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There aren't any FF of Duolu Dalu so far before canon so just that alone gets me to read it. Due to it being before canon, story is fresh from a different angle of the DD world. Just as a few misspelling errors that make u double back but grammar does not subtract from the reading experience. The MC's plot knowledge is useful, but not too useful cause none of it will happen and he is not Tang San OP either because of it. But one word, system. Another word, Gacha. Writing style is somewhat unique as he likes using flashbacks to explain things during lull periods to not subtraction from the plot. He abuses it a bit too much but there aren't walls of text explaining how his system works or the background of his kingdom. It is introduced in snippets instead through flashbacks. Good story so far, read it and u won't regret. Other than the void in ur soul you receive when the chapters end and u shout MOAR MOAR MOAR!
i have high hopes for this novel,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome More More More More More More Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome More More More More More More
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There aren't any FF of Duolu Dalu so far before canon so just that alone gets me to read it. Due to it being before canon, story is fresh from a different angle of the DD world. Just as a few misspelling errors that make u double back but grammar does not subtract from the reading experience. The MC's plot knowledge is useful, but not too useful cause none of it will happen and he is not Tang San OP either because of it. But one word, system. Another word, Gacha. Writing style is somewhat unique as he likes using flashbacks to explain things during lull periods to not subtraction from the plot. He abuses it a bit too much but there aren't walls of text explaining how his system works or the background of his kingdom. It is introduced in snippets instead through flashbacks. Good story so far, read it and u won't regret. Other than the void in ur soul you receive when the chapters end and u shout MOAR MOAR MOAR!
i have high hopes for this novel,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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