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Some editing would be nice. Would have kept reading but by chapter 3 I was more skimming the chapter. It has potential though so keep it up. Just remember to prof read.
So far, the story just keeps getting better. Was hard to have to stop reading. Now, going to have to wait to read more. It's gonna be hard to wait. But, I'll have to.
I like it the story has a good background it does have some grammar errors and it’s not that bad it shows really good story lines but it could be even stronger but a great story
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Some editing would be nice. Would have kept reading but by chapter 3 I was more skimming the chapter. It has potential though so keep it up. Just remember to prof read.
So far, the story just keeps getting better. Was hard to have to stop reading. Now, going to have to wait to read more. It's gonna be hard to wait. But, I'll have to.
I like it the story has a good background it does have some grammar errors and it’s not that bad it shows really good story lines but it could be even stronger but a great story
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