as of now rejecting her, like actually rejecting her not the anime bullshif where the chick keeps bothering him and the mc actually listens no the mc is adamant on rejecting her and completely stops her advances for him ) which barely gets done in fanfictions as the MCs usually are Pokemon catchers.
Welp, this was an amazing experience, you're an amazing author and I liked every single aspect of your story. Definitely one of the top notch fanfics out there, and if the story continues, it can truly develop into a master piece. Take it with patience and calm, when faced with writer's block, don't stop, go on harder than before, brainstorm and write abundant stuff even if you don't like what you're writing you now have the basis to mold you story. I sincerely want you to continue writing, fully knowing how much of burden that is. But please, I- no we need a proof of life, anything to bring hope back, are you still here.
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The intelligence (Almost nonexistent) of this MC and the forced encounters is a huge turnoff.
just don't read this its really stupid.....≥...................................................................................................................................
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This is one of the greatest fate crossovers I have ever seen, I hope I can see the end of this series..... Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue
I love the novel, it has an interesting take on dc with the mc's 'unique' powers. One of the reasons i think, (hope i'm wrong) author dropped this is because of the fate cross over thing. I had a good read, i even liked the rin cross over but then the holy grail war thing bummed me out. Just a suggestive criticism but maybe you should have done a doomsday or darseid arc instead of the fate arc where darkseid tries to take kara and the JL members can't beat him so the mc show's up and kicks his ass. 👍
this story is even faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrr far far better then any originals etc and its the bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbeeeeeeesssstttttttttt and hope to not drop but continue as it is
I would say that as a story it is a solid one but considering that it is dead is a reason to give it 1 star in updating but otherwise it is amazingly well put together.
Fantastic creation. Really hope for some lemon filled chapter once in a while. A soft one is fine. 66666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666
Really love how it's structured. Love the characters, I wish author will continue the book....................................................
please continue..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I am the exp of my sword. Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!
I miss reading new daily chapters of this novel. A pity the author decides to include the Holy Grail War through the plot attempting to create a 'Crossover' between DC and Nasuverse unnecessarily; When from the beginning, the novel was intended to be only a Self-insert in DC the author and lost the motivation to write more. The above information is all bull**** don't believe it.(lol)
Spoiler de révélation
Only One thing to say about this novel................ ..................................................................................................COOL!
Story stopped updating long ago, but for fanfiction this is a good read. The characters are well done, the story is interesting and the plot is some what weird but worth a try.
i really love this story. characters development is great, story is awesome...etc please continue writing
This is great mix of DC and fate. Love the pace and Grey's development... Tho since it's been forever since the last update... Was wondering if this was dropped?
Writer i do not know how to express myself when reading this novel all i can say this is one of the best novel that i have read compare to other novels and fanfics of Fate and i hope you keep up the good work and please if you can possible to make more chapters of this novel.I really hope you :)
Well constructed, not like most other novels who mix without logic. The mc has a decent outlook on life and is willing to kill unlike most other heroes of DC.Beware, this author uses lots of cliffhangers
mc tells everyone everything for no reason. tells people hes from another earth, that he was just a loser, and that all his powers come from souls not his own. lamest hero of the dc universe this novel should be called
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The story is absolutely amazing, the writing quality is spectacular and there are no grammar issues that I could see, the character and story developement are also quite amazing and everything seems very natural, the updating sadly Mr.Moist hasn't updated anything for a year now and its truly a shame that he's gone, the world background is good as they explain everything clearly to the readers, the worst part of the story is the Nasuverse Holy Grail War as compared to the rest of the story is kinda weak, the romance with Wonder Woman could have been developed more and I especially like how he dealt with Supergirl ( Rejected her and still as of now rejecting her, like actually rejecting her not the anime bullshif where the chick keeps bothering him and the mc actually listens no the mc is adamant on rejecting her and completely stops her advances for him ) which barely gets done in fanfictions as the MCs usually are Pokemon catchers.
Welp, this was an amazing experience, you're an amazing author and I liked every single aspect of your story. Definitely one of the top notch fanfics out there, and if the story continues, it can truly develop into a master piece. Take it with patience and calm, when faced with writer's block, don't stop, go on harder than before, brainstorm and write abundant stuff even if you don't like what you're writing you now have the basis to mold you story. I sincerely want you to continue writing, fully knowing how much of burden that is. But please, I- no we need a proof of life, anything to bring hope back, are you still here.
🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏more plzzz plz don't dropout plzzz......🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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The intelligence (Almost nonexistent) of this MC and the forced encounters is a huge turnoff.
just don't read this its really stupid.....≥...................................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélation This is one of the greatest fate crossovers I have ever seen, I hope I can see the end of this series..... Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue Plz continue
I love the novel, it has an interesting take on dc with the mc's 'unique' powers. One of the reasons i think, (hope i'm wrong) author dropped this is because of the fate cross over thing. I had a good read, i even liked the rin cross over but then the holy grail war thing bummed me out. Just a suggestive criticism but maybe you should have done a doomsday or darseid arc instead of the fate arc where darkseid tries to take kara and the JL members can't beat him so the mc show's up and kicks his ass. 👍
this story is even faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrr far far better then any originals etc and its the bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbeeeeeeesssstttttttttt and hope to not drop but continue as it is
I would say that as a story it is a solid one but considering that it is dead is a reason to give it 1 star in updating but otherwise it is amazingly well put together.
Fantastic creation. Really hope for some lemon filled chapter once in a while. A soft one is fine. 66666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666
Really love how it's structured. Love the characters, I wish author will continue the book....................................................
please continue..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I am the exp of my sword. Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!
I miss reading new daily chapters of this novel. A pity the author decides to include the Holy Grail War through the plot attempting to create a 'Crossover' between DC and Nasuverse unnecessarily; When from the beginning, the novel was intended to be only a Self-insert in DC the author and lost the motivation to write more. The above information is all bull**** don't believe it.(lol)
Spoiler de révélation Only One thing to say about this novel................ ..................................................................................................COOL!
Story stopped updating long ago, but for fanfiction this is a good read. The characters are well done, the story is interesting and the plot is some what weird but worth a try.
i really love this story. characters development is great, story is awesome...etc please continue writing
This is great mix of DC and fate. Love the pace and Grey's development... Tho since it's been forever since the last update... Was wondering if this was dropped?
Writer i do not know how to express myself when reading this novel all i can say this is one of the best novel that i have read compare to other novels and fanfics of Fate and i hope you keep up the good work and please if you can possible to make more chapters of this novel.I really hope you :)
Well constructed, not like most other novels who mix without logic. The mc has a decent outlook on life and is willing to kill unlike most other heroes of DC.Beware, this author uses lots of cliffhangers
mc tells everyone everything for no reason. tells people hes from another earth, that he was just a loser, and that all his powers come from souls not his own. lamest hero of the dc universe this novel should be called