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I tried, I really tried, but this story is so confusing, sometimes chapters start in the middle of a conversation without knowing what happened before, missing information most of the time, the grammar is inconsistent, sometimes good, sometimes bad, and the plot? What plot? At least nothing so far and I can't continue.
Woah hidden gem alert this doesn’t get enough live I’m On my way! Though ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️💔
Am I supposed to read another story before this one cause I'm confused nothing's making any sense like why did the MC kill himself why did he promise to give that women a baby but then out of nowhere he suicides like dude comes in and try's to hug that woman then she ***** slaps him then the MC just kills himself like WTF
It’s a hidden 💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎, just a slow release so you should let it piled up
Spoiler de révélation
Honestly I got to chapter 8 and I dont blame the fanfic for this but DC is so confusing which means that this fan fic is confusing but problems i have with the fan fic itself and Not the DC universe would be these Cultivation level were not explained as of chapter 8 Reincarnation specifications were briefly mentioned but didnt go into too much detail Where MC gets his money is unknown if its his parents money then at leat say cause im just assuming thats how it is Some characters were introduced but never given backstory as to who they are I know a little about DC but even Someone who reads the comics probably needs at minimum a refresher on who these people are I like OP from the start MC but meh thats just my preference and not something bad from the novel cause some people like weak to strong more than Op from the start Idk about anyone Else but I just cant connect with Any of the side characters and forget who they are sometimes Soooooo that was my critisisim i perfer not leaving junk reviews like spamming “bad” over and over with one star so i decided to give some constructive criticsism idk if it will help In anyway but I at least tried 🤷♂️
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I tried, I really tried, but this story is so confusing, sometimes chapters start in the middle of a conversation without knowing what happened before, missing information most of the time, the grammar is inconsistent, sometimes good, sometimes bad, and the plot? What plot? At least nothing so far and I can't continue.
Woah hidden gem alert this doesn’t get enough live I’m On my way! Though ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️💔
Am I supposed to read another story before this one cause I'm confused nothing's making any sense like why did the MC kill himself why did he promise to give that women a baby but then out of nowhere he suicides like dude comes in and try's to hug that woman then she ***** slaps him then the MC just kills himself like WTF
It’s a hidden 💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎, just a slow release so you should let it piled up
Spoiler de révélation
Honestly I got to chapter 8 and I dont blame the fanfic for this but DC is so confusing which means that this fan fic is confusing but problems i have with the fan fic itself and Not the DC universe would be these Cultivation level were not explained as of chapter 8 Reincarnation specifications were briefly mentioned but didnt go into too much detail Where MC gets his money is unknown if its his parents money then at leat say cause im just assuming thats how it is Some characters were introduced but never given backstory as to who they are I know a little about DC but even Someone who reads the comics probably needs at minimum a refresher on who these people are I like OP from the start MC but meh thats just my preference and not something bad from the novel cause some people like weak to strong more than Op from the start Idk about anyone Else but I just cant connect with Any of the side characters and forget who they are sometimes Soooooo that was my critisisim i perfer not leaving junk reviews like spamming “bad” over and over with one star so i decided to give some constructive criticsism idk if it will help In anyway but I at least tried 🤷♂️